shernren
you are not reading this.
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Yes, I totally agree that I need to make it easier to read. (This is also a response to your PM.) At the same time, I don't believe that it's a format issue. The "format" is really something that forces me to make my paragraphs more directed and less all-over. The problem with me is that I'm so used to the people I talk with here that when I write stuff, I automatically go into "shock and awe" mode without thinking. That is not good when, as you suggested, someone new is being confronted with hackneyed but convincing creationist ideas.
Sorry Shernren but there has got to be better and simpler ways to write this. You are a really good communicator, but I think the format throws us into philosophy and theology mode. We have to be able to express it in ways that can be simply understood everyone from the 14 year old who has just been wowed by a load of pratts on the DrDino site, to mature believers who have walked with the Lord for years.
Will try to edit again. Don't feel bad about pointing it out. If something's worth doing, I often need a small kick in the butt to get around to doing it. (especially when my life isn't hanging on it.
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