Is this any good?

[Overkommer]

I like nature and sleeping in it, gladly with a hammock, so I made a picture from just free ones online with transparent background, would you care to sleep here?

 

[aiki]

Interesting. The black background doesn't produce in me a sense of peacefulness. Colors like green and blue evoke this feeling much more strongly in people, generally. Also, what is the white thing? I like that you're working to produce a sense of depth in the arrangement of the objects in the picture. What is the thing to which you most want to draw the viewer's eye? Whatever it is, it should be situated and rendered such that the other elements in the picture don't compete with it. Right now, my eyes is as drawn to the orange flower, the dragonfly, and the hammock as to the white energy(?) thing with the sparkles.

 

[Overkommer]

Interesting. The black background doesn't produce in me a sense of peacefulness. Colors like green and blue evoke this feeling much more strongly in people, generally. Also, what is the white thing? I like that you're working to produce a sense of depth in the arrangement of the objects in the picture. What is the thing to which you most want to draw the viewer's eye? Whatever it is, it should be situated and rendered such that the other elements in the picture don't compete with it. Right now, my eyes is as drawn to the orange flower, the dragonfly, and the hammock as to the white energy(?) thing with the sparkles.

Maybe you analyze things too much as you get older?

 

[aiki]

Maybe. Mabe you don't analyze things enough.

 

[tall73]

Maybe you analyze things too much as you get older?

He took your piece seriously, and therefore offered a detailed critique.

If you ask people to evaluate it, some might do so.

 

[tall73]

What is the thing to which you most want to draw the viewer's eye? Whatever it is, it should be situated and rendered such that the other elements in the picture don't compete with it. Right now, my eyes is as drawn to the orange flower

Agreed, unless the goal is to carry the viewers attention out of the piece having the bright orange flower on the edge is distracting. It is bright, saturated, and fairly detailed relative to some of the other elements, and draws attention that direction.