untitled poem....please critique

[SlIpPiNg~In~To~NoThInGnEsS]

When I look in the mirror...
All I want to see is someone
pretty looking back at me.

Losing weight seems to be the only key,
Then when I look in the mirror,
I will see someone pretty looking at me.

Losing friends,
driving them to their ends

When I cry I just need a friend
A friend who can hug me, and give me
a lending hand.

This is not worth it:
To be in a dark tunnel and just sit.
Eating is not the end of the world

At least that is what I was told.

Sitting all alone, in my room
being so cold, seems to be
the only thing that would have sold.

I want to be happy...that's all...
Is it that hard?
Do I have to wait for happiness to be sold??

 

[Debi1967]

It is a very emotional poem that is for sure. It is also good keep writing it suits you.
Oh and by the way your weight how tall you are or any of those things do not define who you are. Only you can do that and then carry yourself with pride and the rest doesn't matter.
Do you ever wonder how those big girls get those great looking guys at times? Well it has to do with not what they look like but how they portray themselves to be. If you believe you are beautiful then you are and so will every one else. And if they don't then they are superficial and small minded to begin with.

 

[Tsophir]

Very strong.

Very sad however.

That poem made me want to help you, which is what all good poetry should do, it should invoke emotion.

Keep writing.
Tso.

Continuing to pray,

 

[ashlee]

Its sad, but I can totally relate to you...I thought losing weight would solve all my problems, but it didn't. It's a lie straight from satan. You are a beautiful person, regardless of what's on the outside. Don't forget that