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Medabots Add-On Story

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I have a little bit of a plan for the camping trip. Infact, I just got a great idea! I have to post it, or I'll forget it.

Ali helped her mom pack their huge, red pick-up truck with the things they'd need for the camping trip. On the way they went.
"Oh, when we get there, we will be greted by our hiking leader."
"We have to have a hiking leader?"
"Yes. In this park, it's pretty much rule."


When they got to the park, the unloaded the things from the truck, and went to get their park leader. They found him in the main building. Ali thought he looked slightly familiar.
"Ah, you must be the McKenzies." he said. His voice was familiar too.
"Yes, we're finally here." Rena said. The hiking leader looked at Ali, and winked. Ali suddenly realized who it was. Her mouth dropped.
"Mom, it's-mom it's-mom it's-it's-it's-DAD!" The hiking leader took off his park hat, and shook his head.
"Our daughter is too smart for us Rena. She's obviously not the little girl I left behind."
Rena smiled, and said, "Your right. I was hoping this would go, until we were at least a mile into our hike, but next time you'll have to grow a beard, for her to not recognize you."
Ali was dumbstruck. She was shocked that her parent's had actually planned this!
"So, where's my hug?" Ali's dad asked.
Ali smiled and practically jumped ontop of her dad, in a bug bear hug.
"Whoa! You're not as light as you used to be either." At that moment, John McKenzie noticed Jared.
"And who's this?" John asked.
"Oh, dad, this is Jared. Jared, this is my dad."
John shook hands with Jared.


Ughh. My brain is out of juice. I'll post a little later.
 
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David and Narsil arrived at home. Hey mom were home. David your father called said he wanted to go on a camping trip just you, Narsil, and him. Right mom I’ll get my pack ready and meet him at the park. David ran to his room and began to pack. An hour later David and Narsil were at the park (oh and for those
of you who don't know Narsil is the name of Aragorns sword in Lord of the Ring). Hey dads were here. Ok well lets find a camping site and pitch our Tents. David his father and Narsil made their way towards a nice spot by a stream. David and Narsil pitched their tent then went of for a stroll. They walked past other campers and their medabot’s who as they were just enjoying the out doors. David lets find someone to Robattle Narsil suggested. All right buddy. David looked around to see if anyone with a medabot was worth a battle with he finally saw some one and yelled at him. Hey bud want to Robattle? (Josh i'm talking to your character)
 
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Jared just stood still looking at the camp fire he was bulding. The soft afternoo breaze blew against his cheek as he turned to face David. "I remember you." said Jared . "Hmm, well that's to bad because I don't, let's ro-battle!" replied David. The two walked out to the center of the park where a battle circle was located. There was a referee waiting for the two to arrive. Jared lifted his gold medawatch up to his face as he said the words, transport, Sumilidon! Sumilidon appeared from within a glowing blue ball of energy. "What the, now I remember you. Your Jared Hayferd! I saw you at the American International Medabot Tournment a couple years ago. Can't say you were doing very well." said David. "Well, just to let you know, that tournment is smaller then European Tournment! Which I placed fifth last year." said Jared grinning. Ali gazed upon Jared with discust. She'd never seen Jared act this way before, what was wrong with him? "Then it is agreed. I, Mr. Referee, officialy declare this a submission ro-battle. The first apponent to unable the other apponents medabot from functioning wins. The loser has to give the winner a medapart for keeps. Medafighters ready? Medabots, ro-battle!!" yelled the referee swinging his amrs down!! "Go Sumilidon, fire a missile volley and stand in defence mode!" said Jared. "Narsil, jump out of the way and counter with your sword attack!" said David. Sumilidon fired his missiles and stood in defence while Narsil jumped to the left and ran up to Sumilidon with his sword! "Sumilidon, block his attack with your flexor sword!" said Jared. Metal against metal clashed as the two beetle medaled medabots faught with their powerful swords!

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Keep up the battle Luke, let's make this one last a while!!
 
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Narsil i'm uploading a special weapon. David transported Phoenix’s lower body and right arm. Narsil use the flame-thrower to melt Sumilidons Sword. Narsil flew into the air and fired the flame-thrower. The intense flame melted half of Sumilidons sword. All right Narsil finish him off. Narsil landed as the phoenix’s parts were untransported and his normal parts retransported. Narsil charged at Sumilidon and performed a lower-upper slash. Sumilidon took some damage but not enough to deactivate him. Sumilidon charge at Narsil and knock his sword out of his hand Jared yelled. Sumilidon did just that and caused sever damage to Narsil's right arm. 90% damage to right arm David’s medawatch read. You’re good for a Brit.
 
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Ali watched the ro-battle for about five minutes, before she walked back to their campsite. Besides, if Jared wins he'll be explaining the battle to me in every detail, so I'm not going to miss anything.
Ali was confused. She'd never seen Jared act that way. Ali decided to take a walk. She told her mom she was going for a walk, and left. Ali found a trail, and decided she'd bring Blaze. Ali lifted her metalic purple watch her mouth. "Transport Blaze." she said. In a blink of an eye, Blaze was standing before her.
"You want to go for a walk?" Ali asked.
"Yeah!" Blaze said, her ears purking up. Ali and Blaze walked along the trail for quite a while, before they heard someone coming behind them. Ali didn't pay much attention, but Blaze kept insisting that they hide. Ali explained to Blaze that it was a park, and lot's of people walk on the same trails as other people. Blaze seemed a little more comforted but she still was a little tense. Ali turrned to see who was on the trail, incase it was her mom. Ali rolled her eyes, and groaned when Justin, x-leader of the Screws walked up to her.
"Hey Ali, I want to talk with you." he said, a bit of anger growing in his voice.
"Well, I don't feel like talking with you right now." Ali said, as she kept walking.
"Well you don't really have a choice. I came to offer you a spot in the Screws gang."
Ali swung around.
"What?!?"
"Yeah. We all talked it over, and thought you'd fit in."
"Justin, I demolished your Medebot."
"So? I can get him fixed." Justin said, crossing his arms. Ali thought for a moment. Then, smiling she said.
"Justin, you know that I wouldn't join your stupid little club in a million years. Okay?" Ali turrned and walked off, with Justin yelling back at her.
"I was giving you a chance Ali! Now, you'll never get that offer again!"
Ali turrned and yelled back at him, "Good! I've never wanted it anyway!"

Ali and Blaze stayed on the same trail for quite a while, before coming to a clearing.
"Let's go back." Ali said. Blaze agreed, and they made their way back to the main road.
 
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"What's that suppose to mean? You Yanks aren't really all that perfect as you think you are." said Jared still grinning. "Enough talk, Narsil, grab your sword and cut that piece of junk in half!" said David. Narsil ran up to Sumilidon and swung at his torso! "Sumilidon, jump back and fire your missiles! Then rush in and finish him with your flexor sword!" siad Jared. Sumilidon fired his volley of missiles and ran in with it's incredible speed and attacked with it's flexor sword! "Warning: right arm severed, one-huindred percent damage." said David's watch. I gotta watch out for his flexor sword, it's still at full strength even when I damaged it, thought David. Sumilidon fired another volly of missiles! "Narsil, use your redirect beam make the missiles fire at Sumilidon!" said David. The missiles were turned around and heading right for Sumilidon. "Sumilidon, watch out!" yelled Jared, but it was too late. All of Sumilidon's own missiles collided with him. No, I can't lose to this Yank, thought Jared. Jared waited for the piercing words; function siezed. But they didn't come!! "Alright Sumilidon don't give up, we're still in this. Quick fore another volley of missiles to distract Narsil. Sumilidon as was told and it worked, Narsil jumped to the side and was distracted! "Now Sumilidon, medaforce!!" yelled Jared. Sumilidon entire body glowed yellow as his eyes glowing green! Oh no, it's the medaforce, thought David. "Hmm, you think your Sumilidon is the only one in this battle with the medaforce? Well think again, Narsil, medaforce!" said David. The referee looked cautiosly at both medabots and ran away suddenly. "What's he doing?!?" said Jared. Now, both medabots were charged up and ready to fire!! All of a sudden, Narsil was tackled by Blaze and Sumilidon was tackled by Warbandit!! "What are you doing?" yelled Jared at his brother. "Your an idiot, as usual, but you couldn't be a bigger idiot today!" yelled Peter. "What's he talking about and I want answers now!" yelled David equally ticked off as Jared. "Don't you see? Both of your medabots have the medaforce." said Ali. "So, what's your point?" asked David. "Have either of you ever heard the story? If two medabots weelding the medaforce fire the medaforce at eachother, then thearidecly[sp], the whole world will come to an end(I'm not making that up)!" said Peter. "Yikes!! Good thing you guys came on time. Hey David, let's call it a draw." said Jared extending his hand out to David. "I accept your offer, but for the recoerds, you offered the draw, not me." said David smiling. "What do you mean?" asked Ali. "Wel, it means that he's the one who was too chicken to battle on." replied David fixin' to crack up. Jared growled at David. "Until next time Jared." said David walking back to his camp site. "I bet we'll see him again." said Peter.
 
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Woops! Didn't see your post.


Ali sighed a sigh of releif.
"Thank goodness we got here when we did." Ali said.
"Yeah, or the world would have come to an end as we know it." Peter replied.


Can't think. You can post next, and that should start my imagination up again.
 
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David and Narsil made their way to their camp site. You did good Narsil i'll have you fixed up in a few minutes. When they got their David pulled out his tool box he had brought along and began to repair the damage from the robattle. Ouch!! watch it with that wrench david Narsil yellped as David began to repair his right arm. Oh don't be such a cry babby Narsil this will just take a moment. Finaly David had repaired Narsil to top form.
 
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David sat by the camp fire thinking. Hey dad you work for the Medabot corporation here in America right? Yeah son that's how you got Narsil he was one of the first WhiteSword medabots that were built here in California. So you know all the available ubgrade parts for Narsil right? Yeah heck you can buy them at the medabot store in town. Well Narsil how do you feal about being upgraded? Fine with me. Alright then as soon as we get back to town we'll go buy your new parts and kick that british boy's but.
 
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