Hey! I have some poems to share, and I'd appreciate feedback!
#1:
Somewhere,
Far beyond this earth,
There is something pulsating,
Sending its all powerful pulses all the way across nothing and infinity,
To you.
There is a heart,
A core,
The core of everything,
Beating,
Hard and steady and constant,
Never changing.
This heart is beating for you,
For you to feel and hear, even through your deafness.
This heart first ignited yours,
Back,
Way back,
Before even the stars shone,
There was this heart,
Creating your heart to be a beautiful, priceless reflection.
And,
Long before He told the stars to shine,
He told you to shine,
For Him,
Because he loved, loves, and will love you
Longer than time can live.
Yes,
He loves you more than even the mighty stars.
He gave you more power than even the stars,
And the power is deep in you,
Resting, growing, waiting for the day that its little flicker will become a blazing flame
Of love and hope and faith.
Long before time and place,
This heart was beating,
This fire was burning.
And long after
Time and place,
This heart will beat even still.
This fire will burn ever more.
Your heart can beat forever too.
Your fire can burn forever too,
If only you can pick out the ancient pulses,
Far quieter than any silence.
If only you can open your ears
To a new sound
That was,
Before any,
Singing out silence.
(just about listening to God)
~Go w/ God<><
#1:
Silent Song
Can you feel it?
Somewhere,
Far beyond this earth,
There is something pulsating,
Sending its all powerful pulses all the way across nothing and infinity,
To you.
There is a heart,
A core,
The core of everything,
Beating,
Hard and steady and constant,
Never changing.
This heart is beating for you,
For you to feel and hear, even through your deafness.
This heart first ignited yours,
Back,
Way back,
Before even the stars shone,
There was this heart,
Creating your heart to be a beautiful, priceless reflection.
And,
Long before He told the stars to shine,
He told you to shine,
For Him,
Because he loved, loves, and will love you
Longer than time can live.
Yes,
He loves you more than even the mighty stars.
He gave you more power than even the stars,
And the power is deep in you,
Resting, growing, waiting for the day that its little flicker will become a blazing flame
Of love and hope and faith.
Long before time and place,
This heart was beating,
This fire was burning.
And long after
Time and place,
This heart will beat even still.
This fire will burn ever more.
Your heart can beat forever too.
Your fire can burn forever too,
If only you can pick out the ancient pulses,
Far quieter than any silence.
If only you can open your ears
To a new sound
That was,
Before any,
Singing out silence.
(just about listening to God)
~Go w/ God<><
