A Poem/Song I just wrote

[Nom De Guerre]

Who amongst you doesn't see life as permanent,
sure it's natural but isn't without its determinants;
I see how subservient we are to turbulence
unnerving when I realize that bell is curving in.
No longer do certain men, lead with a purpose and
instead are only curtain friends, which aren't really permenant,
our minds aren't pertinent, but that's our sermon's end.

This ain't livin', and I'm not sure if I'm actually a citizen
my depiction has become that of an imprisonment,
I'm not raising sedition, I'm only raising suspicions,
especially when omission of conditions are misprisioned.
I mean misprinted, emissions of an infliction's wind.
Raised an English boy and became an assimilant;
meaning I assimilated to fittin' within conditioning
I can't even remember when religion was only insulin,
it didn't cause divisions; instead it was my discipline.

-Chorus-

Yeah they made me wanna holla, I longed for something more
so I took off that collar and united rich with the poor
so they say I'm not a balla 'cause of the oaths that I swore
I can tell they're not a scholar by the words in their rapport
I can tell they're a squalor by their esprit de corps
I know 'em as a condors tryin' to live off of our decor
so I got rid of 'em, not puttin' up wit' 'em anymore.
It's united we stand and it's united we'll stay [egalitarianism]
but I don't expect you to understand that anyway [sectarianism]
nor could you understand why they gave way [authoritarianism];
your ultimate plan is only to get paid, [and that's your prison.]
I walked the path that milleniums paved and envisioned
They did all the math and didn't have to make any revisions,
so when you say I'm not a man that's given any provisions
and gave life to many of fam's, the Lord is my witness.
So call Heaven again, they'll tell you I'm Nicholas.

to this instrumental:

Spoiler: It's a rap instrumental

Joe Budden - Who Killed Hip Hop Instrumental - YouTube

 

[Nanopants]

Nice. When are you going to record and post?

 

[traingosorry]

Nice. When are you going to record and post?

Good idea.

 

[Nom De Guerre]

I recorded, just waitin' on the brother to finish re-recording his part; after I finished mine he was all like, hmm, I think I need to step it up haha it'll be soon I'm sure.

 

[Nom De Guerre]

So, he's not gonna be done for awhile haha anyway, I got my recorded verses for you:

zSHARE - cy united.mp3

I was a little lax on my vocals, I'll be editing it later lol but yeah, voila

 

[GospelS]

Frozen bird
To a metal fence
Wings couldn't help
They ran out of strength
She is hurting herself
Such cold outside
Afraid it’s getting dark
Hard to believe
Would anyone really help
Thieves came flocking
Running and hunting
Pretending to be helping
They are closing in
It's almost the end
Frozen bird
She kept trying
To keep flying
Somewhere safe
Somewhere warm
Hope is about dying
Someone came softly
But she panicked
He grabbed her real quick
Hard to believe
Would anyone really help
His hand is so big
His palm is a home
So soft and perfect
So cozy and safe
This must be the Son of God
This must be the Christ
Frozen bird
Her vitals regaining
Spirit manifesting
It's better to just be
It's better to believe
He just blew His breath
It's hot but so nice
Feeling life again
He kept blowing
Until the frost is thawed
Then He let her fly
To the sky she went
Dancing and singing

 

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Frozen bird
To a metal fence
Wings couldn't help
They ran out of strength
She is hurting herself
Such cold outside
Hard to believe
Would anyone really help
Thieves came flocking
Running and hunting
Pretending to be helping
Frozen bird
She kept trying
To keep flying
Somewhere safe
Somewhere warm
Hope is about dying
Someone came softly
But she panicked
Hard to believe
Would anyone really help
His hand is so big
His palm is a home
So soft and perfect
So cozy and safe
Frozen bird
Her vitals regaining
Spirit manifesting
It's better to just be
It's better to believe
He just blew His breath
It's hot but so nice
Feeling life again
He kept blowing
Until the frost is thawed
Then He let her fly
To the sky she went
Dancing and singing

Your song made me think of another tune about a bird.

Bird with broken wing
Locked up inside
A tiny cage
Till the day I heard your cry
And set you free
But as I reached in
To heal the hurt
You fled in wild dismay
Now your pain
Has made you blind as you can be
Echoes in the distance
Are almost all you hear from me
Each time I speak your name
You flee away
While the agonies of mindless flight
Grow more than you can bare
Still you think it's because of me
That you feel this way
Soarin' far above the storm
On wings spread strong and wide
Is the vision that you've buried
In despair
You dash yourself against the stones
And flutter terrified
When my love will heal your wounds
And lift you there
Like a frightened child
Who starts away with every move
You want to trust
But watch so fearfully
Everything you're longing for
Is here within my hands
I'm waiting now for you
To come to me
Soarin' far above the storm
On wings spread strong and wide
Is the vision that you've buried
In despair
You dash yourself against the stones
And flutter terrified
When my love will heal your wounds
And lift you there
Like a frightened child
Who starts away with every move
You want to trust
But watch so fearfully
Everything you're longing for
Is here within my hands
I'm waiting now for you
To come to me
I'm waiting now for you
To come to me
I'm waiting now for you
To come to me