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(((Hmm....I know!! We can use my plot, but instead of Alyssa dying....Blade could die.)))

Chance examined the body of Blade. What a tragic, tragic death. The worst part was, so far, Chance couldn't figure out how exactly he died. There wasn't poison on his lips, there were no cut wounds, or gashes, nothing. It appeared he had died a perfectly normal death. But, why would he have screamed then? Chance walked over, and examined Blade's shirt for clues. Nothing. Chance examined his face, still nothing. Chance was about to perform a strip search to make sure he hadn't missed anything, when he noticed something: A white strand of something in Blade's normally black hair. Chance grabbed it, and it wasn't attached to Blade's head, so it couldn't have been a simple gray hair. It did look like a hair, though. Chance rubbed it between his fingers. A woman's hair. But, who could've gotten in the apartment, when all the doors and windows were locked, and, to add to that, it was raining outside.
 
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Ninjitsu14 said:
You don't have to die. We could say Toya died.

NO BAD!!! BAD CHANCE!! BAD BOY!! YOU VERY VERY BAD!!





" Come on Chance who was it??" Alexis asked.

"A women i know that much..."He said.

"How can you tell??" Zack asked.

"From the feeling of it." he said.

"From the feeling of....what if its a guy with really nice long hair??" Alexis asked.


(im so glad we started again)
 
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"Men don't use that much conditioner. And, the hair is too fine, it's not coarse, like men's hair. So, it must be a woman." he replied. He decided maybe the answer would be in the kitchen. There was a peice of pie lying on the counter. A bite had been taken out of it. "Where did Blade say he got this pie?" asked Nin. Alexis thought it over, and came up with an answer. "I think he said he got it from the National Pie Association. Why?" she asked. Chance turned on his heel. He went to the telephone book, and looked inside for a National Pie Association. There wasn't one. "You made that up, Alexis!!" he roared. "n-no, that's what he said!! Unless Blade lied to me!!" she cried. Chance turned, and picked up the phone. "Opperator? Can yougive me the number to the National Pie Association.....Uh-huh.....They're closed? When was the last time they were open?......A HUNDRED YEARS AGO?!" Chance shouted. He immediately clicked the phone off. "Okay, this is really weird. We have a strand of white hair, and a half-eaten pie from a company that was last open a hundred years ago...."
 
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Alexis stood and crossed her arms and closed her eyes.
"Who's a hundred years old that we know??" She asked." And you know....some guys use alot of conditoner. AND some guys have nice silky hair."

Zack hit her on the head.

"OW!!" she cried.

"Stop trying tomake the killer a guy!!" he said.

Alexis pouted.

"Then i'm not helping." she said.

"You two stop fighting like little children." chance said.

"WE ARE NOT!!" They said at the same time.

They looked at each other, glared then looked away.
 
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"Hmm.....That's kinda what I thought, but, now that I think about it, old ladies don't use conditioner. They put their hair up in a bun, or something, and use half a can of hairspray. So, we know it isn't an Old Woman. and, judging by the length, it isn't an old man. Hmm....." Chance thought for a minute, until he remembered there were thousands of anime characters running around. "One of them has to have white, long hair....Hmmm....." Chance thought for a moment. He immediately came to a conclusion. "Sesshomaru and Inuyasha." he proclaimed proudly. "I don't know, I think they'd rather be fighting each other than killing Blade....besides, if they killed him, he wouldn't be in one peice!!" said Alexis. "Well, fine. Who do you think it was?" Chance asked.
 
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[my mouse is really messed up right now so i can only make a short post so i can try and fix it...]
zack sat down and said "but the real question is:who would want to do that? if we know all of the victims enemies we might have a better chance of finding out who!"
 
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A cloaked figure seemingly dropped through the ceiling. Donning a brown cloak that pretty much covered everything down to his ankles, with a pair of sneakers as well, he looked at Blade.

"Jacob... so you've died..." He said with a tinge of remorse, his sabre coming out as he grabbed it from within his cloak in the back. His brown eyes looked to the other three in the room, who were probably surprised at his random appearance after having been gone for a while.

"How's everyone else, Chance, Alexis?" John said with a peaceful yet firm attitude as he looked at them.
 
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Ninjitsu14 said:
(((Well, were you here whenever the thread died? No. Maybe if your weren't, Zack wouldn't have killed it. I CAN'T RUN THIS THING MYSELF. *stomps off)))
(I did not kill it-:( )
Edit}I thought it would be better to to just say "Dont blame me just because you dont know whats going on because I don't want to give you the satisfaction of you thinking I actually cared what you though,understand?if not heres a translation: *ahem* not...my...fault. simple enough?:p.}
 
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