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Ninjitsu14

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I don't care what the plot is! Even if Bakura comes back! I just want it to be like the old days, but....John is gone, and so is Alyssa. The plots that have been used don't have the luster of playing out as the other one's, like Dark, and John's ancestor.....Everytime I posted in one of those plots, I could feel my heart beat as the story played out....but, recently, everytime I post, I just think 'Oh, another boring post in Make a Story....' So, I try to post something that can bring it back up again, but it doesn't feel the same....
 
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Ninjitsu14 said:
Maybe if you tried to make a plot people would come back, instead of posting random junk that doesn't pertain to what other people are posting? I'm not gonna say any names *COUGHZackUNCOUGH* Boy, this cough is terrible....

maybe if you didnt exclude me so much I wouldnt have to make my own plots!ever think of that?no.
 
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I don't exclude you. You could easily just post you were there, and witnessed the whole thing happening. You don't have to wait for someone to say 'Come in, Zack....'

Example plot:

It was tragic. Alexis was crying on the couch, and John was trying to comfort her. In the kitchen, was Alyssa's dead body. She had been stabbed in the heart with a butcher knife. "There's only one person who could've done this...." said a voice. Everyone turned to the front door. Outside it was raining, so the figure was wearing a large trench coat. "Only one person here could've done this. The doors were locked, and so were the windows." said the figure. He stepped into the room, revealing it was Chance, one of Alyssa's friends. But, he was garbed in a Sherlock Holmes outfit. He took the pipe out of his mouth. "Gosh, this stuff is gross...." he muttered, and through it behind him. "Only one person here could've done this. Alexis was mad at Alyssa for stealing Toya from her. John was angry because Alyssa borrowed 50 bucks from him, and never paid him back. "And you, Zack..." he said, pointing a finger, "were mad at Alyssa, because she stole some of your drawings, and said they were hers!! And even me, I baked a cherry pie, and Alyssa ate all of it!! Everyone is a suspect. We must find the culprit of this murder...." said Chance. With that, he pulled out a magnifying glass, and began examaining the body.

Example post #2 (Zack's post)

Zack looked around. In truth, he hadn't told the police officer everything. He had been watching T.V. in the living room, when he heard Alyssa scream. And now, she was gone, and he'd never be able to find those drawings she stole. But, it wasn't him, and he knew it. But, how would he get everyone else to believe it? He'd have to catch the culprit, he decided.

It's that easy.
 
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Ninjitsu14 said:
I don't exclude you. You could easily just post you were there, and witnessed the whole thing happening. You don't have to wait for someone to say 'Come in, Zack....'

Example plot:

It was tragic. Alexis was crying on the couch, and John was trying to comfort her. In the kitchen, was Alyssa's dead body. She had been stabbed in the heart with a butcher knife. "There's only one person who could've done this...." said a voice. Everyone turned to the front door. Outside it was raining, so the figure was wearing a large trench coat. "Only one person here could've done this. The doors were locked, and so were the windows." said the figure. He stepped into the room, revealing it was Chance, one of Alyssa's friends. But, he was garbed in a Sherlock Holmes outfit. He took the pipe out of his mouth. "Gosh, this stuff is gross...." he muttered, and through it behind him. "Only one person here could've done this. Alexis was mad at Alyssa for stealing Toya from her. John was angry because Alyssa borrowed 50 bucks from him, and never paid him back. "And you, Zack..." he said, pointing a finger, "were mad at Alyssa, because she stole some of your drawings, and said they were hers!! And even me, I baked a cherry pie, and Alyssa ate all of it!! Everyone is a suspect. We must find the culprit of this murder...." said Chance. With that, he pulled out a magnifying glass, and began examaining the body.

Example post #2 (Zack's post)

Zack looked around. In truth, he hadn't told the police officer everything. He had been watching T.V. in the living room, when he heard Alyssa scream. And now, she was gone, and he'd never be able to find those drawings she stole. But, it wasn't him, and he knew it. But, how would he get everyone else to believe it? He'd have to catch the culprit, he decided.

It's that easy.
HEY! Why am I dead? Lol! Ah well. I like that post! Let's go from there with stories.
 
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