November Sky

[LunaLee]

Not quite finished smoothin' out the bumps in this one yet, just wrote it last night, thought I'd get your opinions first.

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Wings beat against November sky
Rumpling golden sunbeams
Stirring unseen beauty free
Let it be
Just let it be

A rainbow glows and I know why
It's not from the gentle rain
Promises are best in color
Like a brother
There's no other

Orange orb in November sky
Behind black beating wings
Earth settles with the setting sun
Nature is one
Thanks to the Son

Nothing's undone
Thank you, God's Son


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[Quixotic the Pedestrian]

nice I liked it

 

[Hidden_Love]

Beautiful! Love November!