Pondering Guilt

[Hidden face_Hurting heart]

At night when I lay awake,
A constant sigh upon my lips,
I wonder if God sees me
And truly knows my hurting heart.
Sometimes I wish to end it all;
Leave the suffering of this world and die.
I doubt the quiet voice of hope
That softly says I have a purpose.
I look sadly over my life,
Ashamed by the constant lies and sin.
I know I am forgiven,
Still, "sorry" doesn't seem enough.

 

[<<dAnNi>>]

Very good poem...very emotive and descriptive...

God Bless You!!!!

Danni

 

[jobstears]

In its brevity your deep thoughts are poignant and provocative...loved this!

blessings,
jobstears

 

[Wakeup2god]

Just read your poem, I love honesty as does God. It enspired me to write the following verse.

Be blessed

Why the sorrow child? Its not for me to know.
Your pain, your burden, yet for me my own I know.
Look up, look on, as hope does rise,
and let His light shine filling tearfull eyes.

He see's all pain that scars us deep
to all He beckons enter in.
You breathe a sigh
He breathes us life
He has forgotten all our sin.

 

[<<dAnNi>>]

Just read your poem, I love honesty as does God. It enspired me to write the following verse.

Be blessed

Why the sorrow child? Its not for me to know.
Your pain, your burden, yet for me my own I know.
Look up, look on, as hope does rise,
and let His light shine filling tearfull eyes.

He see's all pain that scars us deep
to all He beckons enter in.
You breathe a sigh
He breathes us life
He has forgotten all our sin.

Beautiful...what a wonderful response!

God Bless
Danni

 

[Hidden face_Hurting heart]

Just read your poem, I love honesty as does God. It enspired me to write the following verse.

Be blessed

Why the sorrow child? Its not for me to know.
Your pain, your burden, yet for me my own I know.
Look up, look on, as hope does rise,
and let His light shine filling tearfull eyes.

He see's all pain that scars us deep
to all He beckons enter in.
You breathe a sigh
He breathes us life
He has forgotten all our sin.

Wow...I must say, I am in awe. Your response is beautiful! Thank you so much! (if anyone would like to read my story, my inspiration for these poems, it's here- http://www.christianforums.com/showthread.php?p=10496805#post10496805) Thank you all so much for reading and responding to my poem. I glad it touched some people.