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[Mewtwo]

Hello.I need an online writing advisor.If you would like to be my writing advisor,please pm me OR reply,but I prefer a pm.Listen to one of my haikus.

Cows like to eat grass.
Cows like to graze the pasture.​

Do you like this Haiku?Once again,please pm(private message)me.Thank you all very much!​

 

[WPZanar07]

Hmmm...not exactly a haiku. It's missing a verse.

Haikus come in this form

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

 

[Jenafer]

I agree with WP.. a line with five syllabels, a line with seven syllables, and a line with five syllables. Some words can be tricky regards to syllables.. clap the syllables when speaking the words out loud.. then you can get a gauge if the lines have the right number of syllables.

For example: presentation has four syllables.. pres-en-tat-ion.