One Parody (You won't like it)

[ChristianNewbie123]

This is mostly how I'm feeling right now, and also partly what I'm afraid will happen, but am pretty sure will. Metallica's One.

Done

I Can't Desipher Anything
Can't Tell If this Is True or Dream
Deep down Inside I Feel to Scream
this Terrible Silence Stops Me
Now That the War Is Through in Me
All of God's love I Can Not See
Now There's Not Much Faith In Me
Nothing Is Real but Pain Now

Hold My Breath as I Wish for Bread
Oh Please God,help Me

Back in the Womb is Much Too Real
God's gift, joy I Can Not Feel
I Can't See God, but See The Sin
When is the Time When I'll Live?
Fed Through No Tube That Sticks in Me
Much like a Short Time Novelty
Is it that God Won't Cling With Me?
Cut This Strife off From Me!

Hold My Breath as I Wish for Bread
Oh Please God,help Me

Now my Faith Is Gone I'm Just Done
Oh God,help Me
Hold My Breath as I Wish for Bread
Oh Please God Help Me

Darkness

Imprisoning Me
All That I See
Absolute Horror
I Cannot Live
I Cannot Die
Trapped in Myself
Body My Holding Cell

Satan

Has Taken My Sight
Taken My Faith
Taken My Sureness
Taken My Arms (meaning guns or in other words weapons against his "lies")
Taken My Fort
Given My Doubt
Left Me with Life in Hell

Original: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aSNJ00iAZ7I

 

[brinny]

He HEARS you:

Oh Please God,help Me

The enemy is a liar. Praying.

 

[shawnavery]

Meh..doesn't really work as a parody. The original was already dark in subject matter. To make a good parody you need to go to an extreme opposite or to absurd silly nature. Maybe try tip toe through the tulips with that. Just my opinion anyways

John 3:16