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Dr. T

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Heres my story


Chars.

Name: Marshall Windu
Apperance: Dark, male, bald, brown eyes
Age:Guessed at 250+
Background:Couzint to Mace Windu
Status: Roug Jedi from the Outer Rim
Weapon: Two bladed Purple Lightsaber

Name: Jax Qwerty
Apperance:White male, Dark Filamentous on his scalp (hair), 5 o clock Shadow, Brown ocular pigmentation(brown eyes) Tall, about 6' 2", 200lb.
Age: about 28
background: orphaned at the age of 6, he joined a gang. later he quit the gang and started buying and selling information.
Status:drunk at begining of story
weapon:Dl-44 Blaster, MM9 wrist rocket, glop granades.

name: I-52T4 (I-5 for short)
Age: none
Background: Bought by Jax from a junk dealer, jax took alot of the restrainers off of him, givving him a sence of humor and the abbility to think for himself. also he has the downfall of greed.
Status:Old verson assisan droid, (meaning hes as close to a human as droids get)
Weapons: Has extreamly fast reflexis, finger blasters, Rockets, can sream that is physicly painfull and a worbling sound to releive aches and pains.

Name:Dark Lord Exar Kun
Age: none
Background:None
Status:Sith to the ultimate degree
Weapons: the force and a two bladed lightsaber(the first one ever made)*



*see the book "Darth Maul: Shadow Hunter By Michae Reaves, pg. 12
** other Chars will be introduced later
 
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Elohir

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Dr T. You're supposed to post the character information with your actual story in the creative writing forum.

Mochagirl, you are supposed to post your chapters if you want to, but right now there is no deadline set for the entry of the chapters. The ideal however is to get three chapters posted.

For you judges here's a list of the awards again.

Best Concept
Best Male Character
Best Female Character
Best Writer
Best Science Fiction Story
Best Fan Fiction Story
Best Allegorical Story
Best Fantasy Story
Best Christian Fiction
Best Christian Non-Fiction

Don't worry about most of them, but at least for now the first three are able to be discussed and voted upon.
 
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mochagirl

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Me neither! Hehe, actually, I'm still working on chapter four...I started the story about a year ago, but I set it aside for a long time, and only just recently started working on it again. :doh: A classic example of my writing habits, unfortunately.
 
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Tariel

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At least you did get started on it again Mochagirl! Usually when I abandon a story it stays abandoned...though sometimes I transfer the good parts into another story. Oh, and I just put chapter four up. It's short compared to some of the others, but it's there.
 
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