Comic too violent?

[tawni68]

Hi, I haven't posted in awhile... I'm Tawni. I am looking for opinions on a crazy comic I drew.. I would love feedback!!

 

[HarborOrange]

So basically, she was on her time of the month when some guy wanted to rape her, so she beat the snot out of him and he died?

Lima
Oscar
Lima.

 

[religious&reasonable]

Interesting... using a title that suggests a controversal topic for self-publicity. Nice tactic. \

now about the comic. If this is something you came up with in about 5 minutes I'd say it's pretty good, but if it took you more than an hour, I'd say it's amateur at best.

Then again I am an enourmous jerk who got a D in art two years in a row in middle school, so what do I know?

 

[Pineapple Lump]

lol
i think it's pretty good

 

[tawni68]

lol
i think it's pretty good

Thank you) I am not a great drawer... what details in it do you think are cool?

 

[Pineapple Lump]

i love the punchline
and the expression on the girl's face in the first frame is awesome
it just screams don't mess with me...which the guy didn't quite get i guess
and for someone who can't draw, you're really good at it
you've got your own style which is always a good thing. it's like a signature that tells people its yours...well, that's how i see it anyway
don't s'pose you got more?

 

[tawni68]

i love the punchline
and the expression on the girl's face in the first frame is awesome
it just screams don't mess with me...which the guy didn't quite get i guess
and for someone who can't draw, you're really good at it
you've got your own style which is always a good thing. it's like a signature that tells people its yours...well, that's how i see it anyway
don't s'pose you got more?

Thank you for the AWESOME feedback! For me, feet are really hard to draw - what do you think of the guy's feet?)

 

[Pineapple Lump]

it's much better than anything i could do
i reckon you did pretty well with the feet

 

[tawni68]

it's much better than anything i could do
i reckon you did pretty well with the feet

Thank you! I admit that his feet are probably the cruelest aspect of the comic...hehe

 

[Kitty.]

This is absolutely hilarious.

 

[tawni68]

This is absolutely hilarious.

Thank you!! What details in it do you think are cool?)

 

[Jack544]

Not violent enough. XD