Hook me in 20 words or less

brinny · Aug 16, 2008

And thus it was. A nefarious catyclism of abhorrent idiosyncrasies. (hehe just playin' with words)

we're all wordsmiths, y'know

it's like kneading dough, not being' scared of words, but 'playin' with them, twisting and turning then every which way and upside down, inside out until they dance on the page and bring life to an inanimate object....like painting a picture, using words...

brinny · Aug 16, 2008

Oops...double dutch chocolate with a cherry on top double post....

gotta clean now
be back
quicker'n yu can say
paddywhack

well maybe not

brinny · Aug 18, 2008

From the hellish abyss it rose.

Vehementi Dominus · Aug 18, 2008

30 words? Ok.

I'm in your room and I'm holding a knife. You can't see me, so don't even try, just keep reading and I'll stay hidden. I can tell if you stop.

30 words exactly.

brinny · Aug 18, 2008

hehe it's 20 words or less

Vehementi Dominus · Aug 18, 2008

Ah, so it is, I blame lack of sleep.

Still, did you read all 30?

If so, then it worked!

Vehementi Dominus · Aug 18, 2008

Smegging double posting.

I clicked "EDIT"!

brinny · Aug 19, 2008

I read all 30 words. What worked?

Vehementi Dominus · Aug 19, 2008

If it didn't work, you wouldn't've read the other 10.

brinny · Aug 19, 2008

LOL if what wouldn't have worked?

Vehementi Dominus · Aug 19, 2008

Vehementi Dominus said:
I'm in your room and I'm holding a knife. You can't see me, so don't even try, just keep reading...

If that didn't work, you wouldn't've read the rest.

brinny · Aug 19, 2008

LOL ok. And your point is.....

Vehementi Dominus · Aug 19, 2008

Vehementi Dominus said:
Ah, so it is, I blame lack of sleep.

Still, did you read all 30?

If so, then it worked!

brinny · Aug 19, 2008

me no understand

brinny · Aug 19, 2008

ROFL!!! i get it..

haha i gotta get some sleep

Jesus_Luvs_techies · Aug 19, 2008

Those days all you could do was two things, run and hide.

Jesus_Luvs_techies · Aug 19, 2008

The dripping from the celing was anoying. It would be ringing in her head for days.

brinny · Aug 19, 2008

With every ounce of strength she had left, Sofia clung to the barge. Water, angry and swirling rose menacingly.

Jesus_Luvs_techies · Aug 31, 2008

Wesley looked over the horizon. It was coming...the end was near.

Jesus_Luvs_techies · Aug 31, 2008

Christianfantasy said:
Thanks, Shicoco; that clarification was very helpful. Now I have another question. My all time favorite theme, for general fiction as well as fantasy, is redemption. (Not that I always write about it; its just my single favorite theme.) Do you consider that one overdone?

[Note. In this context, Im not using redemption to mean Christian salvation. I mean it in a more personal sense, especially in terms of a character whose life has suffered a major setback, either of his or her own making or due to circumstances beyond their control, and who at long last either starts putting the pieces back together again, or else is given a second chance. Thats not the best explanation, but maybe it helps.] (Sunstruckdream, if youre reading this, think Moonfisher. )]

Also, Shicoco, do you have a link for Christian Writers? What is the purpose of the group? Do you beta for each other, or just discuss writing in general?

Wow, Vehementi DominusI LOVE your opener!! It's great!

Ninjitsuthat is an intriguing theme.

Well I made christian writers to meet the writers who don't always post here. But it's also meant for writers to be able to share they're stories and ust hang out in a differen't envioronment than you have here. And it's sopposed to be a place where you can ask questions about writing, and see what you can change in your stories.

Hook me in 20 words or less

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