Real Nightmare.

[Cerulean_Butterfly]

It might trigger... it shouldn't though. But I'm putting a warning just in case.

A movie
Shown
To only those asleep
A second
A minute
An hour or two
How long will it last?
Good
Bad
Sometimes in between
But for me,
It's funny.
Yet sad.
These dreams that I get
Are always bad.
Or are they dreams?
I'm not so sure
I bleed in attempt to awaken
Yet I'm still here.
I guess my nightmare...
Is real.

Copyright © 2005.

Honest opinions please. I really want to know what you think of it.

 

[emilythedevout]

that... was the most beautiful thing i've ever read. Good Job

 

[Cerulean_Butterfly]

Anyone?

 

[<<dAnNi>>]

It is good...has a good flow to it...but sad - the message in it is just so true for many people, and every time I read a poem like this, it saddens my spirit. But I pray you realise your value in God and the truth in His Word.

God Bless You heaps!
Danni

P.S - You can PM me anytime...I am always there if you need someone to have a chat to!