undeserved

[raggedy anne]

I started writing this when i was about 7 or 8 yrs old, i woke up in the middle of the night and just had to write it down. i just finished it end of 2005..please enjoy, and as this is a christian web site please do not steal my work.

We do not live perfect lives
Because one who ate the fruit replies
“That tricky snake he tempted me,
It’s his own fault not mine you see”​

Isaiah, prophet of the past

Brought peace and hope and love at last

Proclaiming that our God would give
A savior who for us would live​

And when the Son did come to earth
He came by lowly human birth
As Lord of All in manger lay
The angels all their harps did play​

Our Savior lived a perfect life
So He could take away our strife
He baptized, preached, and taught His word
And in the land His voice was heard​

Next our God on bended knee
Offered up prayer in Gethsemane
Our Father, God, gave Him the task
Of dying for our sins aghast​

Then they nailed Him to the tree
Upon the hill of Calvary
And when the Son of God had died
They took a spear and pierced His side​

More than hope our God did give
That in three days He would then live
Mary at his feet did fall
To praise the Living Lord of All​

Our Lord His perfect life did give
And gave us rules by which to live
For us all these deeds were done
Though we deserved not even one​

And then the Son of God did rise
Up to His home within the skies
And though He said He’d come again
He did not tell us where or when​

And when the Lord to Earth will come
We’ll sing His praises all as one
With Him to Heaven we will rise
Forever praise will fill the skies.​

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[marshallII]

I was wowed. You have talent!

 

[SwtRose]

So powerfully exspressed. I was wondering how old you are now? I see a great deal of talent in your writing and encourage you to continue writing.

 

[raggedy anne]

I am 18 yrs old now, i would love to write and it is something i do in my spare time, however im not sure that the real world always supports young aspiring authors. but it is what i love to do and so i'll keep working at it!

 

[graysparrow]

Dear raggedy anne

in the short run you'd need a job to support yourself, but in the long run you can live well off writing, even if it is at a newspaper.