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The Quenta Silmarillion (add on)

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After the darkening of the land of Valinor, the two trees no longer offered their lights for the peoples of Middle Earth, and the stars once more were seen as a distant glaze of fine silver tips against the dark velvet of a sky that shone no more with the silver scent of Telperion and the golden rains of Laurelin.

But all was not lost, for hope came to the Elves when the moon rose and outshone the ancient stars.

Isil the Sheen the Vanyar of old named the moon, flower of Telperion in Valinor; and Anar the Fire-golden, fruit of Laurelin, they named the Sun. But the Noldor named them also Rána, the Wayward, and Vása, the Heart of Fire, that awakens and consumes; fot the Sun was set as a sign for the awakening of Men and the waning of the Elves, but the Moon cherishes their memory.

The maiden whom the Valar chose from among the Maiar to guide the vessel of the Sun was named Arien, and he that steered the island of the Moon was Tilion. In the days of the Trees Arien had tended the golden flowers in the gardens of Vána, and watered them with the bright dews of Laurelin; but Tilion was a hunter in the company of Oromë, and he had a silver bow. He was a lover of silver, and when he would rest he forsook the woods of Oromë, and going into Lórien he lay in a dream by the pools of Estë, In Telperion's flickering beams; and begged to be given the task of tending for ever the last Flower of Silver. Arien the maiden was mightier than he, and she was chosen because she feared not the heats of Laurelin, and was unhurt by them, being from the beginning a spirit of fire, whom Melkor had not deceived nor drawn to his service. Too bright were the eyes of Arien for even the Eldar to look on, and leaving Valinor she forsook the form and raiment which like the Valar she had worn there, and she was as a flame, terrible in the fullness of her splendor.

Even as the light of the moon touched Middle-earth, Fingolfin let blow his silver trumpets and began his march into Middle-earth, and the shadows of his host went long and black before them.

After the evil of the kinslaying, Fingolfin's host reached Losgar, where Fëanor had come over the Sea in the white ships of the Teleri, where he landed and burned the boats that he had won by the slaying of those friendly elves.

Fëanor had left long before, and those who had been abandoned and left to cross the Helcaraxë -- the Grinding Ice -- were bitter and followed hard on the heels of those who left them, led by Fingolfin and his sons, and by Finrod and Galadriel, the elven queen. Small love they had for Fëanor and his own sons, and they hurried that they might gain on his host.

Morgoth hated the new lights, and despised Arien, for as a fallen being, he could not stand the burning that her glance laid on him, and he cowered in the darkest corner of his fortress, and from the rising of the Sun the orcs and evil creatures under his service dared not tread in sunlight.

As the Eldar were once more united, many wars and skirmishes were fought with Morgoth and his servant, Sauron. But the Calaquendi had the light of Aman in their faces and none of their enemies could yet master them, for they were not decieved by the deviousness of Morgoth's spies and rumors.

The Silmarils were caught up by Morgoth and taken to his stronghold, where they were set in his iron crown, starting the period that the elves now call the Quenta Silmarillion, the Recount of the Silmarils, the jewels of Fëanor.
 

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This is a normal add on. Those who have read the Silmarillion, you'll have some idea of the history of Middle-earth, the history of Tolkein's LOTR series. This is a normal add on, with the same rules that apply to all of the other add ons. Try to stay within the boundaries of the book, but don't hesitate to invent new ideas.

If you want a map of middle earth, you should be able to find it on Google or http://www.lordoftherings.net.

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NAME: Neferuiel Lhunrothiel

NICNAME(s): Dove, Ruiella (Ruy-ella), Rothella.

AGE: 821

APPEARANCE:
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Very large brown hair and eyes, tall and too thin.

PERSONALITY: Kind and gentle, too quiet and walks as if in a trance. She's strong and not afraid, but her journey over the Helcaraxë has left her gaunt and pale.

HISTORY: A rather young elf, she was born in the light of the two trees, and has never known life without them. She is one of Fingolfin's distant relatives, and only left Valinor -- very reluctantly at that -- because of the persuasive words of one of Fëanor's sons, whom she loved as a brother, only to have him desert her, her sisters and family, and leave them stranded.

Stubborn and unrelenting, she almost turned back, but could not return to Valinor alone, and was forbade to do so. She undertook the journey across the Helcaraxë, and lost most of her entire extended family from cold, hunger and some who wandered off and vanished.

It was a time of great trial for her, but now she marches behind the host, lingering to look back on the distant shore. She and Galadriel are good friends, and she has forged a bond with many elves and Avari who she has met, since she was deprived of a family.


For the Avari, the Latecomers -- Man -- had at last come to Middle-earth, with the rising of the Sun, and dawn came to Middle Earth at last.
 
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I would never esist an add-on such as this!!!!!!!!

NAME: Gwenlint(a quick, nimble maiden) Uir(eternity) Niirnaeth(tears of lamentation)
NIC NAMES: Gwen, Neera
AGE: 29
GENDER: Female
RACE: Mostly Human
APPEARENCE:
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Her hair is dark brown, and her eyes are that of a crystalized light blue.
PERSONALITY: She doesn't usually talk to anyone. And of she does, it's to someone she knows very well. She's shy. Not rude, just shy.
WEAPONS: She can use a sword farely well.
HISTORY: Was orphaned at birth, and taken in by a kind Elven family. Although her father was mostly human, he had some elf blood running through his veins. The same with her mother. She was raised by the elven family all of her life, and has learned to trust them. But she doesn't feel confident in herself. That's why she got her name. Niirnaeth, tears of lamentation. She almost never smiles. She's not mean, she's just very insecure.
 
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Just so you know, Neferuiel Lhunrothiel means Aster flower, Light of the West. I got it from a Quenya translator, which has since shut down.

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Dove turned at last from the high place where she stood, and rejoined her friend, Galadriel, as she stood waiting for her at the bottom of the green and grassy slope, a cluster of younger and frightened elves clustered around her.

Neferuiel had not smiled for the last month that Galadriel could recall, and the tall, queenly elf was frankly worried for her friend. Ever since passing into the Girdle of Melian, she had grown silent and Galadriel thought secretly that she pined for the seashore and the quiet, stately forests of Mallorn trees.

Galadriel's own heart ached, for she had witnessed the kinslaying, although had not taken part of it, and had nothing but sympathy for the silent, saddened girl who was part Teleri.

Dove's liquid brown eyes were distant and veiled, and the thoughts that passed behind them were mysteries to Galadriel. Her long brown hair was woven cunningly with sprigs of laurel and babies breath, with the delicate aster also tucked behind her ear. "Come, we must go to Thingol and Melian," she said, and Galadriel gave her a sly look. "Is it Maeglin?"

"Maeglin?" Dove was startled. "I could not love him more than a friend, and he has deserted me and taken the Oath of his father, Fëanor." A dark shadow passed across her face. "And in doing so has endangered middle-earth."

Galdriel's golden eyes flashed, but not at Dove. "Those Jewls! The accursed oath! The powers of the west have banished us from Valinor because of one man's folly and vanity." the sunlight glinted on her wavy golden hair, which was accented with lavender. She led Neferuiel towards the innards of the Protected Realm, around which King Thingol and Queen Melian had woven a maze of magic so dense and unnaproachable that no mortal had yet found his courage to approach, much less even attempt to enter.

Together, they paced slowly towards the throne room, a most interesting pair -- the fair and striking Galadriel, and the darker, more subtle Dove, who's dark hair and eyes a contrast to Galadriel's golden hair and eyes. In fact, the differences did not end there. The light in their eyes was different -- both had seen the Trees, and were considered Quenya, but where Galadriel was descended from pure Noldor blood, Dove was only mostly Quenya. She looked like the Quenya in some ways -- tall, graceful, slender -- but she also looked Teleri -- dark eyes and hair, lover of water and seashore, and of silver. She was silver where Galadriel was golden, tanned where her companion was fair.

Celeborn caught sight of them, and he looked most interestedly at them, especially Galadriel, who was later to become his queen, in the fair land of Lorien. He was in the courts of Thingol, and he had waited long for the chance to speak to the golden-haired, beautiful elf. He was rather nervous of talking to her, but he steeled himself.

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Dove entered the throne chamber slowly, her eyes cast down. Melian the Maia greeted her and rose to meet her, her eyes seeing Neferuiel's purpose immediately and setting her at ease.

"What is it, Dove . . . what is it that troubles you so?"

"There are many things," replied Dove. "Not the least is the kinslaying."

Her voice seemed very small in the large room, and Thingol himself turned and looked at her, his brow knit.

Melian flinched. "I feared something likened to this had happened. Galadriel would tell me none of it."

"Perhaps she is wiser than me, but she had no relatives and friends slain."

Melian percieved her thoughts. "Aye, it is a sad day. The sons of Fëanor shall be turned from the Protected Lands. Their evil must not darken this kingdom," she said sadly.

"Much as it pains me, I agree. None can live within the Girdle that have slain their own kind in useless anger," added Thingol.

"Don't make us all leave!" pleaded Dove. "Many had no part in the killing. Fingolfin and his sons are innocent of and blood."

"Nay, not them. Only shall Fëanor's followers leave." Melian looked compassionately on Dove, who was standing still, tears burning in her eyes. "I suffer none harm as they go."

~~~~~

Galadriel flew to her friend's side, breathless. "He asked me!"

Dove knew instantly, and felt the inevitable lightening of heart for her friend, a load lifted from her shoulders and she smiled. "Celeborn?" she asked, rather uselessly, for she already knew the answer.

"Of course! We will find a place for our home, in the hills and forests North and west of here."

Dove smiled. "Let us find our friends!"

"Also, have you heard from Neera?"

"No, I have the feeling they will come west. Perhaps the people she's staying with -- "

"The Nuldorël, right?"

"Yes, perhaps they will join us in . . . wherever you plan to go."

"Lothlorien . . . . " said Galadriel dreamily.

"Lothlorien it is. I shall send word."
 
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Neera walked outside, in the cool night air. She couldn't sleep. Something inside troubled her. She walked slowly, and quietly down the stairs, exiting her balcony. She walked through the field below her window. She had to get her feelings sorted. Her one question: Why am does it seem like I am grieving? Why can I not be like Nalorn, or Nield? They could charm tears from a Dwarf with thier kindess, if they needed. Maybe one day... her thoughts drifted. She decided to leave for Lothlorien, to join Dove.

She rode through the night, the darkness covering her and protecting her. Her black horse, Shadow, riding swiftly and silently through the night.
 
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Ooooh.....my uncle just gave me the book the Silmarillion, I am not very far into it though as he just gave it to me last night! But I will join!
NAME: Carhlokewen Anar
AGE: 523
GENDER: Female
SPECIES: Dark Elf (Fangorn forest)
WEAPONS: Small silver blade that she keeps in her thin boot, bow and arrown that were given to her by her first love, long since deceased.
ABILITIES: Can speak telepathically. Can read minds if she concentrates. Both gifts given to her by a white wizard.
HISTORY: Was engaged to marry a Lorien elf, named Dimostion, but he was murdered by his jealous brother who wanted Carhlokewen as well. Carhlokewen was so stricken with greif that she killed Dimostion's killer, Mindoniel. Her brutal past haunts her, she has not gotten over it. She narrowly escaped conviction by hiding away in a town of men, Laketown, for three years. But she is ready to come home.
DESCRIPTION: Golden blonde curly hair that is a little past shoulder length. Eyes like two pieces of frozen saltwater, clearish blue, but they are hollow and haunting, as if she hides a secret. She has the traditional elvish fair skin, and is 5'11.

Oh...by the way...is it okay if I be Manwe and Varda? Pretty Please?

Carhlokewen (loke-low-kay for short.) gently prodded her horse-Neenuvar-flanks, spurring it into a faster gate. She was so eager to get home, she could hardly bear it.
 
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Well, seeing as Lothlorien is not born quite yet . . . um.

Manwe and Varda? If you own them, I'll take Nienna and Ulmo. I'm also going to intro a new char soon, one of the Maiar. :D

Unless someone else has a problem, I have none. I'll post soon, but I have exams, so I'm pretty stressed for 2 weeks. The study week and the exam week.

If anyone didn't know, Ulmo is the Lord of Waters, and is second in might to Manwe.

Nienna is has no real duty, but I deduce that she is the wisest of the Valar, and grieves and heals the sorrows and marrings of Arda. She probably has other powers as well, but I'm not sure. I think it is healing and wisdom primarily.
 
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that's ok. Just make a char and me or darr or celli will intro it, and you can go from there. Basically, this is waaaaay before the LOTR trilogy thingomobob. Halflings are virtually unknown. Actually, totally unknown. But I guess we could tell of the first ones coming into Middle Earth after the darkness over the east mountains . . . .
 
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No, there's men too, only we haven't made any yet. You see, the Silmarillion is mainly about the history of elves in middle earth, and their eventual decline. There's only around 10 humans who were mentioned. Well, maybe more than that, since they had a lot with the Elves' leaving.

They are up against evil Melkor (formorly one of the Vala in the West), and he is often called Morgoth. He was dark lord before Sauron, who is his right-hand man but not nearly so powerful. Sauron was a Maia.

I will be intro'ing a human soon. Rather, a family. Of Beor the Old. :D Feel free to join!
 
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Let's hope this works.

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It is said that Finrod Felagund, of the house of Finarfin, was the first of the Noldor to meet with the elves, although dark elves had long been among the men west of the blue mountains, and the speech of the Atani resembled that of the Sindar.

Thus, Dove had come to know Neera, the kind and quiet girl who was fearless and given to thoughtfulness. Great friendship had bonded them, and although Neera dared not try to enter Doriath, they often met on the edges, where Dove would ride through the mists and enchantments to meet her friend. Neera had been raised by the Nuldorël, one of the highest families of the Noldor, in the house of Finrod. Her family was respected, and she was part elf herself -- her mother being descended from the Sindar, her father from the Nandor, some of those who never made the Great Journey (you'll see that the first wed of Noldor/human was Beren + Luthien, who have not met yet). These were of the Umanyar, of the Moriquendi, and had both descended from those who lived in Doriath, and posessed a great power of mind and body, and resembled the Noldor in their stature.

As the elf-king played the harp to the camp of Beor, they became wiser and forever were loyal to the house of Finarfin Felagund. Many of the young came among the Eldar of the West, and although no mortal was suffered to enter into Doriath, rumors of their coming reached to Dove, as Finrod was Galadriel's brother, and she held none of her secrets from her dearest friend.

Together, they prepared for the wedding between Galadriel and Celeborn, and Dove was pleased with the fresh glow that came to her friend's face. The procession left Doriath later, and proceeded slowly towards Lothlorien, where the two were to be wed and set up an elf-haven, the longest to endure in Middle-earth.

Outside of the city, Neera waited for them, and joined their group. Thus, she was the first mortal ever to enter and see Lothlorien, in the first moments of its completion.

The elves labored swiftly, and the first great Mallorn opened its golden leaves to the moonlight, and a great pavilion was made in its branches, wraught of gold, silver and other metals such as they had. Lit by the light of the moon trapped within jewels, the soft light fell like a shower of silver upon the assembly as the two were finally joined in marriage, their faces gleaming in the moonlight, as the kingdom of Lothlorien was formed.

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Far away, on the borders of Ossirand, the dark figure formed itself into the shape of a boy, wounded and moving in a way that betrays those who are hunted by an evil they cannot escape wholly. Kalin, youngest son of Beor the Old, had crossed the Blue Mountains alone, and had escaped the leager of orcs that had waylaid his band and slain them to a man, but him.

Coming West, he had at last come to Ossirand, and the elves there had warned him, saying "Men hunt and destroy our forests. Thus, man are our unfriends, and cannot stay in these lands." But because he was of the house of Beor, their hands had been witheld from him, and he had passed unhindered into Eastern Beleriand, where he came finally to the lands of Beor, the encampment.

Young -- only 18 -- he was a low-priority target for orcs, yet still fearless. He had, although still young, become a man. With no strength to go farther, he collapsed near the banks of the river Gelion.

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Nienna stood in the Ring of Doom, her eyes vieled. "I shall go again to Middle-earth," she said, to their astonishment. "I shall do my best to bring wisdom amidst their turmoil, and turn their minds from alliance with Melkor."

"Say not the name of Morgoth in my courts!" thundered the voice of Manwe, tinged with bitterness.

"He hates me," continued Nienna, "ever since I refused to come as one of his servents. I shall take with me Varle and Varye."

The Vala were silent for a moment, then Mandos spoke. "Your doom lies not in Middle Earth, but in Illuvatar. Heed Manwe and do not go."

Nienna was silenced. "Varle and Varye long to go, to look upon Middle Earth, and if possible, assauge the griefs between Elves and Vala."

"They are Maia, and their dooms lie in the West," Mandos insisted, and more softly, "The doom of the elves also lies in the West."

Manwe heeded him. "They may go, but you may not." Nienna bowed her head and left then.
 
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Carhlokewen stopped her horse at the entrance to Fangorn forest. A round old looking man greeted her. "Tom Bombadil, it is so great to see you here!" She said. She remembered how when she was but a child, he was still old looking, and how he told her stories of the beginning of the world. She wondered if he really had been there all that time. "And to you as well, Loke. I've missed you since you've been gone." Tom Bombadil said. "And what of my parents? Have they worried about me? Where are they?" Loke asked, her face eager. A shadow passed over Bombadil's brow. "I'm afraid that they have passed." Tom bowed his head in grief. "What? How? Who killed them?" Loke asked, frantic. Tom Bombadil gave her a look she did not understand. "You did." He said. "What are you taking about? I've been gone for years!" Loke said, not understanding. "They died from grief. The disappearence of their only daughter was too much for them, what with the Unnamed Evil on the rise." Bombadil said. Carhlokewen dropped to the ground, sobbing uncontrollibly.
 
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Kalin wiped his hand across his eyes and stumbled. Immediately, the orcs were upon him, a band of around twenty. Tired though he was, he staggared to his feet and swung his spear. It took two out before he skewered another with it, drawing his sword. It glittered in the dawn's light. A flash, and it hewed head from body. The remaining orcs drew off, astonished at the wounded boy's strength. They snarled from behind cover at Kalin.

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Dove stood silently beside Galadriel, her fawn eyes peaceful and calm. The valley was safe for a while, at least. Laurellothlorien, she thought. valley of the golden leaves. She felt joy overtake her so strongly that she rushed to the top of the rise and felt the fresh air on her brow, eyes closed. The music of the forest had bewitched her.

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Varle and Varye had reached the Western fringes of Middle earth. The brother and sister duo made their way inland, seen only as a bending of grass in the wind, or a flash of beauty in the firs. They mantled themselves in shadows and hastened their eastward march.

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Sorry it's not much. I don't know what to post.
 
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