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My first poem in a long while

onecrazycowgirl

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I've been in a bit of a writing slump, but I was thinking about this a while back, and jotted a bit of a poem down.   Since everybody else's been posting their poems here, I figured why not.  Tell me what you guys think of it.


To my Horse, Komet

From day to day and year to year
It's you that makes me whole
The pounding of your hooves
Sparks magic in my soul.

Who could match our joy?
None would be so bold
As we canter through the meadows
In the dance of ages old.

You were a gift from heaven
On earth you give me wings
And even angels envy
The joy such freedom brings

We will travel the world over
And track a rainbow to its end
We will find our pot of gold
And continue round the bend.

Our gold may come as trophies
Or ribbons flashing blue
But these things matter little
My treasure lies in you.

 

:rolleyes: Maybe it's a bit overboard, but I like how it turned out :)