'Word of God"

[doc329]

This I say to you, without the Word of God you will not grow in grace and in knowledge of Christ. You will not as a Christian, you will always be in your babyhood. We must remember that a little baby and a full grown man are both human beings, but they are in different stages of growth and development. The little baby needs milk so that he can grow up to become a man. Now the question I ask you is, How does a Christian grow? That is right! He grows by studing the Word of God. We must also add there is no growth apart from the Word of God.

 

[Lyle]

Very good But do you want fee back on it?

If so, remember you need to shorten down your sentences. Put in proper conjuctions and other such English tools. Remember to NEVER, EVER address te reader. For you do not know if they even care to ear what you have to say; rather step back and tell them. Give them support and evidence.

But the thoughts and everything are very good, don't stop

 

[RobinB]

Keep writing.

 

[doc329]

Lyle
Thank you for your feed back. Yes! I like feed back. There you see I am not a professional writer. I am not that schooled in writing. What I have been doing in all my years is trying to lead people to Jesus Christ. I know I fall short in many ways.I do the best I can with the blessings I have. I understand what you are saying and I thank you

 

[Lyle]

Hey man, we don't have to be experts to do something well. In fact, most everything comes with practice of sorts. Your mistakes were not big ones at all, and most people would't notice it. In fact, you're far beter then many professional journalists.. But keep going, your're doing fine and bringing the message of our Father out well