Have I Said Something Wrong?

[andythemes]

Not too long ago, I made a wedding video for my church mates.

On WhatsApp, their response was positive and asked if there was anything they could do to support my video work. I replied that they could share my website with people they know, but they didn't respond.

This was my original response:

Hi [name],

Glad to know you and [name] enjoyed the wedding video. I appreciate you wanting to support my work. You can share my website to friends or people you know.

It's [my website].

God Bless.

Besides the minor grammar error (should've been "with friends..." not "to friends...") I can't see anything wrong with my response, but can't help but think that I could've worded it differently.

How can I improve it?

Am I just overreacting?

 

[Albion]

You're probably overreacting. Your message didn't really require or invite a reply unless you expected a "Thanks. We'll do that" kind of sign-off.

 

[Kris Jordan]

I agree with Albion and your wording was fine.

 

[Daniel Marsh]

Not too long ago, I made a wedding video for my church mates.

On WhatsApp, their response was positive and asked if there was anything they could do to support my video work. I replied that they could share my website with people they know, but they didn't respond.

This was my original response:

Hi [name],

Glad to know you and [name] enjoyed the wedding video. I appreciate you wanting to support my work. You can share my website to friends or people you know.

It's [my website].

God Bless.

Besides the minor grammar error (should've been "with friends..." not "to friends...") I can't see anything wrong with my response, but can't help but think that I could've worded it differently.

How can I improve it?

Am I just overreacting?

Please let others know about me: your website and ask for a reasonable donation.

It is likely they were asking how much to pay you.

Thank You,
your name and phone number