• Starting today August 7th, 2024, in order to post in the Married Couples, Courting Couples, or Singles forums, you will not be allowed to post if you have your Marital status designated as private. Announcements will be made in the respective forums as well but please note that if yours is currently listed as Private, you will need to submit a ticket in the Support Area to have yours changed.

  • CF has always been a site that welcomes people from different backgrounds and beliefs to participate in discussion and even debate. That is the nature of its ministry. In view of recent events emotions are running very high. We need to remind people of some basic principles in debating on this site. We need to be civil when we express differences in opinion. No personal attacks. Avoid you, your statements. Don't characterize an entire political party with comparisons to Fascism or Communism or other extreme movements that committed atrocities. CF is not the place for broad brush or blanket statements about groups and political parties. Put the broad brushes and blankets away when you come to CF, better yet, put them in the incinerator. Debate had no place for them. We need to remember that people that commit acts of violence represent themselves or a small extreme faction.

My Story (updated when I can)

Bloodwashed19

Member
Dec 29, 2005
6
0
38
✟116.00
Faith
Baptist
Politics
US-Republican
This is my first bit of writing that I really liked my self. If I am putting up something that isn't allowed, please let me know. Otherwise, enjoy and definetly give me comments. I am a new writer so I am always looking for things to fix.

Few There Was

Once, human kind was the most advanced and powerful beings in the galaxy. They ruled and occupied many worlds. But they were (for the most part) kind and wise rulers, and so the galaxy prospered. Even though, there were still rebellious factions that attempted to destroy Earth so that they may become the dominant and ruling specie. The humans had already survived many attacks and were growing weary of war, so they created androids to fight for them and protect Earth. They called them The Few, for there were only 101 of them. There were plans to create more, but they are extremely expensive to build, so it was slow in coming. Soon after the humans deployed the first of The Few, something very strange happened. The humans, Earth, and all of its creatures reverted back to when man just started crawling out of their caves. All of their wondrous technological feats disappeared, except for The Few, and they don’t understand why. They still defend Earth and the primitive humans from a secret and hidden land, and this is where the story begins.

*** *** *** *** ***​

Marcus had been away from home for so long now. Three years? Yes, that’s about right. He was put on assignment for the CIA to search for something, and his small group had been chasing leads for all that time. They were told to find the source of an odd happening in space. Astronauts on a Russian space station had seen strange lights flying about the moon. For some reason, the U.S. became very interested in the happening.
“Aliens…” He thought aloud, “Why am I the one to go on the stupidest wild goose chase of all time? And even if it was aliens, why in the world would there be anything on this god forsaken world?”
“Actually,” Said Carol, “from what my superiors told me, they think that it originated on Earth and moved to space.”
“That’s ridiculous,” Alex remarked in his deeper voice, “There’s nothing here that could do that kind of stuff.”
“How do you know?” Carol retorted.
“Because Planet Earth is pathetic.” Rebecca snorted.
They were on a small ship sailing into the exact center of the Bermuda Triangle. Believe it or not, not a single person was known to have gone there. The reason for going there is that the CIA had picked up a sudden explosion of energy in it. So, off they went.
“Land ahead!” Yelled down the captain, “about 3 miles out!”
“What? There’s no land out here!” Marcus yelled back.
Peculiarly enough, there was land out there. It wasn’t a large island, but apparently someone was living on it. There were large gleaming towers on four sides, pointing to the north, south, east, and west. Throughout the island were many buildings. The island still appeared to be over grown with foliage and trees though. Marcus stared in awe as he climbed up to the small command deck of the ship. The others followed suit.
“How long until we get close enough to land?” Alex asked.
“About 10 minutes.” The captain answered.
“Alright everybody,” Alex snapped around to face the three others, “gear up. We’re going to see who is on this island.”
** ** **
Soon enough they were getting out of a small escape boat each carrying an assault rifle and a pistol on their sides. They walked up the pristine white sand beach and walked into a lush, green forest.
“Strange…” Carol stated, “The trees here are deciduous, but we should be south enough for this to be more tropical.”
“Don’t worry about it.” Rebecca said. Her long red hair swayed in the soft sea breeze, “We just need to find out who the heck is living on this island nobody had any idea was here, that right out of the blue appeared. Let alone that these people, or whatever the heck they are, are obviously advanced.”
Quite suddenly, they came out into an opening. They nearly fainted at the sight they saw. This was much more amazing than the towers at the shore. This was a city. Except that this city was much more natural. As in there was a lot of grass, and the trees grew around the buildings, or even made up the buildings for all the group could tell. Though there were still tall buildings jutting up out of the trees, glistening in the midday sun. Marcus thought he caught some movement beyond a building a little ways in front of them.
“This way!” he said to the others. He cautiously ran up beside the building and glanced around the corner. The man nearly fell on his butt.
“What is your problem?” Alex said gruffly.
“Th-there’s some robots or something in the middle of the clearing,” Marcus answered astonished.
“Oookay.” Rachel remarked.
Carol peeked around the corner next, “Oh my!”
“Okay, okay, let me see.” Alex pushed her out of the way, “Wow.”
What he saw was quite interesting. There were many of them and they stood in a big circle. They were at least two feet taller than a tall man, and shined and sparkled as the light fell onto their smooth bodies. Their bodies, arms, and legs were very lanky, and their fingers were as long as Alex’s fore arm. He could see that they were razor sharp at the ends. Their heads were squat and had no mouth, but two large, dark eyes on the sides and it seemed as if they were wearing helmets. The one in the middle of the circle was a little different from the others in that he was colored silver, he was a little taller, and had spikes on the top of his head, Alex guessed that was their leader. All of the others varied little, from color to equipment that they held or carried on their sides and back.
“Well,” The leader turned to look straight into Alex’s eyes, “It looks as if our guests have arrived.”

*** *** *** *** ***​
 

Bloodwashed19

Member
Dec 29, 2005
6
0
38
✟116.00
Faith
Baptist
Politics
US-Republican
Here is the second part of my story. Its getting kinda hard to come up with new ideas, so if anybody has any ideas, feel free to give it. I think that i'm gonna put up only a little at a time, so I can practice (Because I REALLY nead it:p ). Please R&R.

*******​

Alex and the others were lounging in a room that the leader lead them to. It was a small, steel room with many windows. The leader had said that he wanted to prepare a small celebration, so to speak. But Alex wasn’t convinced. There was something amiss here. A whole civilization of robots, of all things, doesn’t just appear out of nowhere and claim that they have been waiting for 4 humans to stumble onto the robots home. The fact that they were so advanced didn’t sway Alex’s opinion.

The door at the front of the room opened silently, “Please, come with me.” It was the leader again. He turned and walked down the long hallway with the humans behind him.

“When are you going to answer our questions?” Alex asked commandingly.

“Soon enough,” the leaders low voice answered, Marcus guessed that he could probably be very loud when he needed to be, “ First, we must celebrate your coming. It has proven much to us.” He lead them down a few more hallways and came out in a huge room. The hall was quite literally the size of three or so football fields and so tall that Carol could barely make out the light fixtures up top, though to her, they looked a little bit like chandeliers. They sat next to the leader and a jet-black robot that had orangish eyes, two next to the leader and two next to the black.

“Let us celebrate the coming of the humans.” The leader boomed, “It proves that they are not as stupid as we might think.” They all chuckled, except for the humans of course. “The time of our reveal is nigh! We will soon be united once again with our ancient masters!” There was food for the humans and the robots sat round and talked with them. They told them many stories; of how they were created and why, of many of their battles, and each came by and told the humans their name. Quicksilver was the name of the leader, for he was able to run and react the fastest, and was able to calculate the winning strategy faster than anything else. Nightmare was the name of the black one, and he was the leader of a section of the robots known as The Stealth. He was also the second in command to Quicksilver and spoke in a whisper at all times, though he could make it loud enough for all to hear. There were, of course, 99 others, but you will learn their names when the time comes. The name for all of them together was, as previously stated, The Few.

For now though, Quicksilver had to talk with them, “I will answer all of your questions, and I need something of you.”

“Yeah, Yeah,” Alex answered, he was still suspicious, “We’ll see.”



*** *** *** *** ***
 
Upvote 0