inchristalone221 said:
*bump*
I need feedback on that paper before I submit it.
I thought it was good, but I had a couple of format suggestions. First, make sure to provide page numbers for your references. Second, deigning the use of first person is usually a good idea for academic papers. Third, it is proper to cite the Bible translation you are quoting. Aristotle was the Greek philosopher to posit an Unmoved Mover, in the
Physics, Book VIII. Moreover, Aristotle definitely affirmed free choice, distinguishing between causes
per se and causes
per accidens. He also drew a distinction between chance and luck. See
Physics, Books III-V. Oh, and lastly, in text citations should be placed inside the sentence (that is, before the period), unless it is a blockquote, at which time it comes after the last sentence.
Other than these minor formatting and historical points (which no one would probably notice, anyway), I thought the paper was good, the arguments clearly laid out, and the content well supported. Good job.
Soli Deo Gloria
Jon