Hey all,
Well, I just finished this poem...and I think I am happy with it, but wasn't sure if it worked properly with flow and everything, and so I wanted your opinion on it!!
Thanks
God Bless
Danni
Refinement like Gold
Sometimes I find it so hard to explain,
the things that I feel so deeply within.
Will words be enough, to explain it all...
or does so much more need to be expressed?
Coz sure, life is not always easy and fun,
coz there are the times when trials refine.
During these times though we must make a choice,
will we crumble, or find a new strength?
Though it sounded a whole lot easier,
crumbling is much harder than I thought.
The embrace of God's Mighty arms around me,
showed me that I could never let go.
As much as I thought I could handle it alone,
God taught me that there is a better way.
And sure, I am being refined even today,
as new and different trials I face become clear...
but my God will never leave me or forsake me,
this is a promise He gave.
So onward I walk, no matter how hard it may seem,
and I continue to trek in the paths He has shown.
I pray for strength and guidance each day,
hoping for a break sometime along the way.
But as much as I hope for this break,
I know in my heart, that this refinement is good...
as like gold, He will see His reflection in me.
Danni
15/06/05
Well, I just finished this poem...and I think I am happy with it, but wasn't sure if it worked properly with flow and everything, and so I wanted your opinion on it!!
Thanks
God Bless
Danni
Refinement like Gold
Sometimes I find it so hard to explain,
the things that I feel so deeply within.
Will words be enough, to explain it all...
or does so much more need to be expressed?
Coz sure, life is not always easy and fun,
coz there are the times when trials refine.
During these times though we must make a choice,
will we crumble, or find a new strength?
Though it sounded a whole lot easier,
crumbling is much harder than I thought.
The embrace of God's Mighty arms around me,
showed me that I could never let go.
As much as I thought I could handle it alone,
God taught me that there is a better way.
And sure, I am being refined even today,
as new and different trials I face become clear...
but my God will never leave me or forsake me,
this is a promise He gave.
So onward I walk, no matter how hard it may seem,
and I continue to trek in the paths He has shown.
I pray for strength and guidance each day,
hoping for a break sometime along the way.
But as much as I hope for this break,
I know in my heart, that this refinement is good...
as like gold, He will see His reflection in me.
Danni
15/06/05
