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"NO!I knew this would happen!It can't!Lord!PLease don't let it happen!It's not fair!"Alyssa yelled."PLEASE DON'T LET THIS HAPPEN TO THEM!THEY'RE ALL I GOT LEFT!!!"
 
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Alyssa looked around franticly.
"I-.......I don't know......HE'S NOT THERE!WHY?!"Alyssa yelled pounding the ground."I can't foget him!I need him!NOOOO!!!!!"Alyssa cried and cried.
 
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"You don't see him either?"Alexis blurted out.
"No!I don't!"Chance said.
"WE GOTTA HELP HER!Or both of them!WE HAVE TO HELP THEM!"Alyssa said looking up at Chance.
 
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"They've already started...."Alyssa whisperd.
"What do you mean?"Chnace asked.
"The illosiouns..Evrything...They've already started coming true.The visions just like I had in jail.My friends in pain......There's only 5 or 6 more left.....It's already started.It's happening."Alyssa whispered.All of a sudden,for Alyssa,It looked like Chance and Alexis had faded away and gone away from her.
"NOOOO!!!!!!"Alyssa yelled."Don't let them leave!"
"It's okay,Alyssa!We're still here!"Chance said.
"It's to late.She's already been taken by the spell of the forest.There's noting we can really do."Alexis said.
"But.....I can't stand to see her like this....."Chance said.
"I know.Niether can I...But there's nothing we do."Alexis said looking at Chance.
 
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"Crap! Not only does this stupid forest nuetralize my powers, but it's making everyone go insane!!" cried Nin. Then, a dark void surrounded him, blocking everyone out. "My worst fear......" spoke Nin, calmly. The void around him didn't stir, but he knew what was going to happen. Nightmares from years long past would be revived, his dreams becoming a reality. Such was the way of his dreams. Terrible things always happened in them, but he couldn't remember them afterwards. However, know, he was awake. And his nightmares were coming towards him.


In reality, it appeared as though he were just standing there, eyes wide, in shock.
 
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Alyssa looked around and got taken over by a room.She looked around.It was a bedroom like the ones in her storys.She was confused.
"Welcome back."a cold harsh voice broke through her thoughts.She knew what was going on,where she was and who the voicewasfrom.And she knewshe was barley going to live to see another day again.
"No...."she whispered lowly."
"Yes."the voice said pumbling after her and beating her to the ground as she screamed.
 
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"There is one thing, and that's to try to get the heck out of here. Never give up hope until the battle is truly lost, ever." A voice sounded. A moment later, the person whose voice had sounded out leaped down from a tree.

"Tadaima." John said, appearing as Flame Angel as he landed softly on the ground. Two swords were at his waist in addition to a handgun and he had his backpack slung over his arm, aroung his right wing. "Sorry I couldn't get here earlier." He looked at Chance and Alyssa, who had seemed to be in some sort of trance. "...guys?"
 
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Nothing.They were in there own little fantasy death worlds at the moment.All of a sudden they saw a mark made on Alyssas arm.It started to bleed and it came out of nowhere.In Alyssas world she had gotten stabed and had a knife drawn down her armby Bakura.ONE of her worst nightmares.She was being abused.Constantly getting stabed as more and more cuts and gashes arpeared out of nowhere on her body.John looked in horror not knowing what to do.Chance got a black and blue eye and a cut on his head along with some small cuts on his arms.It was one of HIS worst nightmares that he was living as well.
 
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"Alyssa..." He turned to her, seeing the wound. He walked over and shook her by her shoulders but she wouldn't respond, just standing there, bleeding. He looked as he saw the wounds on Chance as well. He turned his back to them, as he closed his eyes.

"Lord... I don't know what to do. Guide me... please..." He said, head looking towards the sky, but eyes closed. A voice sounded out.

"There is nothing you can do." It said.

"There is something, there has to be something." John replied.

"No, there isn't. You got there too slow and now look what happened."

"I got here as fast as I could."

"Are you sure about that? Are you sure that there was no way for you to get there faster?"

John didn't say a word. He opened his eyes, and looked around. "Who are you?"

"That you could have been there to save them, but you took your sweet little time, and now look at them! You know it, I know it. You were too late, too slow, and now your friends are suffering for it." The voice came from all around him. John turned around, trying to locate the source of the sound, but couldn't.

"I'll ask again. WHO ARE YOU?! Come out here and face me!!!" He shouted to the voice.

"Some protector you are. You vowed to stick by their side and you couldn't even get there fast enough to save them."

John pulled out the handgun and pointed it at the sky, firing off a shot. "Show yourself NOW!!!"

"Are you trying to avoid the truth?"

"What truth? The only thing I'm hearing out of you is a lie!"

"How sure are you of that it is a lie? Are you sure that you did your best?"

"I did do my best, I came as fast as I could, end of story!"

"Then your best isn't good enough, is it?"

"Apparently not." John said. "Who are you?!"

"Wow, if you can't even save or protect your friends, how can you be able to protect your sister?"

That one comment set John off in a rage. "WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT HER?! ANSWER ME NOW BEFORE I KILL YOU!!!"

"Will you be the one who fails her when she's in danger?" John's anger reached a peak. "...heh, you're quite mad. She's the one relative you care most about, huh? Ever since you left home, ever since you disappeared... the only family you cared most about was her, right?"

John calmed down a little. "Of course. With the exception of my parents and God, I care about her more than anyone else."

"So, what does it feel like then? Not being able to protect her?"

"I can protect her, I will." John replied.

"Are you sure? If you can't protect your own friends, how can you protect that which matters to you most?"

John looked around again, no one else was there.
 
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He looked around.Nothing.No one.He was alone with the voice.John had entered his nightmare.Chance and ALyssa had apeared however sitting up against trees bloody and wounded.John ran over to them but hit an invisable wall that seperated them.
"What's going on?And PLEASE tell me who you are!"John yelled out."I don't want them to be hurt.I don't want them to hurt or be in pain and misorie!"
 
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The voice called out again. "I'm soneone you know all too well."

John thought about this for a moment. The others... they're seeing some kind of illusion... this can't be real, maybe I'm seeing an illu-

"An illusion too?" The voice called out, this time sounding like it came from someone near. The person stepped forward. "No, Light, this is no illusion." He walked forward, up to Alyssa. Punching Alyssa in the cheek, John felt a surge of pain. "This is real, you felt that punch, right? Your pitiful little pain link... that which brings you real close to your friends, so useful to me as well, I must admit."

John's eyes showed pure, indignant rage as he rushed at the barrier, attempting to attack Dark head on, but it was no use, he couldn't break the barrier, he merely bounced off and back.

"It's no use, Light. You can't destroy this barrier, there's no way. Your friends are stuck here in their pain and hurt, and why? Because you failed to get there in time and to help them when they needed it most." Dark smiled as he spoke.

John merely brought his gun forward. "SHUT UP!!!" He began opening fire at the barrier, but the bullets merely ricocheted, doing nothing. He tossed the gun to the sky, making it disappear, as he took his twin sabres and slashed at the barrier, unable to get through. Fusing his swords into a broadsword, he struck again, to no avail.

"You've lost, Light. You've lost, and there's no way you can win now." Dark continued to taunt as John went at the barrier, unable to break it. "Your friends are going to die in their pain, then Gabrielle, then you! And you can't do anything to stop me!"

John bounced back, pausing for a second, then breathing deeply, calming himself down. "Lord... please... let me be able to stop him... I trust you to give me the power to beat him..."

Dark laughed. "You? Defeat me? Not a chance." His eyes looked, though, at what was unfolding before him.

John became engulfed in light again, as he went into Pure Angel. "I've defeated you like this before..." He opened his eyes, looking at Dark. "...and I can do it again. You're not going to harm my friends or my family, I won't let you."

"Then try getting through my barrier." Dark looked, laughing, but the laughing stopped.

John held his right hand towards the wall. "Blessed light." A huge beam of light engulfed him and impacted the wall, pushing against it with immense force. The beam and the wall disappeared at the same time, as John rushed at his evil counterpart.

"IT'S ON NOW! TIME TO LOSE, DARK!!!"
 
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The broken fragments of the barrier rose up, melding together, blocking John's path. "Ha hahahahaha! There's nothing you can do!! You and your pitiful friends are trapped in my ilu--" he was cut off by a punch in the face. Flying through his own barrier, he flew past John. "Even though I'm stuck in an illusion, I'm still going to fight back...." said Nin. His eyes were red, with black markings inside them. The Sharingan. Sasuke and Kakashi's kekkai genkai*. "How....how did you break my illusion?!" shouted Dark. "Simple. Once I focused, the Sharingan lead me back into reality. However, I'll slip back into the illusion as soon as the Sharingan's strength fades." said Nin. Slumping over, he fell asleep, free from Dark's illusion. Alyssa still appeared to be awake. Dark struggled to get up. He was still weak, with only a third of his normal power. John walked over to Alyssa, throwing a pill into her mouth, and pouring a liquid into her mouth, forcing her to swallow. She immediately slumped over next to Nin, free from the illusion as well. "Your fights with me, not with them......" said John. "Ah, but your wrong. I need them. I need them, not only to suffer pain and torture as you watch, but also to restore my lost power!! They are not free from my wrath, they helped you destroy me!!" growled Dark. The mark on Alyssa's arm glowed, a purple mist seeping from it. It flowed around John, towards Dark. Dark opened his mouth, breathing in the mist. "Ah, much better....I've regained some of my power....." he said. Snapping his fingers, the trees around them snapped and crumbled beneath Dark's power. "Shall we?" taunted Dark.
 
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John rushed at Dark but was only stoped in his tracks when Dark put his hand out,John was frozen.
"Lord?"John asked.John became unfrozen and able to move.He rushed at Dark once again and sliced him only for him to merrley jump back.
"Heh....That was nothing."Dark said smiling."But...If you're willing to continue....I could always...."Dark tuanted looking over at Chance and Alyssa and smiling.
"No!You leave them alone!!!!!!"John yelled trying to hit Dark once again.
"Oh!I take it you don't care about the weaklings then and I can make them mine.Good idea!I like THAT plan!"Dark said walking over to them.He bent down and put a hand on each head and put them back in thier illousions.John rushed over and knocked his hands of thier head.

"To late.You were late....As usual.To weak and powerless for your own good.You can't do anything right can you?"Dark asked looking over at him and walking towards him.John took a few steps back but then stoped.He took his saber and swung it at Dark.He just jumped back again towards Alyssa and Chance.
"Closer to your friends,closer to death...."Dark said trailing off he disapered and apeaered back behind John.
 
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John turned around, receiving a nice blow to the face from Dark. The blow stung as bad as when he had hit Alyssa... even worse because now this felt like a second punch to the same spot. John stepped back and threw one sword at Dark, who dodged, letting the sword impale itself on the tree behind him. John ran after Dark, attacking but missing.

"Come on... Lord, I need help!!" John shouted out.

Dark laughed. "What's He going to do?"

"He'll do something..." John said, rushing at Dark.

"Admit it, He's not going to help you after what you've done!" Dark shouted back, hurling blasts at John, forcing him back. Dark turned around, but his eyes went wide. A mist had formed around the area.

"John, put up your flame aura!" A girl called out.

"Oh thank God you're here..." John mumbled, following orders. In a split second the air went from a comfortable 65 degrees to sub-zero, the mist condensating and freezing, encasing everything nearby, including Dark, in ice. Gabrielle appeared, looking around. John ran in, sword in hand, infusing heat in it as he stabbed the imprisoned Dark, forcing him to disappear.

"This isn't over, and you know it... first your friends, then your sister, than you. Remember that..." Dark said as he converted into pure energy, flowing back into the ground.

John walked over. "That angel told you to come, huh?"

Gabrielle was not in a good mood. "Mind telling me what's going on? Who was he?!"
 
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"He is my dark form.His name is Dark.He's got Chance and Alyssa captive under his spell of illousions.He wants to get revenge and I don't know how to break the spell."John said to Gabe as she looked over at Chance and Alyssa.
"Oh.I see."Gabe replied.
"Mind telling me what you're doing here?Did the angel send you?"John asked.Gabe still stared at Alyssa and Chance as more wounds and cuts and gashes appered on them.More Alyssa than Chance.But Chnce was getting his share,too.
"What's going on?Why are they getting cuts out of nowhere?!"Gabe said rushing over to them and trying to heal the wounds.
"It's in thier illousions.Thier worst fears and nightmares.Things thier scared about and don't even like to talk about that's how scared they are of it.It's an illousion and thier trapped in it untilthey relize it's ONLY an illusion and NOT reality.I don't know how long that will be.Might be an hour,a few minutes.It could be the rest of thier lives.We do't know."John explained to Gabe who looked up at him.
 
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Nin panted, a sword whizzing past his head. A beam of energy slamemd him into the ground, hitting him where the sword had missed. Slamming into the ground, he immediately jumped back up. He was surrounded, the people he had lost to that he had to flee from long ago. "I wonder...." thought Nin. Leaping over the horde of enemies, he ran as fast as he coud. "I knew I could sense something!!" he thought. He ran in the direction of the power he was sensing. He could hear her cries already. He leaped into the air, kicking Bakura off of Alyssa. "What?! Your not supposed to be here!!" cried Bakura. "Alyssa....this is an illusion--a dream!! We control our dreams through our subconcious!! Dream something!! Quick!!" said Nin. Nin's nightmare had followed him as well. Closing his eyes, Nin dreamed that his nightmares had a bad case of food poisoning. They immediately doubled over, gagging and throwing up. "Quick, Alyssa!!"
 
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"I-....I can't...I can't dream!I don't know why!"Alyssa said trying her best to think or even DREAM of something different.I-I can't!And this pain.....It-It hurts so badly!"Alyssa cried."CHANCE I CAN'T!"
"Good.....Now go away,Chance...I'm TRYING to have some fun here!Now go away before I send you away personally!"Bakura yelled going back to tormenting Alyssa,sticking a knife through her arm.Another gash apeared on her arm.
"STOP IT!"Alyssa screamed trying to stop crying and trying to think of something good.To dream.
 
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