Lost!

[Raptureman]

Abbey felt relief as she saw a man crouching over the unconscious girl. Abbey dashed across the sand and forced a bottle of water into the girl's fingers. Slowly, the girl raised the bottle to her lips and took a sip. Rebecca. Her name was Rebecca. She was slipping in and out of consciousness, but had managed to whisper her name.

Abbey nodded at the man's question. "Yes, I called for help. She's bleeding, she looks really injured, but I don't know what to do!"

She watched as the man appeared to check Rebecca over, who was managing to sip from the water bottle Abbey had brought. She must have been thirsty. Abbey took Rebecca's hand in hers and brushed a strand of hair off the girls' face.

"It's going to be okay, Rebecca. I'll help you." Abbey paused, then continued. "We'll help you. I'm Abbey." She turned to the stranger. "Abbey Turner. Thankyou for helping me, I was so confused...it's so upsetting to see her like this. Do you think she will be okay?"

"I don't know actually, but she has a good pulse, so I think she might make it," Jake said, sighing. He looked around and sai, "The rescue teams better get here soon..."

 

[christian cutie danni]

"Can I get you anything else ma'am?" The flight attendent asked as she set a tray in front of Rhiannon.
Rhiannon shook her head and patted her belly. "NO, thank you, I think I'm going to be okay. Although, I think Mitch might like some coloring crayons and some paper, if that's okay?" She asked, her thick australian accent rolling off of her tounge.
The flight attendant smiled. "Sure thing!" She leanded over and patted little 1 year old Mitch Sutherland's blonde head, and went to get the paper and crayons.
He was sitting in his booster seat next to Rhiannon, happily munching on some pretzles. Rhiannon smiled at her son, and sighed contentedly.

But that smile suddenly dissappeared as the plane began rocking and jolting. Terror crept across her face as people went flying across the plane, and oxygen masks dropped down from the compartments. Frantic, but trying to keep calm, Rhiannon slipped the oxygen mask over her son' sface, then one over her own. The back of the plane ripped off, and a peice of metal came flyinf twords Mitch's head. Rhiannon had no time to think. She threw her body, as best as she could being strapped in, over her son, and felt a sharp pain go through her spine. Then everything blacked out.

A baby lay in the sand, screaming. His blonde hair was cacked with dirt and blood, and sand, his clothes torn nearly to shreds. His cry peirced the sky, alerting people on the beach near him. His parents were no where to be found, and no one was running around screaming for him. He just lay there, crying.

His blue eyes were wide open, fearful, with tears running down his cheeks. He looked to be almost a year old, but not quite. He was wearing a white onsie, with a pair of blue sweats. Though both were torn apart, it was obvious of what he was wearing.

 

[bumblebee62331]

Abbey stared down at Rebecca through teary eyes. When the man spoke, she looked up, startled, as if she had forgotten he was there. She had been lost in her own little world, hoping and praying that Rebecca would survive.

"I don't know actually," the man said, "but she has a good pulse, so I think she might make it." He sighed and looked around. "The rescue teams better get here soon..."

Abbey nodded. "How long do you think it will take them to find us? They are looking for us, aren't they ..." She hesitated, realising she didn't know his name. "What can I call you?"

 

[christian cutie danni]

((Could someone please find Mitch? And here's their bio: http://www.christianforums.com/t2530490-rhiannon-mitch-sutherland.html#post21454858 ))

 

[RelientKFan2006]

Jacob Hunter

Jacob Hunter:http://www.christianforums.com/t2530614-jacob-hunter.html#post21455307

Jacob was sitting in the airport waiting for the boarding call for his flight. He was nervous about leaving, but excited also. He couldn't believe he had gotten a full-ride scholarship! He had a bad feeling that he could shake..He didn't know why.

An hour later he sat on the plane, waiting to take off. His mind flashed back to two weeks ago.

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Jacob's phone rang.

"Hello."-He said in his deep voice.

"Jake, it's me..."-He heard Jennifer's voice. Jennifer had been his girlfriend since his senior year of high school. He planned on proposing when he came back on his next break. He couldn't imagine his life with anyone else....

"Oh..Hey-Jen, are you okay?"-He asked. She had been crying.

"Jacob, you know I love you, but we need to talk..."-Jacob's heart sank. Jennifer said that she was willing to try a long-distance relationship, but she didn't know if it would work...She hadn't given him a definite answer yet.

"Okay..."-Jacob said.

"This isn't going to work. I can't do it..."-She said. "I'm so sorry..."

Jacob buried his face in his hand. The silence was deafening.

"I won't go..."-He said finally. "I'll stay here and graduate. It's not worth going if I'm going to lose you..."-Jacob said, standing up.

"No...The truth is...I knew this was coming for a long time..."-She said.

"What? Jen, give me a few minutes. I'll come over and we can work things out."-Jacob pleaded, his heart pounding. He couldn't lose her.

"No..I've thought this through. It's over, Jake."-She said through tears.

Jacob swallowed the lump in his throat. "You're sure we can't work this out?"

"I'm sure..."-Jennifer

"The only reason is the distance? because I'll come back. You're worth it to me. I don't want to lose you, Jen. I love you."

Jacob's statement was met with silence, and then the words that broke his heart.

"I met someone else."-She said.

Jacob felt like someone had punched him in the stomach.

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Jacob leaned back in his seat. He had never been a crier, but that night, he cried harder than he had in his whole life. Now, he was starting a whole new life. A life without Jen...

Jacob peered out the window as the plane took off, his mind spinning a hundred miles an hour.

He finally drifted off to sleep.

About an hour later he woke up. There was panic. His ears started popping as the plane descended rapidly. He blacked out because of the sudden pressure change.

When he woke up he was on a beach somewhere. He looked around. People were screaming and running around. He tried to sit up and quickly realized how sore he was. Other than the soreness, he didn't seem to be injured. He remembered learning about how unconscious people survive more accidents because the impact is less jarring.

He slowly stood up. He knew by looking around that people would need his medical help...He wasn't fully qualified as a doctor, but he was sure he could be some help. He got up, pulling his bag over his shoulder, looking for anyone who needed help.

 

[CJF]

Yelena snaped awake at the sound of a baby crying. She ran towards the sound, and soon found a baby, seemingly only a year or so old, lying on his back, crying. Yelena, loving to work with kids, picked the boy up and held him close.
"It's okay," she cooed as she stood, hoping that her voice was calm enough to calm the boy. "Shhh, it's okay."
Yelena smiled into the boys adorable face. She began to walk around, trying to take him away from all the screams and panic, in hopes that he might quiet down. She looked around for any parents who would be missing a child, but no one seemed interested.

 

[christian cutie danni]

((thanks!))

Rhiannon awoke with a throbbing pain in her back. She was spralwed ober two torn up seats, covered in blood. The seat that had the most blood on it though was the one with the child's seat. Mitch!

Rhiannon, unaware that most of the blood was her's, went into a tizzy. She dragged herself out of the plane wreckage, and onto the sand, where she watched as a steady line of blood behind her. She turned her head to a funny angle and realized that she had a huge chunk of metal sticking in her upper back, between her shoulder blades.

"Mitch..." She whispered softly. She rolled over on her side, and panted. She couldn't really stay on her stomache, as it was bulging, and she couldn't lay on her back because of the metal. But her side made her shoulders hurt. She was so dizy from te pain that she closed her eyes and passed out.

 

[Victory of the Cross]

Danny Walked over to Drake "Umm Buddy you alive?" he asked booting the exhausted man in his ribs hoping to get a response from him, "Hello" he mocked as he waved his hand infront of the mans face hoping for some reaction, no matter how annoyed pointless.

 

[Raptureman]

Abbey stared down at Rebecca through teary eyes. When the man spoke, she looked up, startled, as if she had forgotten he was there. She had been lost in her own little world, hoping and praying that Rebecca would survive.

"I don't know actually," the man said, "but she has a good pulse, so I think she might make it." He sighed and looked around. "The rescue teams better get here soon..."

Abbey nodded. "How long do you think it will take them to find us? They are looking for us, aren't they ..." She hesitated, realising she didn't know his name. "What can I call you?"

In a fake Australian voice he said, "Jake Hayvern at your service." Now, in his regular voice he said, "I don't know when they will be coming, but when they get around to it, I will be glad. So, what about this young miss we are working on eh? Maybe there is a doctor among us that can help..."

 

[RN4CHRIST]

As she stumbled onto the beach, she saw bodies lying everywhere. Near her she saw a lady lying on her side with a huge chunk of metal protruding from her back. A trail of blood led back to the plane. Kneeling beside her she asked,Can you here me? The woman groaned in responce. Looking around she saw people leaning over others, helping. I have to help this woman, she thought."Hey! Anybody, I need some help over now! ANYBODY!! HELP!" She saw a man look up and start running her way. Good, she thought, somebody to take care of her. I know she doesn't want me around. Everyone around me ends up dying, she thought. The words echoed through her head, changing to a man's voice. She remembered him saying, Everyone around you ends up dying. Right Kate.

 

[CJF]

Yelena sighed with relief when the little boy began to stop crying. She smiled, glad to finally be able to think straight. She had no idea who this baby's parents were, nor how to go about looking for them. Finally deciding that the baby needed some peace and quiet, Yelena sat on the sand, and sang softly to the infant.

 

[bumblebee62331]

Abbey nodded to Jake. "I'll go and see if I can find a doctor. Rebecca seems to be doing okay but I want someone to look at her - there's too much blood and I can't seem to find any big injuries." She didn't want to add that she hadn't thought of removing the girl's clothing to check. For some reason, that seemed ... invasive, even at a time like this.

Abbey jumped to her feet and started shouting to everybody, running towards the plane wreckage. "Is there a doctor here? We need a doctor! Please help us!"

 

[RelientKFan2006]

**Jacob Hunter**

Jacob heard someone calling for a doctor. He knew he wasn't one yet, but he also knew he might be the best chance these people had at survival.

His bag over his shoulder, he ran to the girl that was screaming for a doctor.

"Do you know what's wrong with her?"-Jacob asked, kneeling next to her.

The girl shook her head, her face refelcting the terror that she no-doubt felt.

He went into autopilot. He had volunteered at hospitals several times, so he knew the first thing to do was to check vital signs. He put his fingers up against her neck, taking her pusle, which was dangerously low. At the same time he brought his ear close to her mouth, making sure she was still breathing.

Knowing that nothing was blocking her airway, he turned to the girl. "Has she been unconscience the whole time?"

"Yes-Well-No, she told us her name and drak a sip of water...."-The girl stammard.

The injured girl's clothes were soaked with blood. Jacob had no idea where the injury was.

He quickly began unbuttoning her shirt. The other girl put her hand on his, stopping him. "You can't do that."

Jacob looked up into her frightened face. "It's alright. I'm a doctor." The girl didn't move. "Do you want her to die?" The girl hessitantly removed her hand, letting Jacob continue.

((Squigui, if you want me to continue with Rebecca unconscious, you'll have to let me know (PM me or something...) what's wrong with her and if you want Jacob to treat her.... ))

 

[bumblebee62331]

Abbey sat back and watched as the man unbuttoned Rebecca's shirt. He had said he was a doctor but she had always had a fear of doctors and medicine. She knew it was none of her business, that Rebecca needed the help, but Abbey couldn't help thinking about what would happen if it was herself in need of medical assistance. Would she have accepted help? Probably not. She probably would have fought a doctor off.

She shook her head to clear her thoughts. The water bottle was nearly empty. Abbey got to her feet and started towards the ocean. The green-blue water looked so tempting, so delicious. She hadn't realised just how thirsty she had become and they had only been here for a short amount of time. What if they didn't get rescued for weeks? Would they starve to death? Die from dehydration? Be eaten by animals?

Abbey surpressed a shudder. She was kneeling in the water, slowly filling the bottle with the ocean.

 

[Raptureman]

**Jacob Hunter**

Jacob heard someone calling for a doctor. He knew he wasn't one yet, but he also knew he might be the best chance these people had at survival.

His bag over his shoulder, he ran to the girl that was screaming for a doctor.

"Do you know what's wrong with her?"-Jacob asked, kneeling next to her.

The girl shook her head, her face refelcting the terror that she no-doubt felt.

He went into autopilot. He had volunteered at hospitals several times, so he knew the first thing to do was to check vital signs. He put his fingers up against her neck, taking her pusle, which was dangerously low. At the same time he brought his ear close to her mouth, making sure she was still breathing.

Knowing that nothing was blocking her airway, he turned to the girl. "Has she been unconscience the whole time?"

"Yes-Well-No, she told us her name and drak a sip of water...."-The girl stammard.

The injured girl's clothes were soaked with blood. Jacob had no idea where the injury was.

He quickly began unbuttoning her shirt. The other girl put her hand on his, stopping him. "You can't do that."

Jacob looked up into her frightened face. "It's alright. I'm a doctor." The girl didn't move. "Do you want her to die?" The girl hessitantly removed her hand, letting Jacob continue.
((Squigui, if you want me to continue with Rebecca unconscious, you'll have to let me know (PM me or something...) what's wrong with her and if you want Jacob to treat her.... ))

((There are a few little things I want to point out about this post... 1. I already checked her vital signs, and unless things got seriously worse she would be still slightly fine. 2. You controled Byootaful's character. It's ok you are most likely to do some things you juust were promoted from newbie. Just catching ya before the mods do.))

 

[christian cutie danni]

Rhiannon's eyes slowly flitted open, as she felt the hot sun beat down on her, and she licked hre lips. They were cracked and dry, and tasted very bloody. Rhiannon realized that it had been a long time since she'd had any water.

Struggling to sit up, she saw a woman standing next to her. Knowing that she looked very young, the age she was anyways (17), she layed her hand on her belly and tugged the woman's leg. "Please.... Please, help me find my baby..." She croaked desperately.

 

[Raptureman]

Abbey sat back and watched as the man unbuttoned Rebecca's shirt. He had said he was a doctor but she had always had a fear of doctors and medicine. She knew it was none of her business, that Rebecca needed the help, but Abbey couldn't help thinking about what would happen if it was herself in need of medical assistance. Would she have accepted help? Probably not. She probably would have fought a doctor off.

She shook her head to clear her thoughts. The water bottle was nearly empty. Abbey got to her feet and started towards the ocean, but Jake, who had been helping the doctor, called out to her. "You can't get water from the ocean, it's salty. You can't drink it."

Abbey turned. "Where do I get water from? It's nearly empty."

The doctor leaned over Rebecca. "We'll find somewhere soon. Just stay here with the girl for a while. Hold her hand, talk to her. We need to keep her conscious for as long as possible."

Abbey crouched next to Rebecca and started stroking her hair. "Her name is Rebecca." She hesistated. "I'm Abbey and this is Jake. Thankyou for helping us."

((Same thing I just told the other guy. I know you guys are new but the only time you can mention or in your posts have a character do something is: 1. If is is your character. 2. If another person's char just did something you want to incorporate into your post. 3. If a char is a NPC. (Non-player Character.) Only then can you control a character.))

 

[bumblebee62331]

((Same thing I just told the other guy. I know you guys are new but the only time you can mention or in your posts have a character do something is: 1. If is is your character. 2. If another person's char just did something you want to incorporate into your post. 3. If a char is a NPC. (Non-player Character.) Only then can you control a character.))

((Yeah I copied the other post. I was trying to bring Jake back into it. It's hard when you're only making your character do things because you end up writing a sentence per post, then waiting for a reply. Anyway, sorry.))

((SEE ABOVE EDITED POST))

 

[Raptureman]

Abbey sat back and watched as the man unbuttoned Rebecca's shirt. He had said he was a doctor but she had always had a fear of doctors and medicine. She knew it was none of her business, that Rebecca needed the help, but Abbey couldn't help thinking about what would happen if it was herself in need of medical assistance. Would she have accepted help? Probably not. She probably would have fought a doctor off.

She shook her head to clear her thoughts. The water bottle was nearly empty. Abbey got to her feet and started towards the ocean. The green-blue water looked so tempting, so delicious. She hadn't realised just how thirsty she had become and they had only been here for a short amount of time. What if they didn't get rescued for weeks? Would they starve to death? Die from dehydration? Be eaten by animals?

Abbey surpressed a shudder. She was kneeling in the water, slowly filling the bottle with the ocean.

Jake looked too see Abbey filling a waterbottle with water from the ocean. He quickly tod her, "You can't drink water from the ocean! It is too salty. It would deffinately not help our friend."

 

[bumblebee62331]

Abbey paused and stared down at the water. She could feel Jake watching her. "Will we go mad? I heard somewhere that if you drink from the ocean, you go mad."

Suddenly, it hit her. They were stranded. On an island. People were dead. There was a plane crash and she survived. Abbey collapsed into the water, her frail body shaking as she cried - really cried - for the first time in weeks.