Tell me if this poem is any good

[Cinderella1]

I do not know if this is the right section to put this, I assume this could provide some counsel to people or uplift someone. Sorry!
Anyways, tell me if you think this poem is any good, don't be harsh I am not a poet.

The deafening silence of calloused hearts
The grim reminder of a past long gone
Dark shadows forebode
The evil that consumes the lands
Arrogance that blinds
Pride that deafens
A hole
The horrific emptiness
Filled by one alone
So many reject
Blinded by their arrogance
Deafened by their pride
They refuse truth
Oh how they revel in disgust
Bathe in lies
They drink the blood of man
Who else can save us they ask
But they want no answer
Hypocrite they yell at you
Liar they brand you
Have faith
For one day it ends
Your weeping extinguished
Your sadness gone
Only through living and dying in him
The one who gives life
Do you find true life

 

[Rage4Christ]

This is pretty intense stuff. You say you are not a poet, but you could be:
How to write poetry .

It just takes a lot of work.

 

[KleinerApfel]

Pumpkinsoftruth,
that's a lot of raw feeling to explore, you obviously have poetry in you. Why not take a look at the poetry forum on here? Just scrool down to "forum jump" and you'll get to it easily.

Hope it inspires you to be among like-minded folk!

Blessings, Susana