Hook me in 20 words or less

Barrenlimb · Jun 28, 2007

I'll give it a whirl.

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It was an ordinary day, if by ordinary, you mean having your wife leave you, boss fire you, landlord evict you and getting stuffed in the trunk of a Chevy.

Nilla · Jun 28, 2007

I knew it, the very first time I knew this would be..

ena33 · Jun 30, 2007

With a smile I closed my eyes and opened my arms wide. Today anything was possible.

NavyGuy7 · Jul 1, 2007

Some stories should never be forgotten, as they hold the key to freedom. This was the most important one, forgotten...

(This is similar to the one in my RPG. This is the OOC thread; follow it to the main thread to find my full post. I think you will enjoy it. http://www.christianforums.com/t5619877-ooc-stone-of-eternity.html)

Brynwizard · Jul 12, 2007

Life intrudes. Or so I thought until I spotted the eighty-foot mega-shark, and then I thought death intrudes. Big time.

NavyGuy7 · Jul 13, 2007

Lol!!!!!!!!

Lessien · Jul 13, 2007

Despite everything you've ever been told, squirrils are actually quite vicious and power-hungry little creatures.

sunstruckdream · Jul 13, 2007

Barrenlimb said:
I'll give it a whirl.

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It was an ordinary day, if by ordinary, you mean having your wife leave you, boss fire you, landlord evict you and getting stuffed in the trunk of a Chevy.

^^^is it bad that i laughed aloud??

(not in a bad way. i like this one a lot)

Shabby · Jul 13, 2007

The barrel of the handgun felt cold against my cheek and I suddenly wished I hadn't heard that conversation years ago.

sunstruckdream · Jul 14, 2007

Poison. The pads of my fingers, rather than being red with nectar, were tinged a sallow yellow-green. The peach slipped from my fingers, and I let it roll.

avatarblade2000 · Jul 15, 2007

Tad sniffed.

Waffles.

He grimaced.

Why? In the wilderness, of all places, was he smelling waffles?

It wasn't fair.

Christianfantasy · Jul 16, 2007

More great lines!

Lessien, I hope you were serious about the squirrels; you summed up my views on the little beasts perfectly.

Sunstruck, were you thinking of Labyrinth when you wrote that last one? I loved it!

Avatar: you made me LOL--and I love to laugh!

Here's another:

Youre disgusting!
No, youre disgusting!
Brill turned away; watching a pair of toad-monkeys argue had never been his favorite pastime.

avatarblade2000 · Jul 17, 2007

Thank you.

Toad-monkeys = HOOKED.

This is, by the way, an awesome thread.

ena33 · Jul 17, 2007

I know, it's over the limit.

Gwenora held the lamp close to her body as she snuck outside the door. Kyna was a light-sleeper, and more than once she had caught Gwenora sneaking out during the night.

avatarblade2000 · Jul 17, 2007

You see, monsters don't really exist.

Trevor, however, failed to remind himself of this when one came crashing through the bushes toward him.

...

Whoops, too long. My bad.

jennidawn · Jul 18, 2007

She laughed, the kind of laugh that filled a room and caused everyone to laugh with her.

NavyGuy7 · Jul 18, 2007

The blood...the blood dripped down the wall, looking like red lightning. They were coming. They would...

I wake up.

ena33 · Jul 20, 2007

In that bottomless pit of despair I believed that life was a meaningless journey through halls that never ended and yet were filled with horrors and problems--never had I thought to look for the good in life.

man, over the limit again!!

PublicNewSense · Jul 22, 2007

Morning hid ominously behind a veil of disquieting darkness, revealing itself only through the anxious assail of my 8am alarm.

No kidding, this is hard, but very effective, I think. Good exercise for writer's block. Is there anyone critiquing us?

Becky153 · Jul 24, 2007

Blackness overwhelmed me, and the last thing that I could clearly see was the smiling faces around me.

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