Words Just Aren't Enough

[Eve4000]

This is a poem I wrote last night about a really good friend of mine and I wanted to know how good it is. Here it goes:

Words Just Aren’t Enough
By: Eve K. Lily

I feel overwhelmed, can hardly breathe
There’s something missing, something I need.
I whisper a prayer, and then see you on AIM;
I sigh in relief and click on your name.

We talk for a while, maybe 6 pages,
Conversing on events, thoughts, and ages.
By the time our talk ends and you get off your PC,
I close my eyes and thank God for sending you to me.

In that moment, there’s something intense I feel;
It’s makes my heart burst, I can tell that it’s real.
It’s great to have a friend when the going gets tough,
But to describe my love for you, sometimes words just aren’t enough.

To me, you’re like no other
You’re almost like my brother
Besides God and my journal, somewhere along the line,
You’re one of the few who in I can truly confine

You’ve said the same to me before,
But the impact of those words are just hitting me more.
I have other friends and we talk about stuff
But this for you is different, I cannot explain…
Sometimes words just aren’t enough.

 

[BubbleGirl]

It's nice I like it.