How Long?

[vbentley]

Im filled with ecstasy,
Bcoz of what Uve done for me,
Took a lot of time to see,
The extent of Ure mercy,
Everytime i fall away,
U pull me back into Ure grace
U poured ure love and Ure grace ,
To take me off my wicked ways .

Even though i have failed Him,
He's always by my side
Even though im not worthy,
He gave me His life

Ch:
How long can i run away from u Lord?
How long can i hide from u?
How long can i keep on making excuses
It can never go on.

When my life was a mess U straightened it out,
When i was feelin so down U lifted me up
All my pain U took away when u died on the cross
So i can be free and sing for joy..n now i know

Even though i have failed Him,
He's always by my side
Even though im not worthy,
He gave me His life

Ch:


this poem was written at a time when i was just coming back back to the Lord from a period of 'Backsliding'

 

[Hidden_Love]

It's beautiful! It's sucha heartfelt cry for redemption.

The "Ure"'s and such are confusing though, and it looks nicer, and reads easier if you take the teeniest amount of time, and spell the words properly

I really like it, and you can even post your songs in the songwritign forums.

 

[Quixotic the Pedestrian]

good job.