Hey I posted this before and no one read it, just trying again... please comment! 
Accendental Hypocracy
By: Melissa Hernandez
I tell Him that I love Him
but do I really mean it?
I tell Him that I'd die for Him
but would I really do it?
I want to know You more, I say
but never did pursue it.
Read the bible everyday
No time I give up to it
Don't be a hypocrite, says I
And yet I always do it
Why, oh why, do I never grow
Because I dont live through it.
I just thought of this on the spur of the moment. I love to write but sometimes my thoughts get jumbled. Any suggestions for my poem?
PS: This poem is kinda true... any advice?
Accendental Hypocracy
By: Melissa Hernandez
I tell Him that I love Him
but do I really mean it?
I tell Him that I'd die for Him
but would I really do it?
I want to know You more, I say
but never did pursue it.
Read the bible everyday
No time I give up to it
Don't be a hypocrite, says I
And yet I always do it
Why, oh why, do I never grow
Because I dont live through it.
I just thought of this on the spur of the moment. I love to write but sometimes my thoughts get jumbled. Any suggestions for my poem?
PS: This poem is kinda true... any advice?
