RR imo the best you have done here in this thread is your hymn
"Had I been born near Jordan's flow" Reason being I am really into song poetry now and I myself have a whole thread of it.
Please comment on the song poetry thread and I will continue to comment on the song poetry you write.
Song poetry has such rhythms and rhyming harmonies. I think it would be,was and is ,a lasting tribute to Jesus.
-Greatcloud