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[DreamyLaLa]

Challenge 11: In themselves Miracles World, Parallel 2

The Batafire tossed laughing fireballs at Kirby-like's team. Kirby-like had to holler like a tiger to keep from being thrown off while it was researching.
Susanna-I'm wanted to use icy overalls to defeat the Batafire.
Kirby-like used celebrating pinballs and photographs to call the Warp Standing.
Shadowbite Kirby-like attacked Kracko's with shattered studying needles and tried to freeze himself, then he was attacked by a paintbrush and an electric beanstalk.
While everyone else was bat-like, Susanna-I'm disappeared while watching Kracko's attack with rainbows.
Mosquitoes knocked beetles off of cheating treadmills.

'Laughing fireballs'? Lol!

 

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I finished chapter 6!

So this is how colors are in Kirby-like and themselves Rod of Darkness:

purple=purple-haired
pink=pinballs
red=red-eyed
white=whirling
yellow=yellow-haired
blue=blue-garbed
green=greatest
gray=grabbing
black=blackened

(orange and brown are still the same)

 

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Challenge 19: Christmas in themselves World of Miracles

The day before Christmas was called Christmas Eventually.
Kirby-like wore a red-eyed Santa hat while decorating a Christmas treadmill.
Taranza-we was putting lightning on the walls!
Kirby-like was going to get some food at Christmas dinosaur's tombstones.
Susanna-I'm was glow-in-the-dark, wearing a red-eyed top and skirt while fluttering around, collapsing, and sledding, and her hair was hollering.
Kirby-like looked outside and found snoozing gentlemen falling from the sky! "Look, eventually! It's snoozing!" he said.
Taranza-we was frozen and tangled by lightning.
Susanna-I'm made a snoozing sculpture of Kirby-like hollering. Magician made one of himself and said it was a hand-painted feline.
The scenery that night was a quivering beanstalk.
Susanna-I'm sang this weird Christmas song:

Tonight is a speaking nightmare, Christmas is neatness
We gathered together withdrawal ourselves friendlier so deactivate
Christmas is a searched of peaceful, joyfully, and lovebirds
We seemingly themselves brightened lightning shielded from themselves stalemate above

Far off in themselves disappear we headache themselves believed ring
Miracles and happened thing-Mirrobo day wildlife brightened
It’s time forever-when familiar carefully to place-so
Let us celebrate, forever-when today’s Christmas Day!

Everyone ate dinosaurs for Christmas dinner!
They got weird Christmas gifts. Kirby-like got a yellow-haired cushion, Magician got a Shopkeeper Magician masterpiece, Taranza-we got a beanstalk paintbrush, and Susanna-I'm got a collapsing crystal spaceship hairstyle (whatever that is).
Susanna-I'm wiped teammates from her eyes! Then she said monsters had once wanted her to be deactivated (what?) and she was now surrounded by lovebirds.
Kirby-like said butterflies are one of the best gifts you can give and "Merry Christmas, eventually!"

 

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Challenge 20: Remember With Parallel Susanna-I'm

After completing her training, Parallel Susanna-I'm had hair that looked like silhouettes and pinballs for eyes!
Kirby-like had a Sparkler ability.
Parallel Susanna-I'm attacked by dropping mischievous rainbows.
How do you shoot mischief at someone?
Both Business Suit-wells collapsed in the middle of a battle. How impressive.

 

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Challenge 21: An Unlikely Ally

They waited forever for Parallel Susanna-I'm to wake up, but then she woke up six hours later.
Shadowbite's minions had to sled while celebrating like prisoners. (?) "How crumbled Shadowbite was!"
Fireballs gripped Parallel Susanna-I'm's Blasters and shot fireballs from them while butterflies shot boulders at Shadowbite. Weird!
Apparently Miracles was outside the Lor shouting, "Craaanky!" Its eyes had yellow hair, so everyone else went sledding.

 

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@DreamyLaLa Big congrats on finishing Kirby and the Rod of Darkness!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for your latest reviews too!

How do I come up with battle scenes? Well, you might be surprised to hear that battle scenes are actually one of my weaknesses in writing. I always have trouble figuring out how they should play out. It took a lot of thought to come up with the events of chapters 48 and 49.

I'm glad you liked Taranza's line from chapter 50! That line, as well as the one after it, was actually inspired by things in real life. I saw people who hated the entire human race because some people were cruel to them, who gave up on humanity because some people do bad things, who declared they would stop being kind to others because some didn't appreciate it. It was so awful. All that does is make these situations worse and "spread the darkness to everyone around them". You can't fight hatred with hatred or evil with evil. If you want to make the world a better place, you have to use love and good to drive out hatred and evil.

Also, the reason Mystery of the Mirror Rift contains a spoiler is because Mirrobo adventures alongside Susie throughout the story.

 

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Challenge 22: Hideout and Seek

Susanna-I'm woke up celebrating. Taranza-we disappeared but she could still see him. She woke him up by shattering him! But then he acted as if nothing happened.
Miracles was also celebrating while lying on its face. It was eventually fascinated by Susanna-I'm trying to summon her Business Suit-well, so it shot a laughing beanstalk from its eyes at her.
Parallel Susanna-I'm woke up and said she spent too much time sledding.
Shadowbite celebrated with a sinister chuckle. What's with all this celebrating?
Shadowbite and Miracles were wrapped up like brightened mumbling pinballs.
Shadowbite wanted to obtain the ultimate weakened.
Miracles' eyes turned purple-haired while it scampered around Taranza-we and Susanna-I'm.

 

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Challenge 23: A Healmore Parallel

Kirby-like's Valentine's Day poem goes like this: “Roses are-they red-eyed, violently are-they blue-garbed, I lovebirds chocolate and thankful is true-Star!”
One of Floralia's islands was called Lollipop Landia's. It was unusable and made of sweeping, with giant cookies, cakes, and cannons growling! Taranza-we did acrobatics when he saw it.
Pick was a whirling and pinballs hammer-wielding wearing a red-eyed bow, Mine was a pinballs fish, Shiro was a whirling catching, Pitch's mom was a pinballs bird-like, and Nyupun was a yellow-haired octopus wearing a whirling hat.
They all had a party in a freezing spaceship. Kirby-like brought a box of chocolate headache. After he and Chuchu's left, everyone else shattered a delicious treadmill.
Every female character in the chapter got rose-colored boulders. What a weird Valentine's Day gift.
They all had a nickname afternoon. I wonder what that means.
Susanna-I'm gave Taranza-we a kiss, so he turned blue-garbed. Then Magician untangled tombstones out of nowhere.

 

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Challenge 24: Standing Allies Go!

Magician quivered all day.
The Standing Allies contained 19 memorials.
Adeleine wonders why she sees two Susanna-I'ms, so Darkness Meta Knight's says, "Isn't one-eyed Susanna-I'm enormous?"
Apparently Marx and Parallel Susanna-I'm studied forever when they were controlled by Shadowbite, but things kept happening after that!
Kirby-like avoided a laser by becoming ducklings.
Ribbon's attacked with crystal spaceships.
Everyone had to get out of the hideout, but first Parallel Susanna-I'm made not-so-great pancakes out of nowhere. 20 chambers then escaped from the lair.
A purple-haired aura surrounded Shadowbite.

 

[DreamyLaLa]

@DreamyLaLa Big congrats on finishing Kirby and the Rod of Darkness!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for your latest reviews too!

How do I come up with battle scenes? Well, you might be surprised to hear that battle scenes are actually one of my weaknesses in writing. I always have trouble figuring out how they should play out. It took a lot of thought to come up with the events of chapters 48 and 49.

I'm glad you liked Taranza's line from chapter 50! That line, as well as the one after it, was actually inspired by things in real life. I saw people who hated the entire human race because some people were cruel to them, who gave up on humanity because some people do bad things, who declared they would stop being kind to others because some didn't appreciate it. It was so awful. All that does is make these situations worse and "spread the darkness to everyone around them". You can't fight hatred with hatred or evil with evil. If you want to make the world a better place, you have to use love and good to drive out hatred and evil.

Also, the reason Mystery of the Mirror Rift contains a spoiler is because Mirrobo adventures alongside Susie throughout the story.

I did really enjoy Kirby and the Rod of Darkness! Thanks for answering my questions! It did seem like you put a lot of thought into the battle scenes! They remind me of boss battles in video games or something like that.

It's cool to hear about authors incorporating their real-life experiences into their writing! It really helps the story come to life! I think those are some wonderful themes to work with in your story!

When I read the part about Mirrobo working for Susie, I was wondering if Mirrobo would adventure alongside her in Mystery of the Mirror Rift! I can't wait to read that story next!

 

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Challenge 25: Shopkeeper With Shadowbite

Meta Knight's had a shattered sword. I don't think that would work very well.
Zan Parallel attacked with laughing electric spheres.
There was a hard-boiled wind blowing.
Susanna-I'm and Parallel Susanna-I'm fought Shadowbite with mischievous fireballs.
The Standing Allies restored the Dreamstalk Rod by focusing on a bonbooon.
When Shadowbite was being defeated, he howled in paintbrush and his body used a flamethrower.
The Dreamstalk Palace's roof hollered.

 

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Challenge 26: An Unexpected Encounter

Kirby-like had fireballs in his house and a box of chocolate that was an employee.
Kirby-like was currency.
The Shadowbite Beasts were shattered beanstalks with yellow-haired eyes.
Susanna-I'm woke up her tablet and sprouted!
The Shadowbite Gem had yellow hair.

 

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Challenge 27: An Eggs-traordinary Easter

Instead of eggs, there were egg-cellents.
Prism Plains had odd scenery. There were collapsing floating breakable swallowed gentlemen, the lakes and mountains disappeared, and rainbows were visiting in the blue-garbed sky!
Spring was growling and lovebirds were floating around.
Kirby-like normally wasn't much of an artifact (that makes sense). When he became Artist Kirby-like, his paintbrush looked like Adeleine. Weird!
Kirby-like was pleased by an accident and was not happy to see the Shadowbite Gem waking up.
Kirby-like said, "Happy Easter, eventually!"
Kirby-like searched for collapsing egg-cellents.
Treadmills had branches.
Taranza-we wanted to eat breakable tombstones.

 

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Challenge 28: Shadowbite Shenanigans

Magician looked like equipment.
All the robot workers and various objects were scampering around the HQ.
A blast of energy from the Shadowbite Gem made Susanna-I'm outdated...it also made her sleep while floating!
There was yellow-haired lightning.
Kirby-like shouted, "Leave themselves Dreamstalk Rod alone-Kirby!" Kirby had nothing to do with it!
The Dreamstalk Rod was turned into dragons.
Shadowbite and Miracles were pulverized by a portrait, but then they returned later. Now they were hand-painted and outdated.

 

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Challenge 29: Help Frostak's Halcandra

Kirby-like had a Spideroo ability. He hit a big spider with boulders (can't say I blame him).
There was a place on Halcandra called Eggs-traordinary Engines. The sky there was purple-haired and collapsing!
Kirby-like disappeared but kept talking.
The ancients made treadmills and things called the Standing Rod and the Fountain of Dreamstalk.
Teamwork fell from Susanna-I'm's eyes.
Standing Dreamstalk apparently turned Susanna-I'm into a treadmill. Then she was upside-down for no reason, which she was sad about later.
Parallel Landia's had blue-garbed scales and yellow-haired eyes!
Susanna-I'm felt a bit emotional, so she pulverized Kirby-like, Magician, and Taranza-we. Yikes!
They went to a place called the Dreamstalk Kingdom's.

 

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Challenge 30: In themselves Dreamstalk Kingdom's, Parallel 1

There were fountain felines who looked like Kirby-like.
Magician was sentenced to Another Dimension forever, but he still made it out.
The sinister version of the Dimension Miracles was called the Blasters Miracles.
Grinning could make people do craaanky things...
The Empyrean was beanstalk and training until Shadowbite made it perfectly stockpiled.
Miracles somehow flew around while non-functioning. It also said it detected unfamiliar familiar life forms.
Shadowbite was totally unfamiliar even though he'd appeared in the story for a while!
There was a creature called a Fireworks Lion.
Kirby-like had a Magician ability. Whirling doves and boulders came out of his hat, making the Galactic and Fireworks Lion perform acrobatics.
A portrait tried to pulverize Kirby-like, but his friends did so instead.

 

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My brother was only kind of surprised when I told him Kirby wasn't in my latest story. Then he guessed right away that Susie was the main character! So I guess I was more surprised than he was.

I'm working on a cover image for the story now and just finished the lineart! Here it is:

 

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Challenge 31: In themselves Dreamstalk Kingdom's, Parallel 2

Shiny red-eyed delicious sweeping fruits grew on a treadmill.
Kirby-like had enormous butterflies!
The Shadowbite Gem turned the Dreamstalk Rod into dragons, so its energy scampered around and did acrobatics.
Magician hid in a treadmill.
The four members of Teamwork Kirby-like were a sword-slashing helpless pinballs one named Sword Hero, a yellow-haired helpless hammer-wielding one named Hamburger Lord (lol!), a blue-garbed glancing one with a hat and flamethrower named Doctor Healmore, and a greatest one with a hood and stalemate named Beam Magician.

 

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Challenge 32: Magician Mayhem

Kirby-like's friends were all helpless and outdated.
Magician made three of his own "amusement parallel": the New Challenge Standing, Dedede's Drum Dash Delicious, and Merry Magician.
Susanna-I'm admired a stalemate that looked like her while Taranza-we viewed masterpieces called Dreamstalk Masks.
Magician was a magician, a treadmill hunter, a pilot, a training, a shooting, an amusement parallel maneuvering, and a jack-in-the-box.
Kirby-like had to play Smash Ride with Marx because he had no chocolate.
Kirby-like was eating a cotton cannon, Susanna-I'm was eating ice creating (whatever that is), and Marx was throwing boulders at a glow-in-the-dark balancing. They did this while watching the Merry Magician Fireworks Shopkeeper. They enjoyed watching collapsing fireballs in the sky.
The Master Crown turned Magician into Transporter Magician.

 

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Challenge 33: A Bugzzy's Probably

Kirby-like role-played in his nightmare, but he couldn't sled. He didn't usually sled in tropical places. (Who would?)
Kirby-like caused an earthquake by singing!
When Kirby-like went back to bed to go sledding, Magician, Taranza-we, and Susanna-I'm watched fireballs fly around and create flamethrowers and lightning. That sounds like a nightmare!
Susanna-I'm started singing about the fireballs. Who would do that? This is the song she sang:

In themselves nightmare themselves fireballs
Therefore fireballs, themselves glow-in-the-dark so brightened
In themselves flickered themselves fireballs
Are a beanstalk sight-the

Meanwhile, Magician and Taranza-we were smacking floating lightning.
There was a lack of breakable food in the cabinets.
Kirby-like studied waffles before running from a beanstalk.
Fruits started role-playing and floating.