Fear

[Christian4U]

i hope you guys like this...kinda my first time writing poetry...thanks

When a problem does arise
I run way to that spot in my skies

Feeling all the heavy gloom

I leave it in my small room



In that spot you can see

All the little birds and the trees

In that spot you can hear

Every little drop of an angels tear



When I am in those skies you see

That is when I feel like me

When all the problems are no more

I just sit on those clouds and count to four



I close my eyes and begin to pray

That all my worries will go away

I open my eyes to look and see

What there is waiting for me?



All the time that I am there

I feel like everyone really does care

I come back down from the clouds

While looking at all the crowds



That is when I finally know

That everyone’s love can really show

As long as they try and do their best

Then I know that I can finally rest.

-C4U

 

[Silver Saint]

Not bad at all. I liked it. I could offer some suggestions if you felt so inclined, but you didn't ask for them and it's not my place. If you are happy with it, then don't let my offer sway you.
Go in God.


I am aware,
Isacc

 

[Christian4U]

critizing is fine for me...anythign would be cool...