make a story! (2)

[FireLight09]

"BRING IT ON!!!" John immediately slammed himself into Naraku. Naraku let go of her right before being hit. "Listen Naraku, let go of Ryou and Alexis or I swear you won't see the light of day."

"Why should I?"

John had a twisted grin on his face. "I was hoping you'd say that." John immediately dashed at Naraku, grabbed him by the face, and slammed his head into the wall. John backflipped into the air, whipped out his sword, and sent a stream of flames, igniting Naraku.

Alyssa sighed. Oh no, he's fired up again... I'd better go see if I can find Ryou and Alexis, this is gonna be a while. Alyssa walked off, rubbing her wrist.

"Get up! You think I'm done?" John sat, arms crossed, smiling.

Naraku got up slowly. He took off his outer cloak since it was torn up anyways. "You conceited wretched human! I'll have your head!" Naraku ran after John, who jumped up and over, twisting himself to turn around, facing Naraku. As Naraku turned around, John landed, slamming his sword into the concrete, causing a fiery shockwave that hit Naraku, sending him sailing into a crate, breaking it. "...I can't lose, not this time... I CAN'T LOSE!!!" Naraku got out, and dashed at John. The two started swinging rapidly, sparks and flames flying as the swords clashed. Naraku bounced back, and John followed. Naraku began running, bouncing up on top of a pile of wooden crates. John leaped, bouncing off of the wall, right at Naraku's direction. Their swords met, and John was forced up and over Naraku. John managed to land gracefully on the ground, standing straight up.

"You're a lot better than last time, Naraku. A little too much better." Their swords clashed again as Naraku leaped off of the structured he was on, trying to attack John from above. "You're working for someone, huh?"

"It's not for, it's with." The two met blade for blade repeatedly.

"Seems more like it's a for if you're THAT desperate to win." John leaped back.

"I joined them so I could defeat you pitiful whelps! And, now that the chance has arrived, I can't lose!" Naraku jumped at John, bringing down his sword, missing as the blade caused sparks on the concrete.

"So you're nothing but a pawn now." John dashed at NAraku, almost hitting him, but Naraku brought up his blade in time.

"I may be, but so will YOU!" Naraku forced John back, and extended his hand. John immediately felt a surge of pain, as Naraku tried to control him. He put his hands to his head, closed his eyes, and forced him out.

"I'm not that weak-minded, Naraku." John stood up.

"H-how? You're supposed to be under my control!"

"Because my will remains fixed." Flashbacks of his friends one by one came to his mind. Ryou, Nin, Angelic, Alexis, Alyssa... "I have too much to fight for to just lose." Flashbacks of the bad moments now came. Ryou's controlling, Alexis's and Alyssa's near death events... "I've seen too much hurt!" John leapt into the air, flipped, and converted to Flame Angel form. He remembered how Alyssa almost died, because he couldn't do anything. "AND I WON'T LET IT HAPPEN ANYMORE!!!" John held his sword out. "FLAME TORNADO!!!" He swung his sword, causing a stream of flames to appear around Naraku. Out of nowhere, the fires began to spin, eventually becoming a pillar of fire that charred everything in it. Naraku disappeared.

John dropped to the floor, landing nicely. He reutrned back to normal. "Never again." With his eyes shut, he sheathed his sword and walked away.

 

[MCRfreak]

angelic apeared and ran up to john hugging him "are you all right???" asked angelic.

 

[FireLight09]

John laughed and looked at her. "Yeah. How'd you get here, anyways?"

"Nin drove me here." She stuck her thumb back at Nin, who was leaning on the doorpost at the entrance to the building. "We figured you two might need help, but I guess you're fine. Where's Alyssa, though?"

"Probably went off to look for Ryou and Alexis. I wouldn't worry about her, I'm sure she's okay."

"Okay!" She let go. They went to the back, where they found Alyssa, talking with Ryou and Alexis.

"Oh, wow, are you guys okay?" John asked.

"Yeah. Alyssa kept us company." Ryou smiled.

"That's good. Let's go, I'm getting tired." John started to walk away, but Alexis couldn't move. She twisted her ankle, which is why she wasn't used by Naraku. John and Nin carried her out, and everyone loaded up in a car. John drove everyone home.

 

[MCRfreak]

in the ride home angelic started singing " 99 cups of cappichino on the wall 99 cups of cappichino take one down spill it on john 98 cups of cappichino on the wall' and on and on she went.

 

[Captain_Tripp]

(yay!ok.my turn*takes deep breath*)

what happened 2 yur face?"ryou asked.
"i-i dont wanna talk about it...."alyssa said sadly.she always got depressed when ppl metioned the scar.
"why not?"alexis asked.
"nuthing....i just....dont...."she said looking out the window in a gaze.

"ok.r u alright though?"ryou asked.
"kind of."she said trying 2 bk away from him 4 a sec. remebering what happened.she shook her head trying 2 force the evil thoughts out but they wouldnt go away.she started 2 cry but stoped herself b4 any1 noticed.she was silent the rest of the way home.

they all got out & home & alyssa jumped out & ran 2 her room immediately.they all walked 2 johns apartment.
what happened 2 her?"ryou asked.
"u dont remeber do u?"john asked.
"no.what?remeber what?"ryou asked.john told him everything that happened.

"thats why she was trying 2 scoot away from u in the car.she may take sum time 2 get over it.she new it was naraku controlling u but the fact it was 1 of her best friends beating her like that teriffied her badly.shes gonna have that scar 4ever."john said.

"oh.....can i apologize 2 her?"ryou asked.
"i dont care but i dont think shes gonna let u come in or even near her 4 a while.write her a note & ill give it 2 her."john said.
"ok."ryou said.he took out sum paper & a pen & wrote a note.it was kinda long but he felt really bad about what had happened.

alyssa was in her room crying & was trying 2 stop so she grabed her sword ran outside & was pounding on a tree w/ it.it was almost gone in2 tiny little peices.she was crying & screaming @ it pretending it was naraku.

no1 new she went outside until john went in & found the note that said so.so,he walked outside 2 the scream crying alyssa & startled her.she brought her sword up 2 him not nowing who it was.
"woah.its ok.its only me."john said.
"oh.....sry.....u scared me 4 a sec.i didnt no who u were."alyssa said.

 

[FireLight09]

(This is funny, all the Google ads for this page are now about swords.)

"It's all right. I know how you're feeling right now. Maybe you should just rest for a while, it's been a rough day." John dug through his pocket for the note. "Also, when you're feeling up to it, this is a note from Ryou."

She took it and put it in her pocket. "I'll read it later."

"Okay, and, Alyssa..." She turned. "We're all here for you. We'll stop him together, okay? I promise you, I won't leave your side."

"...thanks..." She said. She tried to whack the tree stump again, but got tired out. She went back inside, put on some music, and layed there on her bed.

 

[Captain_Tripp]

she finally fell asleep.john walked bk up 2 his apartment & sat down in seat.he thought 4 a min.
"u ok?"nin asked john.
"yeah.im fine....just fine...im just thinking."he told her.
"what did she say about the note?"ryou asked.

"she said shed read it later.she said it kinda reluctingly,like she didnt want 2."john told him.
"oh.i c.....wonder if shes gonna read it or not...."he said.
"prob will.she does what aksed 2 most of the time."john said.
"i no that but she seemed scared of me so i wonder if she really will....."ryou said.

"trust me.shell read it.ill reda it 4 her if i have 2."john said.
"did u read it?"ryou asked.
"no.not yet."john said.
"ok.dont."ryou said.
"ok.whatever u say."john agreed & turned the tv on & flipped through the channels.

why does he even care 4 that poor girl & his little friends?i cant belive hes taht strong.hes so pathetic & helpless.if anything happened 2 1 of em hed go crazy.i have half a mind 2 pluck his friends from his hand.1 by 1...starting w/ that annoying little girl.alyssa..........-sum wierd persons thoughts(new enemy i guess)

 

[-Kuro]

holy guacomole! i havnt been here in over a month and my thread split?wow!
ahem...im not here much so ill jus watch!

 

[FireLight09]

"Aww, come on, nothing on TV! Geez, you pay $50 a month and there's nothing on?" John dug through the cabinet and pulled out the GameCube. He played some MegaMan, then some Sonic for a bit, then gave it a rest. John stood up, and felt something odd. "Something's not right. ...but then, I've been on edge lately... nah, I'm not gonna worry about it." John put away the system, grabbed a water bottle from the fridge, and went to his room. He put on some Kutless and soon fell asleep.

(To recca: Yep. I was wondering where you went. Anyways, the basic story we had developed into a full story with a plot, characters, enemies, everything. That's how it got this big.)

 

[Ninjitsu14]

(((I can't drive, thilly. *points to age*. I'm only 14!)))

Nin stood at the window, watching it rained. Apparently, the weather patterns had taken a turn for the worse, and now it rained every few hoursa, stopped, and then it would start up again. Nin growled. "Since the weather's so erratic, I can't train!" he said. The mailman came, wearing a jacket over his head to keep the water out of his face, continuing his pace, jogging to the next house. Nin grabbed his light jackeyt, and ran outside to grab the mail. Walking inside, he threw his jacket on the couch. "Bills, bills, bills, bills.....hey!" said Nin, tossing the bills on the table. There was a mysterious black envelope that had a powerful red aura around it. Opening up the envelope, Nin began to read the letter.

"From an anonymous sender,
Your skills are quite good. we've observed many of you and your friends battles. If you would, we would like you to come to a Tournament being held on a tropical island south of Florida. The Tournament will be held one month from now. Just to name a few of you and your friends rivls, Hiei, Majori, Blade, Naraku, and Ryou will all be there, and their hoping they can come, plus some fighters you've never faced before. Please accept. In this envelope, we have inclosed 4 plane tickets, and a pass for your team members to fill out. I will explain the rules once you arrive

Sincerely,
A Fight Addict"

"Hey, John! Look at this!" said Nin, running into his room. John quickly looked over the letter. "Well, with all the bad weather here, it looks like we won't be ina fight for a while, but we'll have to ask Angelic and Alyssa....course, I'm not sure if Angelic wants to come, since she's pacifist" (I'm not sure if she's really pacifist, but let's just say she is. John can decide if we want to participate or not)

 

[FireLight09]

"Hmm... you know, a chance to practice and test our skills would be a fun thing. But... the question is that, is it safe?" John looked over the letter. "After all, I'm not getting very good vibes froom this letter."

"True, this might be dangerous, but, who knows? Maybe we'll find out what's really going on. It may be risky, but if we play our cards right, we could solve this problem."

"...true. Lemme go talk to Alyssa, get her opinion."

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"...I guess so, since this way we can find out who's behind all this. But... the fact that both Ryou and Naraku are there... I don't know..." Alyssa sat there on her bed, thinking.

"I understand. Give it a little more thought, and tell me when you're ready, okay?" John headed back his apartment. A few minutes later, Alyssa came back with a reply.

"Let's go. I'm going to end this once and for all. The best way to deal with a fear is to confront it, right? That's what I'm going to do."

"Okay then. We're leaving tomorrow, so go get ready." She nodded, and left. John got up and packed his bags. He told Angelic, who said she would come to cheer the group on, though she wouldn't be participating.

 

[Ninjitsu14]

"Great! I'm so excited....". he looked at the plane tickets. A date that the plane was scheduled for leave appeared on the tickets. "Okay. We have two weeks to do any last minute training, as soon as this accursed rain stops!!" cursed Nin.

 

[MCRfreak]

when they got on the plan they sawl angelic sitting all alone they walked up to her and relized they sat right next to her nin on the right john on the left
"hi guys"said angelic looking up
" why do i have to sit by YOU???"moaned nin
"dont be so rude"said john "you are lucky to have such a good friend around"
"shes not my freind" said nin sitting down
" well fine be that way!!!" said angelic

 

[FireLight09]

John laughed, and put his MP3 player on.

This is gonna be a long flight... He sat there, relaxing, as Angelic pouted a bit at Nin's harshness, and Alyssa sat by the window, thinking a bit.

 

[MCRfreak]

think think alyssa thought to herself think
"oh shut up already!!!!" yelled angelic
"wait what"said nin and john at the same time
"alyssa keeps saying think think think"said angelic
"no she hasnt said anything"john said
"yes i did in my mind" said alyssa
"then wait that means angelic can......."nin paused
"read minds" said john

 

[FireLight09]

"This is sooo not good..." John sighed. You better not be reading my mind. Or you're buying Choco food for the next week. Angelic looked real surprised at the moment. John shot a glance at her. "Yeah, gotcha. Trying to read me, huh?" Angelic laughed nervously.

Nin sighed. "Good thing I speak my mind often..."

 

[MCRfreak]

"I guess so" said angelic "what should we do??? but atleast now im not completely usless!! right!!!!!!

 

[FireLight09]

"I suppose so. That's going to help a LOT. Question is, can we like talk to each other and stuff mentally? Or can you only hear what others think?" John took off his headphones.

 

[MCRfreak]

(why does it say alyssa is in here and been in here for a LONG time but she hasnt posted????)

 

[MCRfreak]

"i dont no let me try (can you here me now???) angelic said in her mind to john alyssa and nin at the same time" said angelic "did it work??? did you here me???"