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The dangerous road

The Dangerous Road

Peering upon waters of still, quiet reflection,
Within myself, I see the one who lost connection
From fruitless, laden steps of inner imperfection
Along Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end.

Where, from generation to the next, along its dusty trail,
Weathering each toiling step without respite, shade, or rail,
Withering prevails the minds, as fruitlessness makes frail
Along Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end.

But blessed be those who dare raise befallen heads in heed
Toward ‘yon hill where, be praised, an image does breed
Internal longings to depart where others concede
Along Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end.

And with that step where many crumble -- in belief, faith, and trust
-- To stumble from Life’s fruitless ways toward many sinful lusts,
Praises to the One who gives courage to do what others need must
Along Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end.

Whence distance between shrinks unseen temptations left and right,
As wanderers approach nearer, nearer the shadowy sight
That compels each soul in longing to forever take flight
From Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end

Thence tree and nail give way to wells in an Oasis to the lost
Sheep of the shepherd’s herd that bore the ultimate cost
To bring unto Himself those conceived and given up for loss
Along Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end.

Yes, peering upon these waters of still, quiet reflection,
Within myself, I see, the one who lost connection
From fruitless, laden steps of inner imperfection
Along Life’s broad and dangerous road to clear and certain end.
 
Apr 28, 2004
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cbk said:
I appreciate the reply. Just a poetic want-to-be. Just found this area of the forums and find it illuminating.
i reckon that poem is great. you ain't a poetic want-to-be, your writing is really good. wish i could write that well...and i would agree with your description of this forum.
 
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