Freestylin (rate me please)

[shrty4chrst]

If only i could look through the eyes of Jesus
I'd see these souls layin in pieces
This worlds in need of some spiritual polices
Everywhere I go all I see is crime scenes
Another win for satin everyday is seems
I'm only seventeen youst to be lost nowhere ta go
Stuned growth I couldn't grow
Until you jesus came down
Turned a frown around
And reserected my life, wiped the pain and strife
Now I'm hittin crime scenes, winin one for the team
With the power of the almighty supreme
Now ima soulja caught up in a war
No blood and gore, just lives at stake
Slammin on satins breaks
Shake souls till they awake
No more mistakes

The power of ur love reaches the tallest of towers above

tell me how it is
thanx

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Love

 

[ChEeRupEMOkId]

Hey Paul, this is awesome! i rate it a 1000000 infinity! hehe love yah bro

-:-CrAzii WhYtE gIrL-:-

 

[TransformedByGrace]

hey man, that's pretty awesome... I deftly give it 10 points ABOVE the highest score... you need to get connected with a record compeny if u arent already!

I've written one rap song, still sorta changin some stuff, but I just sat down and wrote it one night about 1yr ago... I'll post it