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Jurassic Park Add-on Story!!!

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This is obviously a Jurassic Park add-on story.
RULES:
1.No killing another persons chatracter
2.You can be a person or a Dino
3. No cussin
4. No Sex
5. Romance is allowed

NAME: Kathrina Grant
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
DESCRIPTION:

PERSONALITY: Friendly to everyone, has a bit of a temper
AFFILIATION: Palientologist, daughter of Alen Grant


I will post as soon as I can. Fell free to join, and start the story.
 
Name: Ethan Raize
Age: 20
Sex: um...Im a stud! (guy)
Personality: Suave ladies man. He is a helpless romantic in search of that speacial one. He has been searching for a while...He is good with his temper, but is also very good with guns.
Weapons of choice: A sword, works well in close combat. Otherwise, he uses a shotgun. If not that, then automatic pistols! (modeled after Dante from Devil May Cry)
I will post when someone else does, I dont want to start it out.
 
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Sorry. Forgot about it. Here we go.

Kathrina walked into her commanders office.
"Yes sir?"
"Kathy, we need someone to do a special job, and we could only think of you. We need you to go on a special trip with a group of scientists to a certain Island."
"Would this certain Island happen to be Isla Nublar?"
"You're too smart. Yes, it would."
"Count me in."
Kathy got her instructions and ran from the tent to get her things.

"Kathy! Your insane. Your dad will never approve of you going." Kathy's friend Sara said.
"Dad wont have to know. Besides, I know at least one person going."
"Who?"
"Ethan Raize. Remember him?"
"Uh-hu. A little to much. He died your coffee remember?"
"Hey, he was nine. Give him a break. Anyways, dad knows I need to experience this."
"Exsperience being eaten by dinosaurs? You're crazy."
Kathy got her things, and headed for the airport.
 
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Well....I have never seen the entire thing of Jurassic Park...but I suppose I could join....BTW...why did you drop the Chicken O' Neil add on DARRIONS?

NAME:Celine Mayport
AGE:21
GENDER:Female
OCCUPATION:Fossil Analyst
DESCRIPTION:She has an awful temper, but catch her in a good mood and she is the funniest, liveliest person in the world. She enjoys her job, but unfortunately she gets grossed out very easily.
PHYSICAL APPEARANCE:
 
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NAME: Consuelo Alita (consolation/noble in espanol)

AGE: 20

GENDER: F

OCCUPATION: Microbiology Major at Miami University in Ohio.

PERSONALITY: quiet and fun

ANCESTRY: Spanish

DESCRIPTION: Dark hair + eyes, dark skin.

I have to go, will describe her more thoroughly later.
 
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Ethan walked through the twisting corridors of the lab. He was one of the leading scientists on genetics, humans and animals. A desire to learn about a species long gone left him getting hired by Ingen. After years of study, he was a leading job holder, and a scientist. Now, he was going on an expedition to the island of Isla Nublar.
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"Ethan, I suppose you learned of the fact that you are on the mission to Isla Nublar. You need to know the conditions...A one," Ethan's boss flipped through some papers, "Kathrina Grant." Ethan swallowed hard, that was the one woman he could not be 'suave' around....except when he was nine...agh...
Ethan's boss let his glasses fall to his chest. "Know of her?" Ethan smiled...
"Yeah, yeah I do." His boss tilted his head,
"Well, Romeo, here is the mission technicalities. Get out of here and pack..."
 
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Consuelo smiled gently at the girl who clung to her skirt, great liquid eyes pleading with her. Those green eyes had always managed to turn her heart over before, but since she was already on the tarmac, the wind in her hair and the ticket in her hands, she dared not turn back.

"Cons'a, don' go!" begged Amarie, her husky voice belying the temper tantrum just under the surface.

"I'm sorry, honey, but I've got to go. I'll be back soon, see?" she ruffled the girl's hair and turned to the tall woman beside her.

"I wish you didn't have to go," she reasoned. "If I had my choice, you wouldn't put a foot onto that Nublar soil. Why do you have to go? My daughter would certainly appreciate . . . . "

Consuelo shook her head. "I'm sorry, but It'll be better for me if I go. This is a once-in-a-lifetime experience, especially for a simple collage major."

"Now, you know better than that. You're a genius, and teach your professors more than they teach you."

"I hope to get a job someday working for Ingen, and this is the perfect opportunity to find out if my wants are correct. I will miss tutoring your little angel."

Amarie was contemplating something. "Mommy, let me go with Cons'a."

"No, honey. Not today. Maybe another day, hmm?"

"She's not coming back soon," said Amarie gravely. "I want to go."

"No, darling. You can't."

"Why not?!"

Consuelo left them there on the tarmac, clutching her suitcase tightly and taking a deep breath before she stepped aboard the research plane, leaving from Orlando, Florida, to carry people and equipment to Nublar island for scientific purposes.

She nodded to the pilot and settled into her seat. Looking around, she identified several people who had been referred to her by friends. Kathrina Grant, just one year younger than her, majoring in Palientology and daughter of a famous scientist; Ethen Raize, another college major; Celene Rayport, a girl who she'd seen around campus. They waved and the engines fired up, the seatbelt sign blinking.

She saw Germaine Hollier, a famous Italian who was a genius in every aspect. She had read his articles on evolution vs creation in many books, and found it difficult to dispute his arguments, even though she was a staunch evolutionist. Well, she was at the moment. She was feeling less and less sure of her standing as she learned more about the world.

Elliot Layland, a college student from Illinois; Trina Daymond from Alaska, who had corrosponded some before their flight; and various others she'd never seen before.

The plane was a small one, carrying around thirty researchers. The thrum of the engines got into her blood and vibrated up her spine, chilling and thrilling her. She was hoping this trip was all she'd hoped it to be.
 
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Celine set her small bag under her seat, smiling shyly at the people around her, who didnt look so comfortable themselves. She spit, her long hair was blowing in her mouth. She turned off the small fan attached to the chair. Sighing, she pulled a book out pf her bag, ands tried to look interested. But who really cared about 'The Secret Life of the Amoeba' anyways? She wished she had not let her boss-Mr.Crossman, pack most of her books. She dug through the bag, finding only more science volumes that weighed a ton each. She already knew everything there was to know about fossils. She couldn't wait to get to the island, where she would get her second look at real dinosaurs. She had to hand it to her boss, he did have a knack for getting her into the most amazing situations. She felt her ears pop as the plane rocketed a few thousand feet.
 
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I just had to many add-on stoys on my hands. I'm gonna drop a couple of others to.


Kathrina hurried onto the plane, suprised to see most of the seats were empty. She found a window seat, close to the front. She took out her head phones, closed her eyes and set her head against the back of her seat listening to the music. She suddenly got the feeling someone was looking at her. She opened her eyes and jumped.
"Ethan! Goodness, you startled me. What was your question?" Kathrina asked, not noticing the nervous look on Ethan's face.
"Is, this spot taken?" he asked pointing to the isle seat. Kathrina shook her head, and Ethan sat down next to her.
Once all of the students were assembled, their leader got onto the plane. Kathy noticed the brown hat, and jacket all to well. The man turrned around. Yup. Her dad.
Allen Grant smiled his "hi's" to everyone, and explained the rules.
"I should have known that I would never have been able to go on a trip without my dad." Kathy mumbled. The plane lifted off, and within two hours they were flying over the Island. Kathy took pictures of almost everything. After two rolls of film, she decided to stop and wait for soemthing exciting. Suddenly, the plane jolted.
"We've run into some rough winds. Please put your seat belts on, and remain calm." the pilot said over the innercom. Kathy started to get a little tense. Everyone was really. Kathy's dad was the only one who appeared calm. Suddenly, the plane jolted again, and one wing hit a tree. The plane started jolting all over the place, and soon was headed for a tree. Screams erupted from the plane is it banged from tree to tree. Kathy was throne from her seat, into the isle. The plane finally stopped. Kathy stood up, and everyone waited an explanation. The pilot came over the innercom.
"Everyone, remain calm. I am-" he suddenly screamed. The plane shook a little bit, and then alot. Suddenly, the front of the plane was pulled from the body. People screamed as they looked into the deadly face of a Dinosaur. Kathy ran to her dad.
"It's a Spinosaurous Egypticus." Dr. Grant said, taking her hand.
Everyone made their way to the back of the plane as the Spinosaurous made it's way to the plane. The Plane rocked back and forth and fell from the tree. It landed, and rolled a few yards. When it stopped rolling, everyone ran from the plane.

Kathy followed her dad, as he practically led the group away from the plane. When they felt safe enough, they stopped and made sure everyone was there. No one was missing from the group of around fifteen students.
"Great. This is the third time I've been stranded on one of these Islands." Allen said quietly.
Kathy, breathing hard, took out her map of the place. She had no idea where they were. "I certainly didn't exspect to be stranded on this Island." a student said, his voice cracking. Suddenly, the ground started shaking.
 
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Ethan breathed out.
"Great, we are already in harm's way. Well, Dr. Grant, please tell me you brought along...certain, how should I put it, defense items?" From the look on his face, Ethan knew the answer. Opening his bag, he pulled free a small case. Opening it, he assembled a winchester pump-action shotgun. Loading it fully, he slung it into a leather holster he strapped on his side. Pulling out another item from his bag, a black trench coat, he put it on.
"Hey, its gonna get cold at night!" Again he pulled something else. He pulled out two leather holsters and threw them to Kathy. He then threw two pistols at her.
"You know how to use those? Anyways, at least I am prepared. Shall we move on?"
 
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The group, with Dr. Grant and Ethan in the front, followed them around the Island, not making much noise. Most everyone knew that the Island was pretty dangerous, so they kept quiet. Not wanting to attract any hungry visitors. After about two hours of walking, they took a break. Kathy sat down, and took out her cantine. At least everyone came prepared with plenty of food and water. Kathy took out her journal.
Boy was this day exciting! Being sent crashing down on this Island, and then almost eaten by a Spinosaurous! Wow. I never knew a day could be filled with so much excitment. I wonder if it will get better as we go along? Our group has since taken a break, and will be heading out again soon. Where my dad has in mind, I don't know. But he was on this Island once before, so he knows it rather well. The Dinosaur he fears the most is... Kathy stopped writing. She felt eyes watching her. She looked around, and everyone was either staring at the ground, or praying. But she felt as if she was being watched. She suddenly tensed up. She heard it. It was behind her. She started breathing heavily, fear taking ahold of her. No one else seemed to be aware of her disturbed feeling, but she knew that an unwelcome guest was ready to make it's way into the camp. Kathy dared not move. She closed her eyes, praying hard for protection. She decided to ignore the feeling, and keep writing.
...is the velocaraptor. Dad had a very bad experience with them. More than one actually. Personally, I really don't care to have any exsperiences with them at all. If I will or not, well let's not go there.
"Break over." Dr. Grant said, standing. The group stood and continued walking. Kathy stood slowly, and gathered her things. A petteit girl named Carmen walked up next to her.
"Are you okay?" she asked.
"I'm fine, thanks."
"No you're not. You look as if you've just seen a ghost." Carmen said in a whisper.
"Well, in this place sometimes your mind can play tricks on you. But I felt as if something was behind me that whole time." Kathy said. Carmen nodded, as if she understood. Kathy looked to her right, and her eyes widened. Indeed, she saw two yellow eyes. Looking at her. Glaring at her. She looked again, and saw three or four shapes runn ahead, but the one stayed where it was. Kathy looked to the left. More eyes, and figures. Kathy tried to keep calm. This is impossible! How can I stay calm when the group is surrounded by Velocaraptors?
 
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Celine noticed the eyes, too. She felt herself start to tremble, and her skin turned clammy. She ran up to Alen, and whispered in his ear. "Um...do you know we have a few visitors?" She motioned towards the eyes. He nodded. "Just stay calm, and don't make any sudden movements." Celine nodded and tried to keep her cool, but it is kind of hard to keep your cool when you are being stalked by velociraptors.
 
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Consuelo shivered as the shock began to set in. She was lying still in the tangled wreckage of the plane, and the fire was creeping nearer.

Groaning, she dragged a hand across her forehead and looked bitterly at her snapped leg, aware that it basically meant death. "Lord, help me," she murmured, trying to stagger to her feet. She failed, and she lost her footing with the other leg, skinning her elbows and bloodying her hands. She finally managed to grip a rock, and pulled herself to her feet.

She scanned the debris around her, and was relieved to see her bag safe and out of the fire area, almost within reach. She stretched out her arm, and looked around suddenly at the crackle from the bushes. Instantly stilled, she stared frantically from her bag to the bushes. She dove for her bag and a snarl echoed through the trees.

A blurred shape was racing across the flat area, and Consuelo saw the red glare in dozens of eyes, drawn by the stench of death. Hopelessly, she scrambled through her bag, and finally felt the cool kiss of metal against her blood-caked palms.

Mercilessly, they advanced, the veliocrapters' eyes watching her. To their utter amazement, the creature they hunted let loose a high-pitched bark and a puff of smoke coincided with a loud crack. The veliocrapters recoiled as one of their own hissed angrily and thrashed on the ground.

Consuelo raised the pistol again. She only had eleven shots left, but she had more ammunition in her bag -- that was why it was so heavy, not because of the books. The 12-shot Navy Revolving pistol was heavy, but her wrists were strong and her eye was steady. She squeezed off another shot before she grabbed two metal rods and tore some fabric from one of her skirts. Keeping a wary eye on the four remaining veliocraptors, she bound her leg with the skill of the Spanish and pulled herself to her feet.

A shout of alarm, and then a cry -- she sensed someone nearby and pivoted, gun raised. A boy of about sixteen crouched there, his eyes wary. He was gaunt and thin, but looked healthy otherwise. They stared at each other for a few minutes, and Consuelo didn't lower the gun. "Who - are - you?" she asked haltingly, and he looked at her, uncomprehending. It struck her that he looked Portugese.

"Hello? Quem são você?" she asked in halting portugese.

The boy perked up considerably. "Meu nome é Shad. Eu estou supondo que você veio no aço ardente do céu?" he asked, and she paused. She knew that he had called himself 'Shad', and that she came from . . . burning steel? From something. She gave up trying to translate.

"Você fala o inglês? Ou Espanhol?" the boy shook his head. "Vindo com mim. Seus amigos sairam mais cedo, nós terão que montar para ir rapidamente bastante." She didn't attempt to try and translate. She just followed him.

There was a snorting sound up ahead, and she saw him climb onto something big and heavy. He helped her up and then she realized that there were scales underneath her. Shocked, she tried to ask something, but gave up. Her leg throbbed terribly and all she wanted was to get someone to splint her leg.

Darkness shut around her as suddenly as a falling curtain -- there was virtually no twilight. She felt the warm throb under the cold metallic scales. She finally identified it as a scerapter, a quick - footed not unfriendly raptor that could be tamed, despite the normal differences and hunger for fresh meat.

She realized that she'd been asleep quite a while when she felt cold earth under her. She could see something flitting ahead of her, and groaned. More Veliocrapters she thought, and slid off the Scerapter, falling to the ground as soon as her good foot touched ground. There was the sound of muffled thuds, and a sharp crack or two.

Something loomed above her, and she shouted hoarsely. The Veliocrapters chose that moment to attack the main group. Pack instinct was strong, and she identified herself as a straggler. She snapped up her gun and her thumb fell on an empty chamber. Click. She turned it to a full chamber and held it in front of her as if it would ward the Veliocrapter away.

She fired, missed, and fired again. She scrambled away as a heavy leg shattered a limb off the tree behind her. Her hands shaking, she dropped the gun and picked it up, losing a shell. Trembling, she stood very still for a moment before she half - ran, half - staggered to the main group. Ethan and Dr. Grant were facing at least six of the dinos, and off to her left the Portugese boy's Scerapter was in a bloody battle with two more.

"Sella!" she half - turned towards Celene before her weakness rushed at her again, assailed her and overran her. She twitched for a moment, shuddered, then slid to the ground in a dark haze. Kathrina was rushing up also, from somewhere -- hem torn and a red stain on her arm.
 
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Ethan fired another round into a raptor. He was going through his amunition fast, but he was not worried. One came from behind, and he turned and fired a shot into it's head. The creature stumbled to the ground and died.
"We need to keep moving, Dr. Grant, any ideas?" The man shook his head, he was preoccupied. Ethan looked to see a raptor approaching a woman, he fired a round, and then pulled a knife and finished it. Another came at him while he was on his knees, so turning, he lifted it up with his feet and kicked it behind him. Firing a round into it's head, it died. He looked around for Kathy, but could not see past all the raptors approaching. They all began croaking at once, and Ethan was suddenly aware of an idea.
"Everyone, gather in the center, form a circle back-to-back, I have a plan!"
 
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NAME: K-zee

SPECIES: the greater Archaeopteryx

GENDER: Female

DESCRIPTION:


K-zee has green plumage on her back, with a blue underbelly ,tailfeathers and some wingfeathers. The only other colour she has is red tips to her wings. There are claws on her wing 'elbows' that help her latch onto prey (mainly the lesser Archaeopteryx) or the branches of her eriye.

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NAME: Zabee

SPECIES: the greater Archaeopteryx

GENDER: Male

DESCRIPTION:


The colours of the greater Archaeopteryx vary greatly. Long estranged from their kin, the lesser Archaeopteryx, they are slowly dying out due to the lesser's numbers. Zabee has green plumage with yellow underbelly and white-tipped wings.
 
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Kathy helped Consuela to a log. Kathy turrned just as Velocaraptor jumped at her. She quickly shot it. Kathy looked for her dad. She saw him firing next to Ethan. More Velocaraptors hurled at the group. To many. The group needed to act quick. Around fiteen Raptors had been shot, and another twenty were comming. A few people in the group had been attacked. One maybe killed. Kathy fired at every Raptor she could. She tried to make her way to her dad. Suddenly, a Raptor jumped on her back. Kathy was knocked to the ground. The air knocked out of her, Kathy tried to shoot it. But she didn't want to shoot one of the students. She couldn't see over her shoulder. She felt it ready to make the killing blow. Kathy kept trying to roll over. No use. She tried to at least shoot it's foot. No use. Kathy knew she looked lame, trying to roll over, and then trying to look over her shoulder, but at that moment, she didn't care. She tried her last plan.
"Daddy!!" she screamed at the top of her lungs.

Allen Grant heard the scream. He turrned, and looked for Kathy. He couldn't see her. He frantically searched the group, while shooting Raptors at the same time. He had to find his daughter. He couldn't see her! A break in the sea of Raptors and students enabled him to see her. Allen raised his gun, but couldn't get a good enough visual of the Raptor. He fired, but missed. He fired again. Missed. He fired, and it looked like he hit it.

The Raptor screached, but didn't get off of her back. Kathy looked over her shoulder, and rolled over. She kicked the Raptor in the head, and imediatly shot it. It fell ontop of her, dead. Kathy kicked it off of her, and stood up. She turrned, and waved at her dad. He smiled and waved back. Kathy stopped waving. A Raptor was behind him!
"Watch out!"

Allen turrned, and shot the Raptor. Not another group!
 
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Celine was terrified, never having to defend herself against these beasts. Usually the ones she encountered were gentle herbivores. But not today. She picked up a sharp peice of debris from the smoildering plane. The end was caught on fire, but it didn't hurt Celine because the debris was about four feet long. The fire seemed to ruffle the raptors, scaring a few off. She swung it at them in all directions, until most of the ones surrounding her were dead or had run off from fear. She went over to Kathy, desperately trying to fend off a few more raptors that had come up behind her dad. Celine motioned toward the fire, And Kathy caught on. She held up a stick from the ground, and Celine caught it on fire. Together, they scared several of the dinos off.
 
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Okay, I will have a dino too. What fun!

NAMEuckie
AGE:6 mos.
GENDER:Female
SPECIES:Edmontosaurus
APPEARANCE:Sort of a bluish gray, with dark blue eyes and white feet and 'hands' and white on the tip of the tail. The little spiky things on the head are grey.

http://dinosauricon.com/images/edmontosaurus-pb.html
 
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Kathy was suprised at how well it worked. Kathy motioned to her dad and Ethan to follow Celine's example. They did, and in no time, the Raptors were retreting. The group didn't waist one second. They all got torches, and ran off, following Allen through the forest.
 
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