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(ok!whatever u say!^^)
alyssa got bk down 2 the ground & ran over 2 john.
"was that gd?"alyssa asked.
"woah.....thats all i can say is woah...."john said 2 her.she smiled a big smile.
"hey!can u heal w/ that thing?"nin asked.
"i dunno hold on lemmie try."she told him.she took out her pocket knife & sliced her arm & flinched in pain.she put the sword up 2 her arm & thought while watching the gash bleeding deeply.it started 2 heal up.slowly @ 1st but getting faster & faster.
"yeah.guess so!feels normal again!!!!!!!"she happily said.
"thats gd."john said.
"yeah.that might come in handy durning battle."nin said.
"yeah.probley."alyssa said.
alyssa got bk down 2 the ground & ran over 2 john.
"was that gd?"alyssa asked.
"woah.....thats all i can say is woah...."john said 2 her.she smiled a big smile.
"hey!can u heal w/ that thing?"nin asked.
"i dunno hold on lemmie try."she told him.she took out her pocket knife & sliced her arm & flinched in pain.she put the sword up 2 her arm & thought while watching the gash bleeding deeply.it started 2 heal up.slowly @ 1st but getting faster & faster.
"yeah.guess so!feels normal again!!!!!!!"she happily said.
"thats gd."john said.
"yeah.that might come in handy durning battle."nin said.
"yeah.probley."alyssa said.
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Suddenly, two warriors jumped down from the rooftop. One was Hiei of the Evil Eye. The other was a large, bulky figure that had a hood over his face, which hid his face from view. "what do you want?" asked Nin, "we're in the middle of training!". Hiei lunged at him so quickly, Nin had little time to react. Hiei slashed at him, but with his own quick eyes, he backflipped over the slash. Landing a few feet away, he drew his own sword. "I'll take my time weakening that girl so I can take her sword. Heh heh, it'll be handy in battle..." came a dark voice from the hooded figure. "Oh no you don't!" said John, running towards him. His path was stopped by a large blade, which he, unfortunately slammed into (the blunt end). John stepped back, holding his nose. There, standing before him was Blade. "I came back to take another crack at you. And to test out my new weapon". "!!" thought John. "So, he was the last one to get a weapon?!" thought Nin, as he held off Hiei's attacks. The big guy laughed. "I'm Majori, and I'll be causing you pain today!". With one quick swipe of his powerful arm, he sent Alyssa flying into the air. Hiei spun his leg around, and with such strength, kicked Nin into a meadow behind the house. Leaping on top of the rooftops, Blade said "I hope it isn't a problem that we fight alone....". Realizing that defeating Blade as fast as possible would be his best bet at saving Alyssa, John rushed towards Blade, ready for attack.
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John leaped into the air right above Blade. "RAIN OF FIRE!!!" He spun around quickly, sending a circular shower of fire below him. Blade got out in time. John dropped down from the jump and extended his saber, flames shooting out at his opponent.
"Nice, much better than last time, very creative techniques. But, can you beat this?" Blade snuck up behind John, slashing him in the leg. John wasn't hurt badly by the slash itself, but the jolt he received stunned him for a second. Blade punched him, making John slide back a bit. John ran at Blade, whipping out the sword in an arc, sending a horizontal beam of fire at him. Blade backflipped right over it.
"Heh, perhaps you rely too much on your element." Blade appeared right next to John, almost slicing John in the head, but John managed to block in time. The two stood there, trying to force their blades onto each other.
"Perhaps. But fire has its beauty, right? Can't let it go to waste." John got out of there, and moved back. He brought his blade up to his face, as an aura of flames surrounded him. "SALAMANDRA FLAME!" The fires surrounding John seemingly came to life, forming a sort of dragon, which rushed through Blade, searing him quite nicely. Blade fell to one knee, holding himself up with his sword. John ran over to Blade. "You okay?"
"Y-yeah... go save Alyssa."
"You sure you okay? Letting me go like this?"
"I never said I was the enemy, did I? Go. We'll fight later." John nodded, and ran off. "...you're much more powerful than last time. I will beat you though. I always win." With that said, he disappeared.
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John ran towards Majori and Alyssa. She had landed hard on the dirt, and Majori grabbed her, picking her up. Alyssa was furious, but too hurt from the fall to do anything at the moment. "I hope you like pain as much as I do, because you're going to be receiving a lot of it!" Majori grinned at her, when John brought his sword up in front of Majori's neck.
"Put her down or you die, right here, right now." John sounded cold in his voice. "I'm not hesitating this time, and you know I can do it." Majori put her down. She immediately grabbed her sword and began healing up. John put the sword down, and Majori immediately slammed John in the face.
"John!!" Alyssa leapt up, and stabbed Majori, pulling out her sword immediately.
"Nngh... you little brat... this isn't over." Majori, hand over his side, disappeared.
"Let's go, I don't know if Nin needs our help." John rubbed his face and followed Alyssa.
"Nice, much better than last time, very creative techniques. But, can you beat this?" Blade snuck up behind John, slashing him in the leg. John wasn't hurt badly by the slash itself, but the jolt he received stunned him for a second. Blade punched him, making John slide back a bit. John ran at Blade, whipping out the sword in an arc, sending a horizontal beam of fire at him. Blade backflipped right over it.
"Heh, perhaps you rely too much on your element." Blade appeared right next to John, almost slicing John in the head, but John managed to block in time. The two stood there, trying to force their blades onto each other.
"Perhaps. But fire has its beauty, right? Can't let it go to waste." John got out of there, and moved back. He brought his blade up to his face, as an aura of flames surrounded him. "SALAMANDRA FLAME!" The fires surrounding John seemingly came to life, forming a sort of dragon, which rushed through Blade, searing him quite nicely. Blade fell to one knee, holding himself up with his sword. John ran over to Blade. "You okay?"
"Y-yeah... go save Alyssa."
"You sure you okay? Letting me go like this?"
"I never said I was the enemy, did I? Go. We'll fight later." John nodded, and ran off. "...you're much more powerful than last time. I will beat you though. I always win." With that said, he disappeared.
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John ran towards Majori and Alyssa. She had landed hard on the dirt, and Majori grabbed her, picking her up. Alyssa was furious, but too hurt from the fall to do anything at the moment. "I hope you like pain as much as I do, because you're going to be receiving a lot of it!" Majori grinned at her, when John brought his sword up in front of Majori's neck.
"Put her down or you die, right here, right now." John sounded cold in his voice. "I'm not hesitating this time, and you know I can do it." Majori put her down. She immediately grabbed her sword and began healing up. John put the sword down, and Majori immediately slammed John in the face.
"John!!" Alyssa leapt up, and stabbed Majori, pulling out her sword immediately.
"Nngh... you little brat... this isn't over." Majori, hand over his side, disappeared.
"Let's go, I don't know if Nin needs our help." John rubbed his face and followed Alyssa.
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"u ok?"alyssa asked john a little worried.
"yeah.im fine."john said.
"whats wrong w/ppl?there always after us.....im sick of it."she said sitting resting her butt from the fall.she looked down @ herself & saw she was still in cat form.
"opps.....4got about that."she said changiing bk 2 normal.she took her hair tie off her wrist & put her hair up in a ponytail pulling it bk so she wasnt as sweaty.
"ah.much better."she said.she 4got 2 make her cat ears go away but didnt really mind @ the moment.
"4got yur ears..."nin told her.
"i no."she told her."if we leave & go sumwhere else i make em go away.so ppl dont FREAK out."she told him.
"ok.whatever."nin said.
"JOHN!"alyssa yelled tackling him & giving him a big hug."HIYA BUDDY!HOW R U?!"she asked excidetly.
"im gd....that was so random."john said.
"i no.i do that @ school 2 ppl all the time.ill just run up 2 sum1 scream there name tackle em & give em a hug.then ill ask em how they r.say i love em,in a friend way,give em 1 more hug & then let go.....unless its jeremy....hes my bro...its an inside joke.school thing.hes not really my bro!"alyssa said giving john 1 last hug & letting go.
"ok then?"john asked.alyssa gasped as she saw angelic.
"SANTA CLAUSE!!!!!!!!!"she ran & tackled angelic hugging her."hiya!i want a puppy & a new daddy(school thing.mikes my dad & hes abusive sumtimes),& i want sum candy & i wanna a cookie!"alyssa yelled.
"let go!"angelic said.
"ok."alyssa said letting go.
"thank u."angelic said smiling.
"selcome welcomes!"alyssa said.
"yeah.im fine."john said.
"whats wrong w/ppl?there always after us.....im sick of it."she said sitting resting her butt from the fall.she looked down @ herself & saw she was still in cat form.
"opps.....4got about that."she said changiing bk 2 normal.she took her hair tie off her wrist & put her hair up in a ponytail pulling it bk so she wasnt as sweaty.
"ah.much better."she said.she 4got 2 make her cat ears go away but didnt really mind @ the moment.
"4got yur ears..."nin told her.
"i no."she told her."if we leave & go sumwhere else i make em go away.so ppl dont FREAK out."she told him.
"ok.whatever."nin said.
"JOHN!"alyssa yelled tackling him & giving him a big hug."HIYA BUDDY!HOW R U?!"she asked excidetly.
"im gd....that was so random."john said.
"i no.i do that @ school 2 ppl all the time.ill just run up 2 sum1 scream there name tackle em & give em a hug.then ill ask em how they r.say i love em,in a friend way,give em 1 more hug & then let go.....unless its jeremy....hes my bro...its an inside joke.school thing.hes not really my bro!"alyssa said giving john 1 last hug & letting go.
"ok then?"john asked.alyssa gasped as she saw angelic.
"SANTA CLAUSE!!!!!!!!!"she ran & tackled angelic hugging her."hiya!i want a puppy & a new daddy(school thing.mikes my dad & hes abusive sumtimes),& i want sum candy & i wanna a cookie!"alyssa yelled.
"let go!"angelic said.
"ok."alyssa said letting go.
"thank u."angelic said smiling.
"selcome welcomes!"alyssa said.
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Hiei and Nin traded several blows. "I still can't tell who has the advantage...!!" said Nin, trying to focus on the battle. "This one's better than I thought. Majori and Blade have already been defeated.....". Leaping back, both of them panted, trying to get their wind back. John, Alyssa, and Angelic riding her chocobo arrived on the scene. "Stay out of this, John!!" said Nin, cracking his knuckles, "this is my fight....". He began summoning energy into his hand. Hiei began summoning aura into his hand the same way. Both of them put their hands in the same position, and at the same time, shouted "Dragon of the Darkness Flame!!". Both of the dragons appeared from their owners hands, and flew towards each other. In the clash of energy, they both self-destructing, creating a large explosion of energy between the two fighters. As the smoke cleared, Hiei tried to recollect some of the aura spent in the attack, but Nin was no where to be scene. "Where'd he go?..." thought Hiei. "Agggghhhh!!!" said Nin, leaping above Hiei. Hiei brought his sword up to block, but Nin went straight through him, and disappeared. "What kind of technique is this?!" said Hiei. "Subterranian Decapitation technique!!" said Nin's voice. Reaching his hand up from the ground. He grabebd Hiei by the ankle. Pulling himself out from underground, he drew his sword. "You can leave with your life, or you can use your aura to heal yourself. Decide which." said Nin. "I...won't give up...." said Hiei. Concentrating his aura into his fist, he shouted "Fist of the Mortal Flame!!". "He still has enough strength to launch an attack of that magnitude?!" thought Nin, bracing himself for the attack. Slamming his fist into Nin's chest, an explosion erupted from the amount of energy put into the attack. Hiei stood up. "Now.....he's dead..." he said to himself. "Not quite..." said Nin, standing behind Hiei. "But...how?!" said Hiei in shock. "The Nin you destroyed wasn't the real me. It was a clone that I created during the smoke when our two attacks collided.". Hiei grimaced. "This isn't over!" he said, disappearing in a puff of smoke. "I'd like to think that battle was easy....but it took way too much energy out of me, using three different attacks in one battle. At least my hands healed up now, and I can use the Dragon of the darkness Flame without hurting myself..."
Back at Alyssa's house, the group gathered around. "From what I can tell, they wanted our weapons....." said John.
"But, that makes no sense. Why would Blade want your weapon when he already has one?" said Alysssa.
"I LIKE CHEESE!!!!" said Angelic, jumping up and down.
"Blade wasn't after the weapons. He wanted to challenge John to another fight, to see if he could win, and he failed again. That's 2 wins and no losses for John, yet Blade still chases after John...." said Nin.
Alyssa shivered at the thought of that big hooded guy with her teeny tiny rapier. "So, what if they come back? Do you think their in cahoots with E.B.?" said Alyssa. "I don't think so. Hiei doesn't work that way." Said Nin, with his immense knoweldge of Shonen Jump manga. "But...didn't he partner up with Kurama and that other dude when they stole those artifacts from the Underworld?" asked Alyssa. "That's not the point!!" said Nin. "The point is, they don't know it, but if they suceed in stealing our weapons, their also aiding in the destruction of our world by E.B. So, whatever happens, we can't let them get these weapons. I can't believe I'm saying this but....I think we should leave them at Angelic's house". Nin bit his lip in case of an uproar. He was right. "ARE YOU CRAZY!?!?!?!? She can't even find her toothbrush in the bathroom!!!" said Alyssa. "I don't want some blood-stained weapon in my house! I might get nightmares!!" shouted Angelic. "I can't believe you'd suggest something like that! We're leaving the fate of the world in the hands of a boy-crazy-chocobo-loving teenage girl?!?!?!" shouted John.
"I know it may seem risky, but it's even riskier if we keep the weapons with us! They don't even have to worry about Angelic, because they didn't see her during the fight. They don't know she's here. The most obvious places to look would be with us!!" said Nin. "Mmm.....good point..." said John.
Back at Alyssa's house, the group gathered around. "From what I can tell, they wanted our weapons....." said John.
"But, that makes no sense. Why would Blade want your weapon when he already has one?" said Alysssa.
"I LIKE CHEESE!!!!" said Angelic, jumping up and down.
"Blade wasn't after the weapons. He wanted to challenge John to another fight, to see if he could win, and he failed again. That's 2 wins and no losses for John, yet Blade still chases after John...." said Nin.
Alyssa shivered at the thought of that big hooded guy with her teeny tiny rapier. "So, what if they come back? Do you think their in cahoots with E.B.?" said Alyssa. "I don't think so. Hiei doesn't work that way." Said Nin, with his immense knoweldge of Shonen Jump manga. "But...didn't he partner up with Kurama and that other dude when they stole those artifacts from the Underworld?" asked Alyssa. "That's not the point!!" said Nin. "The point is, they don't know it, but if they suceed in stealing our weapons, their also aiding in the destruction of our world by E.B. So, whatever happens, we can't let them get these weapons. I can't believe I'm saying this but....I think we should leave them at Angelic's house". Nin bit his lip in case of an uproar. He was right. "ARE YOU CRAZY!?!?!?!? She can't even find her toothbrush in the bathroom!!!" said Alyssa. "I don't want some blood-stained weapon in my house! I might get nightmares!!" shouted Angelic. "I can't believe you'd suggest something like that! We're leaving the fate of the world in the hands of a boy-crazy-chocobo-loving teenage girl?!?!?!" shouted John.
"I know it may seem risky, but it's even riskier if we keep the weapons with us! They don't even have to worry about Angelic, because they didn't see her during the fight. They don't know she's here. The most obvious places to look would be with us!!" said Nin. "Mmm.....good point..." said John.
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(ZOMIGOSH YOU DID TEH KAWARIMI THINGY!!! XD Best ninja trick ever.)
"One problem, though. We're roommates."
"Oh, forgot about that... well, just hide them in her room."
"I guess so." John sighed. "You're okay with that, right, Angelic?"
"I guess. Though I hate having to manage those... things... but I guess I can do it." Angelic frowned. "But, isn't there someone else who can?"
"You're the closest. We'd bug Ryou but his yami form might take over, and we'd ask Alexis but she's a block away."
"One problem, though. We're roommates."
"Oh, forgot about that... well, just hide them in her room."
"I guess so." John sighed. "You're okay with that, right, Angelic?"
"I guess. Though I hate having to manage those... things... but I guess I can do it." Angelic frowned. "But, isn't there someone else who can?"
"You're the closest. We'd bug Ryou but his yami form might take over, and we'd ask Alexis but she's a block away."
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"o m g!alexis!i TOTALLY 4got about her!is she ok?! m g!i gotta go check up on her!"she said running 2ward the door.
woah!"john said grabbing her arm."1,u need 2 go w/ sum1 & 2 yur ears?"john said.
"oh...yeah...."she made her ears go away."john come then!i need 2 check up on her!"she said running down the hall.she flew down the stairs & ran outside tripping on the step.she scraped herself.she got up & ran 2 alexis house.
she stoped & knocked on the door.no answer she tried again.no answer.she broke in & looked around the hole house.no1 was thier.john had just got there as alyssa ran outside.
"come on!were goin 2 the hospital!"alyssa shouted.
"coming!"he said taking sum breaths & running.alyssa got there & asked 4 her.she wasnt there.she called ryou & he said yes.she said shed be right over & she ran outside.
"come on john!stop running so slow!were goin bk 2 the apartments!ryous!"she scareamed running 2 them.she ran up 2 his building.& knocked on the door.he opened it.
"hi."alyssa said panting.
"hi.come in?"ryou asked nicly.
"thanx."she said walking in.she sat down on the couch & looked around.she hadnt been in his apartment 4 a while & he moved sum stuff.
"just 2 let u no....alexis is a demon now...."ryou said.
"what?"alyssa asked.
"taken over by naraku....& so am i!"he shouted lunging @ her.
"ah!"she said falling 2 the ground.
he reached in2 his pocket & took out a knife & stabed alyssa on the face.from her eyebrow 2 the edge of the crease in her lip.she jolted bk in pain.he traped her in a corner while she was trying 2 get away.he stabed her 39 times in diff spots.she screamed bloody murder.she tryed 2 get up but was 2 weak.
"feh.stupid fool."ryou said getting up.he kicked her & kelt bk down.john came & knocked on the door.
"ryou?ya home?"john asked."ryou?"ryou was holding alyssas mouth so she wouldnt speak & dug the knife in her bk.
"dont speak or else."ryou said.
"ryou?"john asked.ryous hand slipped & let go her mouth.she screamed in pain.he stabed her again & knocked unconcious.
"stupid mortal!cant do anything right!"he yelled @ her getting up & kicking her again.
john burst through the door & noticed what had just happened.
woah!"john said grabbing her arm."1,u need 2 go w/ sum1 & 2 yur ears?"john said.
"oh...yeah...."she made her ears go away."john come then!i need 2 check up on her!"she said running down the hall.she flew down the stairs & ran outside tripping on the step.she scraped herself.she got up & ran 2 alexis house.
she stoped & knocked on the door.no answer she tried again.no answer.she broke in & looked around the hole house.no1 was thier.john had just got there as alyssa ran outside.
"come on!were goin 2 the hospital!"alyssa shouted.
"coming!"he said taking sum breaths & running.alyssa got there & asked 4 her.she wasnt there.she called ryou & he said yes.she said shed be right over & she ran outside.
"come on john!stop running so slow!were goin bk 2 the apartments!ryous!"she scareamed running 2 them.she ran up 2 his building.& knocked on the door.he opened it.
"hi."alyssa said panting.
"hi.come in?"ryou asked nicly.
"thanx."she said walking in.she sat down on the couch & looked around.she hadnt been in his apartment 4 a while & he moved sum stuff.
"just 2 let u no....alexis is a demon now...."ryou said.
"what?"alyssa asked.
"taken over by naraku....& so am i!"he shouted lunging @ her.
"ah!"she said falling 2 the ground.
he reached in2 his pocket & took out a knife & stabed alyssa on the face.from her eyebrow 2 the edge of the crease in her lip.she jolted bk in pain.he traped her in a corner while she was trying 2 get away.he stabed her 39 times in diff spots.she screamed bloody murder.she tryed 2 get up but was 2 weak.
"feh.stupid fool."ryou said getting up.he kicked her & kelt bk down.john came & knocked on the door.
"ryou?ya home?"john asked."ryou?"ryou was holding alyssas mouth so she wouldnt speak & dug the knife in her bk.
"dont speak or else."ryou said.
"ryou?"john asked.ryous hand slipped & let go her mouth.she screamed in pain.he stabed her again & knocked unconcious.
"stupid mortal!cant do anything right!"he yelled @ her getting up & kicking her again.
john burst through the door & noticed what had just happened.
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"Ryou... how could you... Alyssa... YAAAAAAH!!!!" John went berserk. He immediately brandished blade and dashed at Ryou, who faded to the left, dodging. John followed up by swinging in a circle, and, once again, Ryou moved out of the way. John was about to shift to Flame Angel form when he heard Alyssa's voice.
"John, he's not himself... Naraku got to him..." She tried to sit up, but collapsed onto the ground.
"Alyssa!" John ran over to her and picked her up. He tried to run out of the door, but Ryou got in the way.
"I can't let you g-..." Ryou put his hands on his head, shutting his eyes. "J-john, go... get help... fast... I'll hold him back!!!" Ryou shouted as he furiously tried to force Naraku back. John ran past him and out of the door. He put Alyssa on the ground, and immediately began to heal her.
"Come on Alyssa... we can't do this without you... I can't..." John prayed hard. Alyssa's wounds weren't healing. John began to pour some of his own energy into her, trying to heal her. It was working a little, but it wasn't completely working. "Wait, your sword..." He took her sword, and touched it to her. Tears began forming. "Come on, Alyssa... please... COME BACK!!!" With that shout, a massive energy triggered from her sword. A ray of light shone down on them, as Alyssa's wounds began to disappear. She got up after a few minutes, woozy, but okay. "Oh, thank God... Are you...?" John fell to the ground, exhausted. Alyssa looked at herself. All her wounds were like they never existed in the first place.
"Whoa. So this is what the sword did." She looked at John. "Take a break, I got this covered." Ryou came running.
"Are you ready to- OOMPH!!!" Alyssa socked him in the jaw, making him go unconscious.
"I'm sorry, Ryou, this isn't your fault... you'll forgive me once this is over." She tried her best to drag John back over to Alexis's house, away from the sidewalk. John woke up for a second, smiling at her. "Thank you, Lord" was all he mumbled before he fell asleep again.
"John, he's not himself... Naraku got to him..." She tried to sit up, but collapsed onto the ground.
"Alyssa!" John ran over to her and picked her up. He tried to run out of the door, but Ryou got in the way.
"I can't let you g-..." Ryou put his hands on his head, shutting his eyes. "J-john, go... get help... fast... I'll hold him back!!!" Ryou shouted as he furiously tried to force Naraku back. John ran past him and out of the door. He put Alyssa on the ground, and immediately began to heal her.
"Come on Alyssa... we can't do this without you... I can't..." John prayed hard. Alyssa's wounds weren't healing. John began to pour some of his own energy into her, trying to heal her. It was working a little, but it wasn't completely working. "Wait, your sword..." He took her sword, and touched it to her. Tears began forming. "Come on, Alyssa... please... COME BACK!!!" With that shout, a massive energy triggered from her sword. A ray of light shone down on them, as Alyssa's wounds began to disappear. She got up after a few minutes, woozy, but okay. "Oh, thank God... Are you...?" John fell to the ground, exhausted. Alyssa looked at herself. All her wounds were like they never existed in the first place.
"Whoa. So this is what the sword did." She looked at John. "Take a break, I got this covered." Ryou came running.
"Are you ready to- OOMPH!!!" Alyssa socked him in the jaw, making him go unconscious.
"I'm sorry, Ryou, this isn't your fault... you'll forgive me once this is over." She tried her best to drag John back over to Alexis's house, away from the sidewalk. John woke up for a second, smiling at her. "Thank you, Lord" was all he mumbled before he fell asleep again.
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all alyssa had was 1 scar that didnt go away & that was the 1 from her eyebrow 2 her lip.she ran her fingers over it a few times & looked around.she looked bk @ john.
i hope hes ok....i hope ryoull be ok...i cant belive all this is happening.lord,why?why did u do this?was it 2 help show sum2 the way?its all because this happened that johns in the state hes in.....please let him get better lord...i love him....as a brother type thing.u no what i mean but please just cure him or give me strength 2 do it w/.please.
she began 2 pray.she prayed 10-20 mins & got up drgging john the rest of the way 2 lexys house.she got there & knocked on the door a few times.nuthing.she waited & waited & waited & waited & there was still no answer so she rested against the side of the house waiting 4 alexis,not planing 2 fall asleep but did.
i hope hes ok....i hope ryoull be ok...i cant belive all this is happening.lord,why?why did u do this?was it 2 help show sum2 the way?its all because this happened that johns in the state hes in.....please let him get better lord...i love him....as a brother type thing.u no what i mean but please just cure him or give me strength 2 do it w/.please.
she began 2 pray.she prayed 10-20 mins & got up drgging john the rest of the way 2 lexys house.she got there & knocked on the door a few times.nuthing.she waited & waited & waited & waited & there was still no answer so she rested against the side of the house waiting 4 alexis,not planing 2 fall asleep but did.
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WOOSH! John suddenly woke up. He sat up straight, on Alexis's couch. He looked over, seeing Nin watching some TV. John leapt up and out of bed, really energized.
"Oh, you woke up. Sheesh, the two of you had me scared for a bit."
"Really? How long were we asleep?"
"A few hours now."
"Whoa. Is Alyssa fine?"
"Yeah. I don't know what happened, but judging by what happened, you two got into a fight. What happened?" John filled Nin in on the details.
"I'm gonna go see how Alyssa's doing." John walked over. He looked in various rooms, finally spotting Alyssa in Alexis's bed. She was sleeping, but starting to wake up herself. She rubbed her eyes, surprised where she was. "Hi there, you okay?"
"Yeah... I think... what time is it?"
John looked at the clock. "Looks like 4:00. So much for chilling out this Saturday, huh?" They laughed. Alyssa got up and out of bed, went to the bathroom, fixed her hair a bit, and went over to the living room.
"Oh, Alyssa, good, you're up too." Nin stretched, then resumed watching TV.
"Oooo... I like this show." Alyssa sat down and watched TV.
"...yeah, why not? Gotta take a break sometimes." John sat down too. "Nin, have you seen Alexis or Ryou?"
"No, neither of them were here when I got here," Nin said, gaze fixed on the screen.
"Oh, you woke up. Sheesh, the two of you had me scared for a bit."
"Really? How long were we asleep?"
"A few hours now."
"Whoa. Is Alyssa fine?"
"Yeah. I don't know what happened, but judging by what happened, you two got into a fight. What happened?" John filled Nin in on the details.
"I'm gonna go see how Alyssa's doing." John walked over. He looked in various rooms, finally spotting Alyssa in Alexis's bed. She was sleeping, but starting to wake up herself. She rubbed her eyes, surprised where she was. "Hi there, you okay?"
"Yeah... I think... what time is it?"
John looked at the clock. "Looks like 4:00. So much for chilling out this Saturday, huh?" They laughed. Alyssa got up and out of bed, went to the bathroom, fixed her hair a bit, and went over to the living room.
"Oh, Alyssa, good, you're up too." Nin stretched, then resumed watching TV.
"Oooo... I like this show." Alyssa sat down and watched TV.
"...yeah, why not? Gotta take a break sometimes." John sat down too. "Nin, have you seen Alexis or Ryou?"
"No, neither of them were here when I got here," Nin said, gaze fixed on the screen.
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"well memeber?ryou was @ his house even after.......what happened."alyssa told john.
"oh yeah."john said.
"alyssa....what happened 2 yur face?"nin asked.
"what do u mean?"alyssa asked.
"uve got a scar on yur cheeck."nin said.
"oh yeah.i-i 4got about about that......i tend 2 4get."alyssa told him.
"yeah....sumthin bad happened 2day....not very gd."john said.
"yeah....not very gd @ all......sumthin i dont ever wanna remeber."alyssa said sadly bringining her legs up 2 her chest & putting her chin on her arms.she felt the scar & wished it wasnt there @all.
"stupid naraku."alyssa said 2 herself.
"we just gotta 4get about him.just keep lookin 4 him."john said.
"im so worried 4 ryou & lexy though."alyssa said looking up @ the wall & bk down @ the floor.she got up & walked in2 the bedroom again & sat by herself.she looked around & just sat agaisnt a wall.
"oh yeah."john said.
"alyssa....what happened 2 yur face?"nin asked.
"what do u mean?"alyssa asked.
"uve got a scar on yur cheeck."nin said.
"oh yeah.i-i 4got about about that......i tend 2 4get."alyssa told him.
"yeah....sumthin bad happened 2day....not very gd."john said.
"yeah....not very gd @ all......sumthin i dont ever wanna remeber."alyssa said sadly bringining her legs up 2 her chest & putting her chin on her arms.she felt the scar & wished it wasnt there @all.
"stupid naraku."alyssa said 2 herself.
"we just gotta 4get about him.just keep lookin 4 him."john said.
"im so worried 4 ryou & lexy though."alyssa said looking up @ the wall & bk down @ the floor.she got up & walked in2 the bedroom again & sat by herself.she looked around & just sat agaisnt a wall.
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"Well... one thing's for sure, Naraku doesn't have a full control over them. I remember, when Alyssa was injured, Naraku forced Ryou into our way, but Ryou held Naraku back. Either Ryou's gotten a lot stronger against this kind of stuff, or Naraku's not as powerful as he tries to make himself seem."
Nin leaned forward, chin on hand. "Either way, that just means it'll be easier. Ryou's not as weak as he used to be when it comes to mind control, I noticed that already. But, suppose Naraku's getting weaker? All I know is this is going to end pretty quickly."
"Good, Alyssa needs that. ...you know what, I think I'm gonna go pay him a visit." John said with a twisted smile on his face. "It's been a while since I fried his rear end over on the pirate ship. He probably just wants revenge on us for that. Besides, I've been getting a little bored." John stood up.
"John, maybe that's not-" John walked out of the door, but returned right away.
"DARN IT! Why does it have to rain?"
"What's wrong, John, rain's not gonna hurt you."
John held his sword out into the rain. Some sparks flew, but otherwise the sword produced no flame. "Water plus fire equals no."
"Heh, better not get on Alyssa's bad side then." Nin laughed.
Nin leaned forward, chin on hand. "Either way, that just means it'll be easier. Ryou's not as weak as he used to be when it comes to mind control, I noticed that already. But, suppose Naraku's getting weaker? All I know is this is going to end pretty quickly."
"Good, Alyssa needs that. ...you know what, I think I'm gonna go pay him a visit." John said with a twisted smile on his face. "It's been a while since I fried his rear end over on the pirate ship. He probably just wants revenge on us for that. Besides, I've been getting a little bored." John stood up.
"John, maybe that's not-" John walked out of the door, but returned right away.
"DARN IT! Why does it have to rain?"
"What's wrong, John, rain's not gonna hurt you."
John held his sword out into the rain. Some sparks flew, but otherwise the sword produced no flame. "Water plus fire equals no."
"Heh, better not get on Alyssa's bad side then." Nin laughed.
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"What the? Over at the apartment? Nin, Alyssa, sorry, I'll be right back." John went over to the apartment with Angelic and put out the remaning flames that the rain couldn't reach. The two of them headed back to Alexis's place.
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"i hered that!"alyssa scremed from the other room.
"opps."nin said."oh yeah?what i say?!"he asked.
"john said water+fire=no.then u said better not get on alyssas bad side then."alyssa said being quite again.she didnt no what 2 do.she had just gotten beat up by 1 of her best friends & her other best friend almost died.she had no idea where alexis was @ & she was getting worried.
"wow.shes gd."nin said.
"she is though."john said.alyssa walked out after it stoped raining.
"im coming w/ u john."she told him.
"ok.then lets go."he said.they ran outside & tracked naraku down.alyssa was tracking him w/ her cat nose.
"found him!hes over there!"she said changing bk 2 normal.
they ran over 2 the building.they ran inside trying 2 be quite about it.but alyssa triped & fell making a noise.naraku glanced over & saw alyssas head.
"this cant be gd....run!"she told him getting up.naraku ran over & grabed alyssas wrist & twirled her 2wards himself.
"opps."nin said."oh yeah?what i say?!"he asked.
"john said water+fire=no.then u said better not get on alyssas bad side then."alyssa said being quite again.she didnt no what 2 do.she had just gotten beat up by 1 of her best friends & her other best friend almost died.she had no idea where alexis was @ & she was getting worried.
"wow.shes gd."nin said.
"she is though."john said.alyssa walked out after it stoped raining.
"im coming w/ u john."she told him.
"ok.then lets go."he said.they ran outside & tracked naraku down.alyssa was tracking him w/ her cat nose.
"found him!hes over there!"she said changing bk 2 normal.
they ran over 2 the building.they ran inside trying 2 be quite about it.but alyssa triped & fell making a noise.naraku glanced over & saw alyssas head.
"this cant be gd....run!"she told him getting up.naraku ran over & grabed alyssas wrist & twirled her 2wards himself.
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