Nobody But Me [my most recent poem]

[ChristFollower4806]

[FONT=Courier New, Courier, mono]Nobody But Me[/FONT]

by: BLG

Jan. 23rd 2007
I don't need you
or any other guy
that's the truth
and here's why
i've been lied to
cheated on
and many other things
i'm fed up and done with
guys at any means
no more kissing and cuddling
no more movie dates
will I ever do it again?
i don't know, ask the fates
the only thing i know for sure
is that i only need me
so take your poems and flowers
run away free​

 

[ChristFollower4806]

any comments?

 

[HumbleMan]

I liked it. Even reading it silently, it was like a stoccato rhythm, almost like those charicatures of of beatnik poets you sometimes see in commercials.