Magic

[wackyjo]

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The pressure​

Rising​

Boiling hot​

Over flow​

Deluge​

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Confused ​

Trapped​

A bit mixed​

Up​

And down we go on a magic river ​

Jump​

In​

No more life​

To be gone​

In the swirl​

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And the current taking you away​

To a different land​

 

[heaven_eyes]

oooh, that would make a really good story...you should carry on with it! that could be the blurb!

 

[Jasma]

oooh, that would make a really good story...you should carry on with it! that could be the blurb!

I agree- follow up on that one- and post the follow up- I'm interested in where it would go from here.