Numb

[delicate_flower]

-~ * ~- Numb -~ * ~-

My heart is empty.
It must be aching so much.
It must be unbearable…
But why can’t I feel it?

The tears run quickly.
My eyes should be red.
It should be painful...
But why can’t I feel it?

My skin is so pale.
The blood must flow so little.
It must be cold…
But why can’t I feel it?

The blade cuts again.
My blood begins to run.
The pain must be intense…
But why can’t I feel it?

My mind is so numb,
My eyes are so clouded.
The blood must be warm…
But why can’t I feel it?

The cut has grown red,
The cut nicked so deep.
It must be painful…
But why… why can’t I feel it??

-~*~- Sonya B. -~*~-
-~ September 19, 2004 ~-


What a way to start off a birthday... hehe. This is a little something I wrote a few minutes ago. Just thought I'd post it before I went to bed. Bye bye for now.

 

[Silver Saint]

Well, happy belated, Sonya. I liked your poem, I'm going to have to experiment with that form. I like what you did with it. Not anything I can really suggest. Keep it up.
If you would, I've recently posted a new one, Soul Tandem. I'd like your opinion if you would. I doubt many here want to stomach something like that. Talk to you later.
Go with God.



I am aware,
Isacc

 

[heavenliejediofthebeach]

That is so beautiful my friend....Your work is always cherished by me.