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(((Has completely lost track of the story, so he decides to set things right again!!)))

Suddenly, a portal opened above them. The sky grew dark, lightning crackling around them. Figures began to decsend from the portal in the sky. Even Recca, from his position so far away, could see the dark cloud hovering over the amusement park. "W-what is this? It feels......so cold...." said Alexis. Nobody thought to bring any jackets with them, seeing as it was an amusement park. A cold wind blew through the amusement park. People stopped and stared, looking into the portal. A familiar voice shouted something. "Human Annigilation Blasts!!" shouted the voice. Orbs of dark energy shot from the portal, hitting innocent people in the amusement park. The area was now filled with screams of terror, as innocent people were slaughtered by the mysterious blasts. A blast came towards Alexis, but Devin swept her up, and avoided the blast. John, Nin, and Alyssa all dodged the blasts heading for them, as well. "Light, your ability never ceases to amaze me...." said a voice sounding strangley like John's. "Destructive Flame Technique!!" shouted another voice from within the portal. A stream of flames shot from the portal, and John stood in front of his friends, defending them from the searing flames. "Let's see you dodge this one......Razor Wind!!" shouted another voice. A blast of razor sharp wind flew through the air towards John. John thought he was going to be hit by the deadly attack, until the wind was sucked up into a jar being held by Nin. "Ninjitsu Art of Sealing......." he explained. John, relieved, turned to look up into the portal. Dark, Zachary, and Greg decsended from the portal. They were joined on top of the ferris wheel by Bakura and Nina. "They're....all back....but how....?" asked Alyssa. "Bakura must have brought them back with his dark magic. Dang it!!" said Nin. "Ha ha ha ha ha! As you can see, I'm not so easy to destroy, Light. Of course, you've known I was back....but it must be a suprise that Greg and Zachary have returned as well. Well, Bakura stole enough energy from you whenever he fought you....." laughed Dark. John's eyes widened. Nina cackled, smirking, "That's why we went out of our way to lose to you guys! You guys use way too much energy when you fight, and some of it is bound to leak out, so we took it for ourselves!!". "So, we were being used all this time, huh.....?" Nin asked. "Correct. And now we're back for round two. And I doubt John is able to perform the same attack he used against me in the last fight that destroyed me....he hasn't fought anyone of such calibur in so long. I suppose that ensures victory...." gloated Dark. "Yeah? Well, I'm not so easy to get past......" said Nin. His eyes turned red, with three wheel swirls around his pupil. "The Sharingan....!? But, I thought only Uchiha clan members could use that....unless Nin's Copy Jutsu allowed him to copy that as well....."thought Alyssa. A yellow aura surrounded him as well, his hair extending upwards and his dark eyes turning green. "Super Sayain?! So, he means to go all out....." thought Alyssa. Chance jumped on top of a building, leaping on top of the ferris wheel carts, from cart to cart. He finally reached the top one, holding all of their enemies. An energy bolt was being charged in his hand. "Kamehameha!!" shouted Nin, releasing the energy bolt. The blue energy wave flew at Dark specifically. Everyone else on top of the cart fled, jumping down to the amusement grounds. Zachary, Greg, Bakura, and Nina stood before John, Devin, Alexis, Ryou, and Alyssa. Nin repeatadly fired energy blasts at Dark, not letting up. Nin charged Dark, grabbing him with his chest pressed against Dark's back. A thread of chakra appeared out of Nin's hands, wrapping itself firmly around Dark. "Forward Lotus Technique!!" shouted Nin, spiraling towards the ground at high speeds. Just before impact, Nin releases the thread, and lands perfectly on the ground. Dark slams into the ground, and a huge crater is created from impact. "That actually hurt.....a little." said Dark, with a hint of dsarcasm. He emerged from the ctrater, dusting himself off. "Now, it's MY turn...." he laughed.

(((Note: None of the techniques used are mine and do not belong to me.

Sharingan Mirror Wheel Eye: Naruto character Uchiha Sasuke, Hatake Kakashi, and Uchiha Itachi have this special eye that enhances vision, and allows to peirce and copy any Taijutsu, Ninjitsu, or Genjutsu technique

Super Sayain: Dragon Ball Z, duh. Should now what this is. Usually obtained after an intense state of emotional distress or large amount of anger, results in a huge power boost, and, most notably, yellow hair and green eyes, and the yellow aura surrounding the person.

Forward Lotsu Technique: Taijutsu (physical art) used by Rock Lee, that overrides the central nervous system and allows acess to 100% muscles mass and capability. This also has a setback, as it destroys the cells in the body, and takes a huge toll on the user.

That's a disclaimer. Thank you)))
 
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(Lol!I would have done the same,Chance!^^We have to do that with every story we write for fanfiction!^^)

Dark looked over at Bakura and Zachary and smiled.
"Do it."Chance replied to them.They both nodded knowing what to do on command.Bakura ran over grabing Alyssa and Zachary ran over grabing Alexis and flew to the top of the ferris wheel.The girls both screamed not knowing what was going on.Bakura and Zachary both drained all of the girls powers and brought them into thier own.Now the girls were defenseless.They couldn't run fast,fly,use anything.They got to the top of the ferris wheel and stood thier holding the girls in the cars clenched against the wall by thier necks.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"Chance yelled.
"You see that timer?"Dark pointed to a clock that was ticking down minutes from 20 minutes to zero."If you don't save your pathetic little friends before that timer rus out...Then one will explode in a locked boxcar and the other will fall off the ferris wheel and smash into the ground.And they can't save themselves this time.Bakura and Zachary took thier powers and are using them as we speak.So.....What'll it be?Are you just gonna stand by and watch them die a horrible and beautiful death?Or are you gonna help them and try to save thier worthless lives?It's all up to you.The clock is ticking....Tick...Tick...Tick...."He smiled looking over at them trying to figure out what they'd do."Remeber...It's five against four....And you have 18 minutes left....Whatchya gonna do?"John looked over at him full of hatred.He rushed at him attacking with as much power as he could.
"JOHN!"Chance called.He looked over."Don't use all your power at once.Remember that.I'm gonna go up and try to save the girls."John nodded as Chance flew off and John continued to fight.All of a sudden thier was a bright light and a beam came down from the sky.Everyone stoped a stood back for a second.Then a sowrd apeared down and the sword shined.A voice came from out of nowhere.
"Devin....You have done well to help your friends in time of need and in times of good.You are the last member of The Warriors Of God.Help them and they'll help you.Have fun with them and they'll have fun with you.They've got your back if you've got them.You'll make a great team.Now get out thier and fight."the voice said.The beam left and so did the light and the voice.Devin looked around for a second and down at the sword.He picked up the sword and held it in his hands.He felt energy zoom through his body.He gained power and the ability to fight like the others.
"It was...God..."Devin whispered to no one rubbing the sword.He smiled and so did the rest.Devin joined in fighting and grabed the sword that God had just given him.'It looks like we've found our sixth and final member of Our Warriors Of God...Devin....I hope you help us well...'John thought to himself as he fought.They battled long and hard.seven minutes were remaing on the clock as they counted down to the final countdown.Dark smiled as he realized that the girls lives were coming to an end.One of thier piercing screams made everyone stop fighting at a screaching hualt.They all looked up as Alyssa was being hung over the ferris wheel by Bakura as he got ready to drop her to the ground.
"ALYSSA!ALEXIS!"Chance yelled out.He flamed with anger as did John and pumbled after Greg.Devin went after Nina and John went after Dark while Zachary tried to jump Chance.
 
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Chance ducked under one of Zachary's kicks, and slammed a punch in his stomach. "Kamehameha!!" shouted Chance. A blast of energy seared through Zachary, severely wounding him but not killing him. Chance flew up quickly to where Bakura was. Five minutes left. He tried punching Bakura, but Bakura dodged. "Whoops! My hand slipped...." he said. Chance looked at Bakura's arm. He had let go of Alyssa. Bakura pulled out a detonation device, and was about to press the button. "HELP ME!!!!!!!" screamed Alyssa. Chance closed his eyes, as Alyssa came close to the ground.....

Huh?

Where was the splat sound? Instead, Chance heard a skidding sound, and someone standing up slowly. "Blade?!?" shrieked Chance. Blade had caught Alyssa before she fell!! "I'm just in time...." he said. He grabbed Alyssa's arm, and allowed some of his power to travel into her. "Looks like your plan's finished!!" said Chance. "Kamehameha!!" he shouted, the blast of blue energy searing through bakura, and, destroying the detonation device. Cance floated down, and freed Alexis from the ferris wheel cart. Alyssa and Alexis could feel their power returning. "They're not finished yet....look." said Chance. Zachary was standing from an impact with a roller coaster pole, and Bakura was shaking off Chance's Kamehameha. "Well, we're not finished either...." said devin and John, returning to the others. Dark smiled. Alyssa glared at Nina. Bakura scowled at Alexis and Devin. Chance stared down Zachary. Blade and Greg exchanged glances. John and Dark growled. "I always wanted another crack at you...." said Chance to Zachary. They both lifted off the ground, and into the air. "I'll tell you what, brat. I'll fight you without using my hands...." laughed Zachary. "Okay, but it's not my fault if you get destroyed again...." said Chance. "Actually, it is." said Zachary, without a hint of sarcasm in his voice. Chance and Zachary charged each other, enveloped ina dance of punches and kicks. Everyone else stared at the person who was staring at them. It seemed that was how the fights were going to go.
 
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Alyssa gulped softley still staring at Nina and glanced over at everyone else for a split second.She lloked back over at Nina who tackled her to the ground.Alyssa fell getting pinned down and everyone attacked thier alie(Sp??)
"SWORD!PLEASE,GOD!"Alyssa yelled as her sword apeared in her hand.
"Oh...So now we're going to make this fight uneven?"Nina asked hurt as they stoof face to face.
"Yes."Alyssa nodded."Just like you did MY WHOLE LIFE!"Alyssa swung her sword at Nina slashing her in the side.She cluthed it and obtained a sword as well.
"DIE ALREADY!"Nina yelled.
"NO!Don't kill her...."Bakura said.
"Oh yes....That's right...."Nina agreed smiling.Alyssa looked at them both for a split second.
"But YOU two can die!"Bakura yelled leaping at Devin and Alexis.Devin got in the way blocking the shot and Alexis watched hi pumble to the ground.She gasped.Bakura jumped at her and she ducked missing her completley.She ran out his way and grabed her sword as well.She sliced a nice clean gash in Bakras chest as he laughed an insane laugh and smiled.They were all attacking each other.
"Can't we ever get just ONE day off of peace and harmony and quiet so we can have FUN!"Alexis yelled out.Everyone agreeing with her and what she had just said.
'It COULDN'T POSSIBLE get any worse could it?'Alyssa thought to herself.Boy!Was SHE wrong....
 
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(((No, Zachary is John's Great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandfather, who also has the ability to control fire, and created most of the fire techniques John uses. Dark is John's evil side, and can control Dark Fire. Greg is John's....I can't remember, best-friend-turned-enemy I think, and he can control wind. Bakura is, of course, Yami Bakura, Ryou's evil side, and Nina is Alyssa's evil side.))))

Chance stopped his battle with Zachary. "Alyssa, whatever happened to Gabe?!" asked Chance, receiving a punch from Zachary. "Never turn your back on your opponent!!" he laughed. Zachary received a foot in the face, as Chance flipped himself over in the air. "Don't ever laugh until it's over!!" Chance retorted. They resumed their dance of punches and kicks, occasionally ducking to dodge a blast of flames or energy. "It's over for you!! Supernova!!!" shouted Zachary. "Crap!! John told me about this technique....one of the strongest fire-based attacks!!" thought Nin. A little flame appeared on the tip of Zachary's finger, growing in enormous size as Zachary fed energy to it. "You won't be able to stop this!! You'll all be annihilated along with this planet!!" laughed Zachary. The Supernova was now close to the size of the moon, extending out into the atmosphere, even though Zachary was floating in mid-air. Zachary flew upwards a few more feet. "DIE!!!!!" shouted Zachary, launching the ball of flames. Nin looked at the ball of flames. "I can see it....the core.....if I fire at that, it should disrupt the supernova.....Ka...Me...Ha...Me....." said Nin, charging up energy. Right before the ball of flames was just 30 feet away from Nin, he fired. "HA!!!!!" he shouted. The blast of blue energy flew into the flare, making the flare disrupt, and explode. The flames slowly dissapated, no longer powered by the core. "Heh heh heh...you fell for it!! Fire Needles!!" shouted Zachary. The flames stopped blowing in the wind, as if they were suspended by an invisible force. Surrounded by a million of these, Nin growled. "Go!! Fire Needles!!" shouted Zachary. The needles flew at Nin.
 
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Right as the needles rained down at Chance ALyss alooked over and jumped up getting in the way of the neddles.Nina looked over and laughed as Chance had fallen to the ground right before Alyssa jumped over to help him.
"NOBODY.......Hurts.....My....Family...."Alyssa said reciving all of the flames until they faded out.She screamed in pain as she was being hit.The final blow hit her and Chance got up cathing her as she fell.
"Alyssa...Are you okay?You didn't have to do that for me...."Chance said looking down at the girl in his arms.
"I-I know....But I didn't want to lose you....You're my family...You're to special for me.....Please...Help the other-"she didn't complete as she sliped into unconciousness.
"You...YOU did this!"Chance shouted raising his head to the bad guys in fury.
"No we didn't.She was weak.So what if she died....Her loss.....Eh..It's probley better anyways.For all of us."Zachary laughed and smiled.Chance gently put Alyssa down on the ground and stepped over her."She needed to die anyways.One way OR another.She was being a REAL pain in the butt!"Greg said smiling.John looked over at the fury in Chances eyes and started getting mad himself.
"NO!SHE DIDN'T DO ANYTHING TO YOU!JUST LEAVE US ALL ALONE!LEAVE US ALL!SHE DIDN'T DESERVE THAT!She went through enough in her life already as it was!"Chance yelled out.
"Exactly why we killed her.It's not gonna be ANY eaiser for her.Trust me.I've seen her future.We all have...It's not gonna be pretty.Even she did....In a dream...One of you will betray her.One will Dispise her.One will forget her.One will hurt her.One will leave her and the other will hate her.She will be depressed for the rest of her life after the person that betrays her dies the next day and the other five will die shortley after leaving nothing to her and she'll commit suicide of being so unhappy and miserable in life.The ones who will do these things to her will do them for no reason or something stupid and will never forgive her no matter how hard she pleads.They'll forget who they are right before they die and she'll die two days later of depresment...Think about that....."Bakura said.Chance thought about it for a minute looking at them and back over at John.
 
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"Just because you've seen the future doesn't mean it's true...." said Chance. "With God, anything is possible. We can change the future. And, I'll do it. I'll take down all of you one by one!" said Chance. He fired up his aura, electric sparks traveling around his body. "Get him!!" roared Dark at the others. Chance's eyes narrowed. Consumed by hate, there was not a sense of sympathy whatsoever. "I hope you don't mind the color red, dark. Cause that's all your going to see after I spill your comrades' blood......" said Chance. "W-what?!" said Dark. Zachary flew towards Chance, creating a whip of flames. Zachary cracked his whip, sending flames flying towards Chance. Chance shouted, and a flair of aura dispelled the flames. "Well? Was that it?" asked Chance. Zachary raised his whip, cracking it against Chance's body. A few wounds opened up. Chance just stood there, arms crossed, as the beating continued. "Kamehame....HA!!" shouted Chance. His aura turned blue, flying outwards. His aura sliced through Zachary, Zachary landing on the ground. "Who's next?" asked Chance. "Heh heh heh....don't you get it yet?" said Zachary. Chance turned around to see him. The place where the blast had slashed through him had disappeared. "We're already dead. You can't kill those who are already dead." laughed Zachary. "Why do yopu think the battles lasted this long?" asked Dark. "I knew something was wrong...." said Chance. His aura began disappating. His hair returned to it's normal, dark color, and his eyes turned brown again. "Dang....used up all my energy with that last attack...." said Chance. Zachary laughed. Raising his fist, he punched Chance in the stomach. He punched him repeatadly, eventually slamming him in the chest, hard. The punch sent him flying through the ferris wheel. "Dang...what am I gonna do? They're already dead, so how do we kill them.....maybe if we completely destroy them, like last time.....But, I have to stall for time. And I've got no energy left.....Wait! The Sharingan! Of course....." thought Chance. He flew back over to the others. "So, back for more?" asked Zachary. Chance's eyes were closed. "Listen me when I'm talking to you, boy!!" shouted Zachary. He raised his fist. Chance opened his eyes. The Sharingan had changed. The three symbols in his eyes had become elongated. The Magekyo Sharingan. "Goddess of the Moon Technique!!" shouted Chance. For a split second, he stood there, staring at Zachary. Then, he walked towards John. "He won't bother us. He's trapped, in an illusion of his worst fear. Right now, he's imagining a demon devouring him, over and over. It'll last for three days, but....I'm out of energy as it is..." and with that, Chance fainted.

((It's three-on-three now!!)))
 
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John kneeled down picking up Chance and scooted him over by a wall where he put Alyssa for now.
"You three better prepare your graves now because you're ALL about to die!Not ONLY Miss Alyssa over there.But you four as well.But we'll deal with Chance later..."Dark laughed.
"YOU'RE MINE,DARK!"John burst at him plowing him to the ground."YOU HURT MY FRIENDS....And not ONLY that..."John said.'NOBODY.....Hurts...My....Family....''I-I know.....But I didn't want to lose you.....You're special to me....You're family.....'John flashbacked."BUT MY FAMILY!And you WILL PAY FOR WHAT YOU HAVE DONE!"
"What do you want us to do?!Bring her back to life and tell you her death date?!"Bakura yelled at him.
"YES!I DO!"John yelled.
"She was gonna die March 16,2007!She was going to be alone and depresed and die before graduation anyway!We did her a favor!You can't change the future!It is what it is!"Bakura yelled.
"I DON'T CARE! WE'LL FIND A WAY TO CHANGE IT!"John yelled.
"YOU CAN'T!"Nina shouted at him.
"YES WE CAN!"Devin yelled.
"DON'T TALK ABOUT MY BEST FRIEND LIKE THAT!"Alexis yelled at them.
"YEAH!And then you went and hurt Chance as well!You guys are monsters!"John yelled.
"No...No...We're immoratlized demons..."Bakura said camly.
"I don't care!"John yelled back."You just need to die!"
(That's all I can do.I gotta go to school now...)
 
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