TTDCA

[crossnote]

The stillness of the night,
The ticking clock,
Distant barking of a dog,
Creeping coldness,
Crickets lifting up praise...
A praying child.

 

[Kiterius]

The stillness of the night,
The ticking clock,
Distant barking of a dog,
Creeping coldness,
Crickets lifting up praise...
A praying child.

What about it?

 

[crossnote]

What about it?

It's verbless, simply to be enjoyed.

 

[Kiterius]

It's verbless, simply to be enjoyed.

The part about the clock is okay.

 

[crossnote]

The part about the clock is okay.

Maybe you'd enjoy this one a bit better that I posted awhile ago .

Ringing gavels

gavels ringing in my ears
paralyzing, choking the flow
from the red river
through it's incessant verdicts,
turning oneself in on oneself.
can't escape it's oratory walls,
molding one into a shallow echo of a deeper Spring.

 

[Kiterius]

Maybe you'd enjoy this one a bit better that I posted awhile ago .

Ringing gavels

gavels ringing in my ears
paralyzing, choking the flow
from the red river
through it's incessant verdicts,
turning oneself in on oneself.
can't escape it's oratory walls,
molding one into a shallow echo of a deeper Spring.

Yes. That's gold. Especially the choking of the red river.