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<blockquote data-quote="Captain_Tripp" data-source="post: 28389377" data-attributes="member: 99517"><p>Chapter Eight-</p><p> </p><p>Renna screamed, Falling to the ground. Tears rolled from her eyes. She beat her head for a moment and then stopped ,Tears still dripping like they were water falls. She looked again closing her eyes in misconfined horror. She covered her face as Pain looked over, Just so he couldnt see her wet face.</p><p>"Oh... My...God... R-Renna..." Pain finally let out sadly. Renna couldnt look up. She was in so much shock and pain that she couldnt. Pain walked over to her and bent down giving her a hug. Renna attempted to push him off but it didnt work. She just sat there in astonishment.</p><p>"Ill... Ill go call the police." Pain said sitting up and running out. Renna looked up seeing Kylen laying on the floor. His pale skin grew paler with each passing minute. Blood surrounded him, A knife near him with some writing on the wall. It said, "Hide them well. Don't make a sound. Close your eye. Don't look around. Make one step, Then you're dead. Then your life will come to an end. Seeing is believing. He will come for you. Take the person who is most and strike them down for you. Surrender of suffer is all that can be done. Surrender or suffer is all that can be done..." Renna read it word for word two time.</p><p> </p><p>She got up and crawled over to Kylen. She stoked his hair out of his face.</p><p>"Kylen... Ky... Please dont do this to me babes. Please stay here with me! Kylen! Dont! Please!" Renna hugged him.</p><p>"Ill still be with you. I p-promise, Ren... I love you." Kylen said, Kissing her one last time. Renna kissed him back as he let go. "Dont cry Ren... I love you, Renny. My Renna..." he smiled as he slipped away into everlasting darkness.</p><p>"Kylen? Kylen?! Kylen! No! Kylen please come back! Dont go! Dont die on me! I love you and I cant go on without you! Kylen!" Renna shouted crying, Her head falling to his chest in tears still hugging him. "Dont leave me... Dont leave me... I love you, Kylen. I love you. I really do..." Pain came back to see Renna huddled over Kylen.</p><p>"I called them. Theyre on their way." he explained.</p><p>"Okay." Renna squeaked. Pain tried to get her away but she just cried and screamed harder to stay.</p><p> </p><p>Pain let her be as she frantically cried over him. Not to long after, The police and ambulance people got there and walked over to Renna.</p><p>"Come on, Miss. Time to go." one said, Taking her arm. </p><p>"No! No! Please! L-Let me stay here!" Renna squealed trying to go back down to Kylen. They lost their grip, Falling upon him and kissing him as they pulled her up again.</p><p>"Come ON Miss," they said agitated. "Time to go."</p><p>"Ill NEVER forget you, Kylen Phylar... NEVER! I love you! For as long as I live!" Renna shouted out. "I love you!" She got carried out from the room as she looked at him one last time as she passed the wall that separated the two.</p><p>"Im sorry this happened. Whats your name?" the young lady asked.</p><p>"Renna." Renna responded. "Renna Respa."</p><p>"Okay. Thank you." she said again.</p><p>"Welcome" Renna said wiping her eyes. She cried for the longest time, Not moving from her spot. A few hours passed after the press and everybody left and Renna ran out of tears and she got up and walked to her room.</p><p> </p><p>She laid in her bed, Covering up and looked all over her room. Pictures were plastered all over of her and Kylen. She covered her head as a few silent tears dripped from her damp eyes. She slowly fell asleep as she thought of Kylen and their moments. All her dreams were about moments that she had with him. She woke up and threw the covers off at 4:16 A.M. She only got 2 ½ hours of sleep. She blinked and looked around and got up. She walked out of her room and stalked down the stairs into the kitchen. She saw Kylens binder and picked up. She ran her hand over the top and smiled slightly. Her smile faded and she set it back down. She walked into the kitchen and found something to drink and sat down on the table, Hanging her legs off the side. She drank her drink slowly and finally put it in the sink and went to bed. She tossed and turned about what had happened. She turned on her music to try to drown out her mind but it didnt work. She turned it off and stared out the window as the sun began to appear above the horizon. She silently cried and went back downstairs again. It was dark except an acception of a few sheers of light that found its way in, No thanks to the open curtains. She walked over into the living room and saw all the blood was gone. She glanced over at the clock that had just struck 7:36 A.M. A cold chill ran through her body, So she grabbed her trench and placed it over herself.</p><p> </p><p>She walked over and picked up Kylens binder and took it into the hallway. She placed it down to get her boots on and the picked it back up and walked out of the house and shut the door. She walked down the front porch steps and off towards the park. Her slow strides and gentle swaying of her trench made the leaves on the ground stir a little. She walked for almost a half hour and finally reached the hill by the lake at the park. She sat down hugging Kylens binder. She finally opened it and gasped. She found pictures on the inside that she had never seen. The first picture that they took together. The first picture that Kylen took of her. Lots of pictures. She went through his binder reading things. She spotted notes they wrote to each other, Songs and homework. She came upon a letter and she dropped the book. The binder fell to the ground as she sat on the bench crying in spite of herself. The wind blew the pages open, Flipping pages until it fell on a note her boyfriend wrote, Just hours before. She cried as she looked down at it again. It said, </p><p>"Dear Miss LoveOfMyLife,</p><p>How are you? Im good and you? I hope youre good. Im glad youre out of the hospital. It shocked me. I a poem for you! Just thought of it! Here it is!</p><p>Some days, Ill stare out upon the sea,</p><p>And if you do, too, I hope you think of me.</p><p>Ill think of you wherever we are,</p><p>Even to wish upon a shooting star.</p><p>As time goes by, Ill always be with you,</p><p>Our love that feels practically brand new.</p><p>As long as I live, </p><p>My heart will give.</p><p>But only to you,</p><p>My heart will bloom.</p><p>Ill stay by your side,</p><p>Together well stride.</p><p>Until we die together in marriage one day.</p><p>Thats it. I hope you liked it. I love you and Ill never move from you, Darling. Must go. Youre about to kiss me! Yay! Lol!</p><p>-Kylen-</p><p>P.S.- Ill love you forever! Never forget! Always remember!"</p><p> </p><p>Renna looked up and wiped her eyes with the end of her trench sleeve. She sniffled and stood up and found a few roses. A dark red one, A white one, A purple, one and a rare black one. She cropped them together with a small vine and took a picture of her and Kylen and she kissed his sweet face and placed the picture in the middle and got to the ground and placed it gently in the water and watched it float away.</p><p>"I love you Kylen." she whispered as a tear fell into the water. "I will ALWAYS... Remember you. And just like you said, I will never forget. I promise." The wind blew in and whispered by the stream. It danced across the water. She watched it drift away and gradually got up and turned away. Her bell jingled slightly as her strides took her down the hill and back to the house that she had once called home.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Captain_Tripp, post: 28389377, member: 99517"] Chapter Eight- Renna screamed, Falling to the ground. Tears rolled from her eyes. She beat her head for a moment and then stopped ,Tears still dripping like they were water falls. She looked again closing her eyes in misconfined horror. She covered her face as Pain looked over, Just so he couldnt see her wet face. "Oh... My...God... R-Renna..." Pain finally let out sadly. Renna couldnt look up. She was in so much shock and pain that she couldnt. Pain walked over to her and bent down giving her a hug. Renna attempted to push him off but it didnt work. She just sat there in astonishment. "Ill... Ill go call the police." Pain said sitting up and running out. Renna looked up seeing Kylen laying on the floor. His pale skin grew paler with each passing minute. Blood surrounded him, A knife near him with some writing on the wall. It said, "Hide them well. Don't make a sound. Close your eye. Don't look around. Make one step, Then you're dead. Then your life will come to an end. Seeing is believing. He will come for you. Take the person who is most and strike them down for you. Surrender of suffer is all that can be done. Surrender or suffer is all that can be done..." Renna read it word for word two time. She got up and crawled over to Kylen. She stoked his hair out of his face. "Kylen... Ky... Please dont do this to me babes. Please stay here with me! Kylen! Dont! Please!" Renna hugged him. "Ill still be with you. I p-promise, Ren... I love you." Kylen said, Kissing her one last time. Renna kissed him back as he let go. "Dont cry Ren... I love you, Renny. My Renna..." he smiled as he slipped away into everlasting darkness. "Kylen? Kylen?! Kylen! No! Kylen please come back! Dont go! Dont die on me! I love you and I cant go on without you! Kylen!" Renna shouted crying, Her head falling to his chest in tears still hugging him. "Dont leave me... Dont leave me... I love you, Kylen. I love you. I really do..." Pain came back to see Renna huddled over Kylen. "I called them. Theyre on their way." he explained. "Okay." Renna squeaked. Pain tried to get her away but she just cried and screamed harder to stay. Pain let her be as she frantically cried over him. Not to long after, The police and ambulance people got there and walked over to Renna. "Come on, Miss. Time to go." one said, Taking her arm. "No! No! Please! L-Let me stay here!" Renna squealed trying to go back down to Kylen. They lost their grip, Falling upon him and kissing him as they pulled her up again. "Come ON Miss," they said agitated. "Time to go." "Ill NEVER forget you, Kylen Phylar... NEVER! I love you! For as long as I live!" Renna shouted out. "I love you!" She got carried out from the room as she looked at him one last time as she passed the wall that separated the two. "Im sorry this happened. Whats your name?" the young lady asked. "Renna." Renna responded. "Renna Respa." "Okay. Thank you." she said again. "Welcome" Renna said wiping her eyes. She cried for the longest time, Not moving from her spot. A few hours passed after the press and everybody left and Renna ran out of tears and she got up and walked to her room. She laid in her bed, Covering up and looked all over her room. Pictures were plastered all over of her and Kylen. She covered her head as a few silent tears dripped from her damp eyes. She slowly fell asleep as she thought of Kylen and their moments. All her dreams were about moments that she had with him. She woke up and threw the covers off at 4:16 A.M. She only got 2 ½ hours of sleep. She blinked and looked around and got up. She walked out of her room and stalked down the stairs into the kitchen. She saw Kylens binder and picked up. She ran her hand over the top and smiled slightly. Her smile faded and she set it back down. She walked into the kitchen and found something to drink and sat down on the table, Hanging her legs off the side. She drank her drink slowly and finally put it in the sink and went to bed. She tossed and turned about what had happened. She turned on her music to try to drown out her mind but it didnt work. She turned it off and stared out the window as the sun began to appear above the horizon. She silently cried and went back downstairs again. It was dark except an acception of a few sheers of light that found its way in, No thanks to the open curtains. She walked over into the living room and saw all the blood was gone. She glanced over at the clock that had just struck 7:36 A.M. A cold chill ran through her body, So she grabbed her trench and placed it over herself. She walked over and picked up Kylens binder and took it into the hallway. She placed it down to get her boots on and the picked it back up and walked out of the house and shut the door. She walked down the front porch steps and off towards the park. Her slow strides and gentle swaying of her trench made the leaves on the ground stir a little. She walked for almost a half hour and finally reached the hill by the lake at the park. She sat down hugging Kylens binder. She finally opened it and gasped. She found pictures on the inside that she had never seen. The first picture that they took together. The first picture that Kylen took of her. Lots of pictures. She went through his binder reading things. She spotted notes they wrote to each other, Songs and homework. She came upon a letter and she dropped the book. The binder fell to the ground as she sat on the bench crying in spite of herself. The wind blew the pages open, Flipping pages until it fell on a note her boyfriend wrote, Just hours before. She cried as she looked down at it again. It said, "Dear Miss LoveOfMyLife, How are you? Im good and you? I hope youre good. Im glad youre out of the hospital. It shocked me. I a poem for you! Just thought of it! Here it is! Some days, Ill stare out upon the sea, And if you do, too, I hope you think of me. Ill think of you wherever we are, Even to wish upon a shooting star. As time goes by, Ill always be with you, Our love that feels practically brand new. As long as I live, My heart will give. But only to you, My heart will bloom. Ill stay by your side, Together well stride. Until we die together in marriage one day. Thats it. I hope you liked it. I love you and Ill never move from you, Darling. Must go. Youre about to kiss me! Yay! Lol! -Kylen- P.S.- Ill love you forever! Never forget! Always remember!" Renna looked up and wiped her eyes with the end of her trench sleeve. She sniffled and stood up and found a few roses. A dark red one, A white one, A purple, one and a rare black one. She cropped them together with a small vine and took a picture of her and Kylen and she kissed his sweet face and placed the picture in the middle and got to the ground and placed it gently in the water and watched it float away. "I love you Kylen." she whispered as a tear fell into the water. "I will ALWAYS... Remember you. And just like you said, I will never forget. I promise." The wind blew in and whispered by the stream. It danced across the water. She watched it drift away and gradually got up and turned away. Her bell jingled slightly as her strides took her down the hill and back to the house that she had once called home. [/QUOTE]
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