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God Will Give Me Justice-ADD-ON STORY!

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I will intro my other char a little later, but for now....

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Jaz kept her eyes front and back straight as Tres Zapatos was led through the main street of the city. So this is how they try to break my spirit! she thought, Bah! They think I am as weak as the others. I shall not give them the satisfaction! She folded her hands neatly across the saddle in front of her, and gave the soldier a cold smile. "Shall we begin? Or should I lead my horse since you are so incapable of it?"

She recieved a lash of the horsewhip across her shoulders, and bit back a harsh retort as the men walking in front of her proclaimed to everyone that she was

"Jazper Manzrique, daughter of a traitor and abomination to the kingdom."

Ha! she said mentally, laughing inside. Cheatue D'if is heaven compared to this place. She only realized she'd said it out loud when the loud crack of the whip and the stinging pain jolted her back to herself.

She ignored the pain and rode quietly down the street, and she was aware that almost every person was on the street to watch her, and the counts + countesses were watching calmly as they had attendents fan them and serve them O'rs De'vors and fresh fruit. Most of them looked smug and a little bored, and she laughed mentally at them as she thought of her one friend who followed to the prison with her weapons.

Jaz fingered the poisoned knife in her skirt, but didn't dare use it until she reached the cheatue. Then she'd have plenty of chances.

She smiled sweetly at a sour-face guard. "Is that the worst you can do?"

The man gritted his teeth and looked away, aware that even a scorned woman could have nothing worse done to her than whipping and starvation. Anything beyond that would incite immediate death. And he was one of the ones who knew that mere hunger and blood would do nothing to weaken this steel-eyed girl.
 
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NAME: Lavinya(La-vin-yuh) Donter
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
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PERSONALITY: She's friendly, but can be very emotional. She makes friends easily, and has very little enamys. Her biggest enamy...is the King.
WEAPONS: a silver sword, two gold knives
TRANSPORTATION: A soft grey colored horse by the name of Shadow.
BIO: She's a younger sibling to Edmond Donter who was sent to the Cheatue d'If for not being able to pay his taxes.
STATUS: En route to the Cheatue d'If along with Jazper.
 
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Lavinya followed the guards, close enough to see where they were going, but far enough so that she wouldn't appear to be following.
Those guards are so gulable. They will soon see that Jazper is not alone in this fight. she though. Lavinya, though on the outside appeared harmless, on the inside was a warrior. She was lethal, and has every intention of getting revenge for her brother.
 
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I know it's Dantes. I changed it to Donter, because I didn't want it to become "The Count of Monte Cristo" add-on but I guess it already has. :o Oh well. Do you think I should change it, or keep the one I have?
 
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The group moved a slow, but steady pace for about three day's, stopping every night for a rest. No one really knew where they were headed, but they're trust in Even kept them going. Rebecca found herself daydreaming about what Arannte might be doing. She missed her terribly, but the message sge got from her helped her alot. Rebecca often caught Edward looking at her.

Robin walked next to Rebecca, comforting her when she needed it. He could tell that Arannte's departure had caused her to be silent most of the time. Robin knew she was fine, and that she was only trying to get used to not having Arannte around. He didn't know what kind of connection she had with Edward, but that didn't seem to help either. Robin made sure that he was there for her when she needed him.

Rea couldn't get to sleep. The bed she had was to comfortable, for one, and she was to tired to sleep. She got up, quietly, so not to disturb Arannte. Rea opened the window next to her bed, grabbed a chair and sat next to the window looking out at the quiet night sky, filled with glittering stars. Again, she wished she could reach up inot the sky and grab one. But alas, they were still billions of miles away. Rea's mind drifted to her sister once again, and a wave of emotion swept over her. A single tear slid down the side of her cheak. She closed her eyes, and thought of her smile. She missed Sara terribly. Uncontrolable tears filled her eyes.
Why did she have to die? Why? Was the thought that pounded around in her mind. She couldn't figure out the answer. Quietly, she wept. Years of keeping her hurt inside, was finally comming out.
 
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Count Dontarz walked back to his estate. It was dawn, and suprisingly enough, Kinson was up. Count Dontarz and Kinson ate breakfast.
"How long do you plan on staying here?" Dontarz asked.


Christiana ran back into her room, only to be met by Countess De'Winter.
"Chris, where were you last night?" she asked, in a friednly tone.
"Forgive me M'lady. I had an airond to run." Christiana replied.
 
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