I removed the poem for my own reasons.. thank you for the people who read it and made a comment
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One of my poems
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RJHarmony84
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I like you..I think you're nice...but I think the poem needs work, that's my honest opinion.
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white dove
(she's a) maniac
faith by day....thank you for sharing your poem 
there is nothing wrong with your format..I remember when I first started writing, alot of my earlier works needed to rhyme (to me, it just sounded right to do that), but later on, I got away from that and just let my pen go and the thoughts flow (egad, was I attempting a rhyme just then ? ) anyway, I think you have alot of promise & potential ~just don't feel compelled to rhyme if it conflicts w/ what you are really trying to say
I like where you started out and where you were going with this one..keep it up!!
there is nothing wrong with your format..I remember when I first started writing, alot of my earlier works needed to rhyme (to me, it just sounded right to do that), but later on, I got away from that and just let my pen go and the thoughts flow (egad, was I attempting a rhyme just then ?
) anyway, I think you have alot of promise & potential ~just don't feel compelled to rhyme if it conflicts w/ what you are really trying to say I like where you started out and where you were going with this one..keep it up!!
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Sorry I felt like removing my poem. I have my own reasons for removing it...im glad that those of you who read it liked it, and that you made comments on it.. thanks......
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white dove
(she's a) maniac
please do not let my comments (or anyone else's) deter you from sharing your God-given gifts with us, faith
I hereby *slap* myself up if anything I've said here made you feel like removing your poem :hits self:
*puts on dunce cap*
I hereby *slap* myself up if anything I've said here made you feel like removing your poem :hits self:
*puts on dunce cap*
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