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Troy was limping along. He had a filling this was a Trab. He wanted out now. He wanted to end this now. He told Blaze to start the compound on fire. Blaze did just that. Troy and blaze started to limp towards the forest...
 
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Rachela saw Troy talking to Blaze. She had a feeling that something was wrong with this, and continued to follow them. She looked around cautiously and saw that she wasn't the only one interested in where troy and blaze were going. The luminous dark and evil creature was also following them. She had to take him out without them knowing.

She grabbed a stick and started to sharpen it in her sharpener. Then she ran at him quickly but quietly and jabbed it into his back as far as it would go. she pulled it out and continued untill the thing fell dead. She then dropped the stick and ran at blaze with a fire in her eyes.
 
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Blaze Led Troy to a small clearing. Troy and Blazed clibmed a tree. Troy saw tht the enemy coumpound was bourning quite well. Troy looked in the other direction and saw The coumpound. Troy sundenly got it. Blaze was burning a decoy coumpound. Troy turned to shoot Blaze, but Blaze was faster. Troy fell to te ground uncocious.
 
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Rachela charged up a fireblast and shot it at blaze just as Troy fell to the ground. Blaze lit up and fell down with Troy. Rachela shook her head and left Blaze there while she set off to the emergency superhero camp with Troy. While on her way there, she started thinking about her life as a superhero. She didn't know what she'd do, but she knew she couldn't do this all of her life. She wanted a real life, and this was great, but this wasn't the ideal life.

Rachela shook her head to clear her thoughts, but then she thought about Hans and Karianna. They loved eachother. Kari had a life in the compound world of the superheros. Rachela put all of her focus on finding Kari and Hans, but only after she got to the emergency base. She got there about five minutes later, and dropped Troy off. Then she took off to go back to the enemy compound and get Kari out of there.

She got back to the compound, and saw that the decoy was still burning. She then went through the path that she got out of her block through and got in again. She now had more tools, and she took her laser and cut a hole in her cell. It was very thick, but she managed to get through it. When she pulled the big block of metal out, she looked through the gaping hole into the opposite cell. It was empty. She went into it, and repeated the process. This time she had better luck. In the next cell sat Kari and Hans. She let out a woop, and then grinned as they looked up startled and teary-eyed.
 
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Kari and Hans, followed Rachela out of the compund, hand in hand. Just as they rounded a corner, they ran into a guard. Hans, with his flying abilities, lifted Kari off of the ground. Kari pulled a remote out of her pocket with her free hand, and pressed a button. Suddenly, out of nowhere gun fire erupted out of the compound. Kari looked down and saw it. She turrned to tell Hans to let her back down on the ground, when a bullet buzzed by her head. Kari spun around, ready to shoot at the person firing at her. Hans also turrned, forgetting for a breaf moment that Kari couldn't fly. Her hand slipped from his.

Kari still saw it. She had to keep her feet bellow her. Kari's body turrned upside down. No! She thought. She landed with a thud, on the ground. She stood, and stepped onto her board, and shot up into the sky, just as two guards ran at her.

Hans breathed a sigh of relief. Kari was okay. Hans kept shooting at the guards. He didn't know where Troy and Rachela were, but he knew they were somewhere close by.

Kari flew high into the air. She did a triple flip backwards, and fifteen upside-down spirals, and three right side up spirals. It felt good to be herself again. It was like old times. Fighting crime with the young man she loved by her side. Kari shot a glance at Hans and smiled. He was back. Forever. Just as she was ready to put her focuss on the guards, fear struck her heart. Hans had been shot! She watched him fall. She knew that if his wound wasn't fatal he wouldn't have fallen. Kari shot towards him. She knelt down, speeding her board up a bit.

Hans opened his eyes slightly. He was falling. He knew it. He had to start flying again. He tried to fly, he had to fly! He felt the sting of the wound in his cheast. He was able to get enough air, to set himself on the ground softly. He ripped a piece of his shirt off, and placed it on his cheast to stop the bleeding. It was then he realized that he'd been shot on the left side. He couldn't tell how close to the heart he'd been hit, but he knew it was close.

Kari landed next to Hans. He was a good enough ways away from the compound. He hadn't been noticed by the guards, which was good to.
"Hans?" she asked, kneeling down next to him. He opened his eyes. It was clear he was in pain.
"Hans, it's me." Kari said, tears flodding her eyes. Hans tried to sit up.
"No, don't move. I need to work on this wound." Kari opened up his shirt and gasped. The shot was directly where the heart was. Kari knew that a shot like that would kill. She had to stop the bleeding. She took off her white cotton jacket, and wrapped him up in that. She tried to not to think that he could die any moment.
"There." she said, smiling, tears of disbelief running down her face. She saw the color leave his skin.
"No." she said silently. Hans' face went blank, and his breathing slowed, and then stopped completly. Kari watched in pain, tears streaming down her face.
He's not gonna die. He's not gonna die, Kari. Get ahold of yourself. Please God! Don't let him die! Kari said breathing hard. She looked away, as more tears flodded her eyes. When she looked back, Hans was looking right at her, the color returning to his skin. A spark of hope glittered in her heart. Hans made an effort to sit, and he did!
"You're alive!" she whispered, and flung her arms around his neck, gently.
"Of course I'm alive. Why shouldn't I be?" Hans said. He wrapped his arms around her, and held her.
"Kari, as I was laying there, I knew that the would was mortal. But somehow I felt it wasn't my time. But I knew I was going to die. But just as the little bit of life left in me left, I suddenly felt a whole new breath of life flood through me and fill my lungs. The pain that I felt from the bullet, gone. I opened my eyes, and saw you with your head turrned away from me."
Kari, who was now sitting in front of him, said, "I prayed asking God not to let you die."
"You see? I knew it! When you prayed, little did you know that at that moment, God breathed life into me. He knew my time wasn't up yet. And He wasn't about to let a little bullet get in the way of His plans."
Kari smiled at the thought of her prayer innerceeding for Hans. She became serious.
"I thought you had left me." she said, another tear rolling down her face.
Hans stroked her face, wiping the tear away.
"I love you. I never have any intentions of leaving you. Though it happens. And if it ever does, know that I will love you, even through the pain of death."
With that, their mouths met in a passionett embrace.
 
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Rachela heard gunfire and saw Hans go down. She shot up into the sky and went to find Kari. She knew Kari would be with Hans. As she searched for them under the canopy tops of the forest, she had to avoid the gunfire from the guards. She wondered why they were shooting at her. To them she was supposed to be an allie, or at least appear like one. Her decoy must not've worked as well as she'd planned.

She dropped down into the forest, and looked around. Then she heard a noise. It was so small a noise, you wouldn't have been able to heard it unless in the stealth quiet. She followed the noise, and that's where she found Kari and Hans. They were kissing!

Rachela's heart jumped, and she chuckled lowly to herself. Then she backed out of the scene, because she didn't feel as if she belonged there. She backed up and right into Troy. She gasped and asked, "What are you doing here?"
 
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"I coud'nt let you die." Troy said. Rachela looked puzzled. Troy continued,"I had a vision when I was unconcious. I saw you fall to the ground with a bullet wound to the heart. I don't want you to die. I love you."
 
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Rachela backed against the tree.
"You really do?" she asked, amazed. This was what she'd been waiting for her whole life as a superhero. And now she was getting it. She peeked around the corner, grinned, and then turned around and gave Troy a kiss.
 
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Aww, how sweet. :) :kiss:


What really amazed Kari, was that Hans' bullet wound was gone. Completly. Blodd was everywhere, a sign that he had been shot, but his wound was gone. God had restored her lover 100 percent. Kari stepped onto her board, and Hans stood. They grasped hands, and shot into the air. The shooting stopped.
 
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Troy was happy. He kisse her back and they imbraced. It wasnt till later,m when they escaped that he learned abouts hans brush with death. They were sitting at the fire by the lake that they ere hidin g at. He heard a helacopter coming close...
 
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Kari and Hans put out the fire. They couldnt tell if it was an enamy chopper or an ally chopper, but they didn't want to take the chance. The chopper flew by, not noticing them. Once it was gone, everyone settled back down, but decided not to start a fire. Kari sat with her head against Hans' cheast. Hans had his arm around her, his chin resting on her head, their hands clasped together. It was clear. They were desperatly in love. Hans, in his twenty three years, looked seventeen. His brown hair, and deep blue eyes, and dark skin. He looked like a surfer that had just come from Hawii. Kariana had just turrned twenty. Her brown hair, and light skin made her look like an actress.
 
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Kari and Hans followed Troy and Rechela's idea, and jumped into a bush also. The chopper didn't seem to notice them. Suddenly, the spot light ran back over and stopped on something. Oh no, my board! Kari thought. She had left it out in the open. The chopper left, but landed somewhere nearby.
 
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Kari and Hans didn't notice Rachela and Troy leave. Soon, Kari and Hans were surrounded by enemys. However, they had not been noticed yet. The men took Kari's board, and inspected it. They threw it into the chopper. Hans took Kari's hand and squeezed it. She knew they were going to have to make a run for it. When all of the men had gathered in the camp, and were discussing what they were going to do next, Hans squesszed her hand again, signalling that they should make a run for it. Kari hessiated for a split second, but was soon running alongside Hans. At that moment, Kari had to step on a stick. It snapped, and all of them charged after Kari and Hans, firing their guns. Kari prayed Hans wouldn't get shot again.
Suddenly, Kari heard the gunshot. She knew it was accurate. Time seemed to stop. She felt the bullet go into her back. She fell to the ground, her hand slipping out of Hans'. Everything went blurry, and then black.

"Kari!" Hans ran back to her, and picked her up. He flew into the air, and out of reach and sight of the enemy. He landed in a grove of trees, where he ws sure they wouldn't be detected. He took Kari in his arms, and held her gently.
"Kari?" he asked, tears flodding his eyes. Her face was pale, and her eyes unfocussed. Hans' hands were covered in blood.
"Hans," Kari whispered, her voice cracking.
"Don't try to talk Kari. I need to get you help." Hans pulled out his comm, and spoke into it.
"Rachela, I need a medic and fast." He put the comm down, and took Kari's hand.
"Rachela will be here soon, okay? Please try to hang on." Hans said, the tears rolling down his cheeks. He tried to ignore the feeling in his heart, but he couldn't. He felt that this was it. He pushed it aside.
"Hans," Kari said, grasping his hand. "I love you."
Hans smiled. Kari squeezed his hand as tight as she could. Hans looked around for any sign of Rachela. None. When he looked back at Kari, he felt as if the air had been sucked out of him. Her face was completly white, and her eyes closed. He body went limp. The feeling he'd tried to ignore came to the surface. He felt as if this was, right. As if this was how it was suposed to be. She was suposed to die, right there in his arms. Her last words were meant to be, "I love you." Then the reality of it all hit Hans. He suddenly realized that she wasn't comming back. She was gone. The woman he'd intended to marry was gone. Hans cried. No, more like wailed, but silently. He layed down next to her, and cried himself to sleep.
 
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Rachela swimmed across the lake quickly. She kept getting quick buzzes on her communicator, but there was no way she could stop with the enemy in pursuit. They hadn't discovered Troy and her, but from the gunshots it was obvious they'd discovered Hans and Kari. As soon as they'd made it across the huge lake, Rachela jumped out, helped pull Troy out, and then checked her communicator. She gasped when she saw that Hans had buzzed her for help. She immediately placed him and took off.

When Rachela got to the grove of trees, she found Kari and Hans laying down. It all looked normal, but she knew it couldn't be. She had a distinct feeling that something was really wrong. She landed beside Hans and Kari, and started to shake Kari gently. Strangely, she was freezing cold. Rachela turned her over, and then gasped. She was dead!

Rachela sat down blurrily, and called Troy to the scene. All of the memories of her and Kari's days together flooded her mind. As the only two female superheros in the compound, they had been immensely close. But now Kari was gone. Tears started rolling down her face, and she started sobbing. She looked up when Troy arrived, and pointed to Kari as she began sobbing again.
 
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Troy saw that Kari was dead. He would save her. The thing is, he had a power no one new about. He had used it once to save his Mom. He could transfer some of his life force to someone else. He knelt down next to Kari and put his hands on her face He hoped he could give off enough life force to save Kari before he blacked out. Troy started to concentrarte. He felt the power leaving him. He thought he saw life entering Kari. Before he could know for sure, he blacked out.
 
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Hans opened his eyes, thinking he'd just had the most horrible nightmare ever. No. It was real. The pain inside of him was to huge to bare. Troy had passed out for some reason. Neither Rachela nor Hans knew why. Hans stood, and said he was going for a walk. Off he went, dissepearing into the thick grove.

Kari slowly started breathing. Her mind started to work. Keep breathing. Breathe in, breathe out... Kari's eyes fluttered open. What in the world just happened? Where's Hans? Kari looked around her. Rachela was looking at her, obviously shocked.
"Kari, but you, I thought, how?" she said, starting to smile. Kari sat up, shurgged. "I'm not sure myself. I feel really strange." Looking at Troy, she asked, "Will he be okay?" Rachela nodded.

Hans started heading back. The enemy would soon place them. He heard talking as he neared the camp. Maybe Troy had woken up. No, it was two female voices...Hans sprinted into a full run. He stopped short, when he saw Kari sititng up. Rachela didn't notice him. Hans ran up behind Kari, and easily scooped her up in his arms and swung her around in circles. Kari let out a slight yelp of startlement. She wrapped her arms around his neck, practically holding on for dear life. Hans stopped, and let her down. She stood in front of him, smiling.

Hans looked at her, the color returning to her skin. He knew it was now or never. Leaning in closer he whispered something in her ear. Kari smiled.
"Are you sure?" Hans nodded. Pulling her close he whispered, "I'm only sure of one thing: that I'm scandlesly in love with you. Kari, will you marry me?" Kari looked into Hans' eyes. She smiled, and nodded.
 
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Troy awoke and he heard voicec. He thought about who he heard. He realized it Was Kari and Hans. It had worked. Troy stood up, bu fell down when the blood had rushed to his head. He felt dizzy. He looked at Hans and Kari, and saw them kissing. He looked at Rachela, Her eyes were red, she had been crying. Troy bent over and gaveher a kiss.
 
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Hans put his arm over Kari's shoulder. Looking at Rachela he asked, "How? I mean, I thought..." Rachela shurgged.
"Ask Troy. He did something."
Hans looked at Troy for an asnwer as to how Kari was alive.
 
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