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Well...this is my book-in-progress...I still have tons of things to work out but this is the general storyline so far! I am so mean to my poor characters
Plus my title, The Army of the North, is not as good as it could be, although it will make sense when I write the ending.
The smoke spiraled upward through the foggy night air. Everywhere there was fire, swords, metal clanging the sound of death. Men fought desperately for their homes and lives, a lost cause when one saw the hordes of armor-clad enemies storming the hill. It was just a matter of time now, a man observed from the darkness of the shadows. It was impossible to see his face; the heavy cloak he wore hid his dark features. Was he an enemy? A friend? He himself did not know; his only loyalty was to anyone who could pay him. He simply watched the men fight hopelessly, their dreams dying under the flash of ringing blades.
Caleb Sloane took a deep breath. He wondered if he should cry, or pray, or just give up hope. In his minds eye he saw his family; his sisters huddled around the embers of the fire, his father lying on the bed, grasping for breath. He straightened up. He had to fight. He knew he would not make it out of the massacre alive, but at least he die knowing he did all he could to save his family.
He leaned against the wall, taking in this last living moment of what could be called peace and thinking of things he had done and would never do. Just yesterday he and his family went to the village picnic, the sun shining, the children playing tag, and the trees rustling in the gentle spring wind. Now the trees were blackened stumps, and who knew what would happen to the children who had once played without a care?
Caleb fingered the sword at his side, his fathers sword. He drew it and held it up, seeing his reflection in the shining blade. He could see his fathers face, the look of pain and torment when he walked in from the fields, the anguish on his chiseled face as he watched his crops, his livelihood, burn to the ground.
With a fearsome, sobbing cry, Caleb rounded the corner of the last intact building near the battlefield and charged into the fray. The armored men were everywhere, slashing, burning, shouting. Caleb drove his sword into the nearest armored man he saw, not even grimacing when the man fell with an agonized yell. It was like Caleb was not even Caleb; he somehow saw outside of himself, himself fighting and hacking through the mob of men. A burning pain shot through his shoulder, but Caleb hardly felt the blood that ran down his arm. With a yell that seemed not his own, he parried, warded off blows meant to kill him. He did not care anymore that he died; a part of him had died already with the hundreds of other husbands, fathers, and sons on the bloody battlefield. Suddenly everything was dark, a black, inky murkiness that swirled up and engulfed Caleb like a rushing wind. The shouts of men and crackling of fire rose up around him, and then suddenly it all faded away into nothingness.
The watching man rose from the shadows. Soon, it would be over. The few survivors would be marched to a slow death in prison camps. It was now the man would make his move; his bloody job that followed was what he lived for. For that was what he was; faithful to no one, a heartless mercenary. He was too strong to die and too hated to live, breathing every breath for money and blood.
The captain of the Army from the North, as they were called fearfully, walked through the battlefield grimly. It had been a costly battle indeed; these peasants were hard fighters. His brow furrowed as he saw a cloaked figure walking through the debris. Ahkum. The mercenary who followed the army around, sometimes fighting and sometimes torturing the ones that lived through the fighting. The cloaked man approached the captain.
I am here to do my service, the man whispered in his strange guttural voice.
Get to it, the captain replied. Then I will send my soldiers with you. Find the hiding young women and bring them to me. Do what you want with the rest.
Without a word, the man walked away, disappearing through the lingering smoke that engulfed the sorry land. The captain watched him, distrust etched in his features.
Ahkum stepped through the battlefield as one might walk through a sunny field. His cloak fluttered about him in the cold light of the moon. Somehow his shadowy form seemed to belong there, among the blood and violence and gasps of dying men.
The army had already gathered up the fighting peasants who surrendered. It was Ahkums duty to find the ones alive but on the ground. It was most pleasurable to take the ones near death and make them walk for miles until they died from exhaustion and lack of food and water. It also put fear into the hearts of the other hapless peasants of other small towns. He drew his sword and bent over a groaning man.
Get up, Ahkum said coldly to the man, who had a gash in his head. Get up!
The man struggled to his feet and joined the other prisoners. Ahkum continued on, his face twisted up in a cruel smile. His smile widened when he came upon another man, the blood covering the peasant a stark contrast to the pale, cold face.
Ahkum grabbed the man and hauled him to his feet. The wound in his shoulder would claim his life soon. Blood gushed from a cut in his head, and he uttered a small moan. The man was in the throes of death, no doubt. Ahkum grinned happily. He would prolong the life of this one for bit more. Let the peasant think he will have a chance to live and suffer. He dragged the blood-soaked man to the medical tent.
Sew this one up just enough to stop the bleeding. Then report him back to me.
Caleb floated through a great expanse of warm, comforting darkness. All around him was death and doom, so he just stayed in the murky blackness. Something was pulling him, wracking his body with pain so fierce he wanted to cry out, but he could not find the strength even to whimper. The pain was everywhere now; somewhere in the distance he could see light and he turned his head away. The light grew until it flooded around him; he tried to go back into the darkness but he could not.
I canna see why tha mercenary of ours does this to them poor folk, a voice somewhere whispered. Tha captain is not to be a trusted, and the mercenary aint no better.
Suddenly the pain hit Caleb full-force; he had no choice but to sob, his face wracked with agony. He opened his eyes, the darkness sliding away forever. Where was he? He had no recollection of what he was doing, or had been doing. He did not know what happened to him or where he came from. The only thing he knew was that his name was Caleb; he took small comfort in that fact and clung to it. I am Caleb. I know that, and the pain.
Why, boy, youre a just about awake, now, aint ya?
Caleb focused his eyes on where the voice was coming from; a grizzled old man stood over him, holding a needle and thread. Caleb could hardly move his arms and legs and feet; he managed to feel his shoulder where the pain was coming from the worst. All he could feel was his own sticky, warm blood.
Yup, boy, you jus about got yore arm sliced right offa ya! the man remarked. Im jus the doctor for this here Army from the North, and I sewed ya up a mite.
Caleb could not think; his thoughts swirled about his muddled head. He could just gasp out of his parched lips, Where where am I?
The doctor put a bottle of water to Calebs lips, cool and satisfying. Youre a prisoner a war. If you had any sense tall in that brain o yours, youd a died while ya had the chance.
Caleb tried to sort out his thoughts. What will will they do with me?
Most likely, theyll either jus go right out an cut off that head o yours, or theyll make ya work and walk for days an weeks an months till ya drop dead.
Wh who?
The doctor regarded Caleb like he was an imbecile. Why, the Army of the North! They aint got no name, ya know. I knew I couldnt ave beaten em, so I just up an joined em! Im a right good doctor! The old man looked pleased with himself.
Caleb searched for answers in his mind. Where did he come from? Why was he fighting in this war, and how did he get his arm nearly cut off? Gingerly touching his head, he grimaced in pain. A large gash ran down the side of his face, cold to the touch. He struggled to stand, to do anything, but he just succeeded his falling on the doctor.
Well, now, youre a fighter, aint ya now, boy? the doctor grinned. If I were ya, Id be restin up. Ya ave to be back with the rest of them prisoners in a alf hour. That mercenary fellow, hes just not a tall inclined ta be nice ta anyone. Good thing I a joined up with the Army while I could!
Suddenly the darkness outside the doctors tent seemed to grow deeper, and the murmuring of the soldiers around the camp ceased. Caleb strained to get up, to listen to what was happening outside.
The mercenarys lips twisted up in a cruel grimace as he called the Armys soldiers to him. Now it was time to recover the peasant stragglers hiding, the women and children and the ones too weak or cowardly to fight.
Brave soldiers, I call you together again to locate the remainder of the rebels! If anyone resists, show no mercy! Kill all who struggle, and bring the rest to me to the tent of the prisoners! But take caution and do not kill the young women. Bring them to the captain instead, the mercenary Ahkum shouted. The soldiers responded by grimly putting on their helmets and marching off to the burned village.
~Prologue~
The smoke spiraled upward through the foggy night air. Everywhere there was fire, swords, metal clanging the sound of death. Men fought desperately for their homes and lives, a lost cause when one saw the hordes of armor-clad enemies storming the hill. It was just a matter of time now, a man observed from the darkness of the shadows. It was impossible to see his face; the heavy cloak he wore hid his dark features. Was he an enemy? A friend? He himself did not know; his only loyalty was to anyone who could pay him. He simply watched the men fight hopelessly, their dreams dying under the flash of ringing blades.
Caleb Sloane took a deep breath. He wondered if he should cry, or pray, or just give up hope. In his minds eye he saw his family; his sisters huddled around the embers of the fire, his father lying on the bed, grasping for breath. He straightened up. He had to fight. He knew he would not make it out of the massacre alive, but at least he die knowing he did all he could to save his family.
He leaned against the wall, taking in this last living moment of what could be called peace and thinking of things he had done and would never do. Just yesterday he and his family went to the village picnic, the sun shining, the children playing tag, and the trees rustling in the gentle spring wind. Now the trees were blackened stumps, and who knew what would happen to the children who had once played without a care?
Caleb fingered the sword at his side, his fathers sword. He drew it and held it up, seeing his reflection in the shining blade. He could see his fathers face, the look of pain and torment when he walked in from the fields, the anguish on his chiseled face as he watched his crops, his livelihood, burn to the ground.
With a fearsome, sobbing cry, Caleb rounded the corner of the last intact building near the battlefield and charged into the fray. The armored men were everywhere, slashing, burning, shouting. Caleb drove his sword into the nearest armored man he saw, not even grimacing when the man fell with an agonized yell. It was like Caleb was not even Caleb; he somehow saw outside of himself, himself fighting and hacking through the mob of men. A burning pain shot through his shoulder, but Caleb hardly felt the blood that ran down his arm. With a yell that seemed not his own, he parried, warded off blows meant to kill him. He did not care anymore that he died; a part of him had died already with the hundreds of other husbands, fathers, and sons on the bloody battlefield. Suddenly everything was dark, a black, inky murkiness that swirled up and engulfed Caleb like a rushing wind. The shouts of men and crackling of fire rose up around him, and then suddenly it all faded away into nothingness.
The watching man rose from the shadows. Soon, it would be over. The few survivors would be marched to a slow death in prison camps. It was now the man would make his move; his bloody job that followed was what he lived for. For that was what he was; faithful to no one, a heartless mercenary. He was too strong to die and too hated to live, breathing every breath for money and blood.
Chapter One
The captain of the Army from the North, as they were called fearfully, walked through the battlefield grimly. It had been a costly battle indeed; these peasants were hard fighters. His brow furrowed as he saw a cloaked figure walking through the debris. Ahkum. The mercenary who followed the army around, sometimes fighting and sometimes torturing the ones that lived through the fighting. The cloaked man approached the captain.
I am here to do my service, the man whispered in his strange guttural voice.
Get to it, the captain replied. Then I will send my soldiers with you. Find the hiding young women and bring them to me. Do what you want with the rest.
Without a word, the man walked away, disappearing through the lingering smoke that engulfed the sorry land. The captain watched him, distrust etched in his features.
Ahkum stepped through the battlefield as one might walk through a sunny field. His cloak fluttered about him in the cold light of the moon. Somehow his shadowy form seemed to belong there, among the blood and violence and gasps of dying men.
The army had already gathered up the fighting peasants who surrendered. It was Ahkums duty to find the ones alive but on the ground. It was most pleasurable to take the ones near death and make them walk for miles until they died from exhaustion and lack of food and water. It also put fear into the hearts of the other hapless peasants of other small towns. He drew his sword and bent over a groaning man.
Get up, Ahkum said coldly to the man, who had a gash in his head. Get up!
The man struggled to his feet and joined the other prisoners. Ahkum continued on, his face twisted up in a cruel smile. His smile widened when he came upon another man, the blood covering the peasant a stark contrast to the pale, cold face.
Ahkum grabbed the man and hauled him to his feet. The wound in his shoulder would claim his life soon. Blood gushed from a cut in his head, and he uttered a small moan. The man was in the throes of death, no doubt. Ahkum grinned happily. He would prolong the life of this one for bit more. Let the peasant think he will have a chance to live and suffer. He dragged the blood-soaked man to the medical tent.
Sew this one up just enough to stop the bleeding. Then report him back to me.
Caleb floated through a great expanse of warm, comforting darkness. All around him was death and doom, so he just stayed in the murky blackness. Something was pulling him, wracking his body with pain so fierce he wanted to cry out, but he could not find the strength even to whimper. The pain was everywhere now; somewhere in the distance he could see light and he turned his head away. The light grew until it flooded around him; he tried to go back into the darkness but he could not.
I canna see why tha mercenary of ours does this to them poor folk, a voice somewhere whispered. Tha captain is not to be a trusted, and the mercenary aint no better.
Suddenly the pain hit Caleb full-force; he had no choice but to sob, his face wracked with agony. He opened his eyes, the darkness sliding away forever. Where was he? He had no recollection of what he was doing, or had been doing. He did not know what happened to him or where he came from. The only thing he knew was that his name was Caleb; he took small comfort in that fact and clung to it. I am Caleb. I know that, and the pain.
Why, boy, youre a just about awake, now, aint ya?
Caleb focused his eyes on where the voice was coming from; a grizzled old man stood over him, holding a needle and thread. Caleb could hardly move his arms and legs and feet; he managed to feel his shoulder where the pain was coming from the worst. All he could feel was his own sticky, warm blood.
Yup, boy, you jus about got yore arm sliced right offa ya! the man remarked. Im jus the doctor for this here Army from the North, and I sewed ya up a mite.
Caleb could not think; his thoughts swirled about his muddled head. He could just gasp out of his parched lips, Where where am I?
The doctor put a bottle of water to Calebs lips, cool and satisfying. Youre a prisoner a war. If you had any sense tall in that brain o yours, youd a died while ya had the chance.
Caleb tried to sort out his thoughts. What will will they do with me?
Most likely, theyll either jus go right out an cut off that head o yours, or theyll make ya work and walk for days an weeks an months till ya drop dead.
Wh who?
The doctor regarded Caleb like he was an imbecile. Why, the Army of the North! They aint got no name, ya know. I knew I couldnt ave beaten em, so I just up an joined em! Im a right good doctor! The old man looked pleased with himself.
Caleb searched for answers in his mind. Where did he come from? Why was he fighting in this war, and how did he get his arm nearly cut off? Gingerly touching his head, he grimaced in pain. A large gash ran down the side of his face, cold to the touch. He struggled to stand, to do anything, but he just succeeded his falling on the doctor.
Well, now, youre a fighter, aint ya now, boy? the doctor grinned. If I were ya, Id be restin up. Ya ave to be back with the rest of them prisoners in a alf hour. That mercenary fellow, hes just not a tall inclined ta be nice ta anyone. Good thing I a joined up with the Army while I could!
Suddenly the darkness outside the doctors tent seemed to grow deeper, and the murmuring of the soldiers around the camp ceased. Caleb strained to get up, to listen to what was happening outside.
The mercenarys lips twisted up in a cruel grimace as he called the Armys soldiers to him. Now it was time to recover the peasant stragglers hiding, the women and children and the ones too weak or cowardly to fight.
Brave soldiers, I call you together again to locate the remainder of the rebels! If anyone resists, show no mercy! Kill all who struggle, and bring the rest to me to the tent of the prisoners! But take caution and do not kill the young women. Bring them to the captain instead, the mercenary Ahkum shouted. The soldiers responded by grimly putting on their helmets and marching off to the burned village.
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