make a story! (3)

(((Aw, that sucks. I'm on Spring Break. )))

Nin slowly opened his eyes. He was too weak to fight, but he could still watch. Devin charged Zachary, whom was weakened from his fight with Nin, and Greg. Blade and Alexis stopped teaming up, and charged Bakura and Nina respectively. John stood there, facing Dark. "I'll blow you away like a did last time...." said John. "And then what? I'll come back to life, like I did. Your fight with me will never end, Light. Not until I'm victorious!" said Dark, spitefully. "It ends today!!" said John, going Flame Angel. Dark transformed into his Flame Demon form. "It only seemed natural that I shoul;d have the same abilities as my counterpart....with a dark twist..." laughed Dark. John drew his sabres, and Dark drew his sword. They engaged in a sword fight, each stroke causing a force of energy to eminate.

Devin dodged a blast of flame from Zachary, only to be hit by the invisible gust of wind Greg had launched. "I dodge the visible flames, only to be hit by the invisible air......that's it!" said Devin. Devin flew up, away from Zachary and Greg. "Running away....?" asked Zachary. Zachary flew up after Devin. He circled around his opponent, until they were face to face. Devin backed up, positioned between both Greg and Zachary. "Flame Dragon!!" shouted Zachary, creating a blast of flames that looked like a dragon, launching it at Devin. "Razor Wind!!" shouted Greg, shooting a razor sharp gale of wind at Devin. Devin smirked. "Later!!" he said. He teleported at the instant the attacks collided, evading the assault. But, that wasn't all of Devin's plan. The fire was shooting towards Greg, and the razor sharp wind was billowing towards Zachary. They were hit with their comrades attacks, both falling to the ground. "Oxygen feeds fire, so it lead me to believe that oif both of your attacks collided, they would bypass each other, and hit the other person......" said devin. "An...interesting fact...." said Zachary. He and Greg both stood up, all of their wounds healed. But, Devin was ready. He charged them again, attacking them with all his might.

Bakura dodged Blade's slash, teleporting behind Blade. Bakura and Blade stood back-to-back. "It's futile". said Bakura, before Blade spun around, and tried to slash him. But, Bakura teleported again. "He's moving too fast to see...." said Blade. "Dark Chaos!!" shouted Bakura. A blast of dark energy slammed into Blade, knocking him on the gorund. Blade stood up, trying to see where the attack came from. Bakura teleported right in front of Blade. "Am I too fast for you?" he asked, with a smirk. "Hold still!!!!" shouted Blade, bringing his sword up. Bakura teleported right before the sword struck him. "Come now, Blade. That wouldn't be any fun...." he said, standing back-to-back again.

For now, Nina was at Alexis' mercy. Alexis was running and shooting her Light arrows with such precision and accuracy, that Nina couldn't pin-point where they came from. "Enough! Come fight me, face to face!!" shouted Nina. Alexis knocked an arrow, and pulled back as hard as she could. She launched the arrow, and jumped on it before it left the bowstring!! This launched herself and the arrow towards Nina. The arrow peirced Nina in the chest, and Alexis jumped off, flipping backwards. Alexis then slammed her feet into the arrow, making it sink deeper into Nina's skin. Alexis then clenched her hand into a fist, and socked Nina in the face. "That's for hurting my friend!!"

(I'm back!long posts@_@ give me a day to read up)

(Oh well.It's okay.We get this Fri. off and Spring Break is coming up shortley for us!I can't wait!I'm so excited!^^)(......WHOO HOO FOR THE STORY!Nice one Chance!^^)

Chance looked over at Alyssa and slid over.He looked down at her.
"You didn't have to do that...No matter what....We'll find a way to get you back and we won't make that dream come ture!I'll make sure of it!"Chance whispered a little loudly to her.He looked back up at the fight and zoomed out into his own world.He imagined everything that Zachary said would happen.Everything....

His thoughts(What Chance saw in his mind)-

Chance walked over to Alyssa and stared at her.
"What?"Alyssa asked inoccently.
"I don't want to talk to you anymore."Chance said.
"What?Why?"Alyssa asked sadly.
"You hurt my feelings many times and this time you went to far.Don't talk to me and just leave me alone...I hate you."Chance said turning to give her the cold shoulder and walking away.Alyssa attempted to say something but couldn't she turned and ran off crying.Two days later,John walked right passed her.Alyssa ran over to him.
"Hey,John."Alyssa said.
"Who are you again?"John asked.Alyssa was shocked.The next day,Alexis stole something from her and lied about it.Leaving her abonded.A month later Devin started abusing her as well as Nina and Bakura did.A few days after,Ryou walked up to her and looked her in the eyes.
"Yes?"Alyssa asked.
"I dispise you...Don't talk to me again...."Ryou said walking away.Alyssa huddled in her bedroom corner that night and cried.Two months later,after being alone and abused,Chance,Alexis,Devin,Ryou and John died in a car crash by a drunk driver.Two days later,After Alyssa cried herself to sleep for the last time,She walked into the bathroom and grabed a razor and cut herself and took a huge amount of pills.She wrote a note and left it on her bed then she jumped out of her 32 story balcony,alling and splting onto the ground.The wind blew the certians in her house and nothing was left of her.

"Chance!"John broke into his thoughts from the blank stare he was giving off.
"Oh.what?"Chance asked.
"We've been calling you for like two minutes now..."Devin said.
"Sorry...I was just thinking..."Chance said looking down at Alyssa.
"It's okay.They're all taken care of.See?"Alexis asked moving out of his way.All of them were lieing on the ground.
"That's awsome."Chance said.
"What's wrong?"John asked sitting down next to him.
"I just was thinking...A bad thought came to my mind.That's all."Chance said."Maybe we should let Alyssa be this time..."
"ARE YOU CRAZY?!"Alexis blurted out.
"No...I mean come on...Think about it...What they all said could be true and probley is..."Chance responded to Alexis.
"No....Her life will get better...I'll make sure of it.Rember when she was in the hospital for the longest time?We didn't give up hope!And when she was kidnapped by Bakura and Nina!We can do this!We WON'T let that future be succesful!We WILL win!"John said.
"I guess you're right.Then what are we gonna do about her?"Chance asked looking down at her.They all looked down at her as well.

"N-no....I'm not finished yet......" said dark. He slowly rose. They had all lost their 'immortality'. "Soul Sphere!!" shouted Dark. He absorbed the souls of his comrades, making himself into the giant being like the first time they all fought. "I'm not finished yet!! Right now, I'm sending the so-ordinates f this location to a sattelite above the Earth! The sattelite will launch a beam, and you will all die!!" laughed Dark. Dark teleported. Nin activated his Sharingan. "Oh no..." he said. "What is it?" asked Alexis. "He's attaching himself physically to the sattelite, so he has complete control!!" said Nin. "Yahahahaha! You can't stop me now! I'm invincible!!" Dark's voice all sounded in their minds. "Guys! I might be able to fly John into space to that space station, but someone will have to hold off the beam while we do it!" said Nin. "We'll all do it!! We can!!" said Blade. "Come on, John!! Let's go!!" said Nin. He grabbed John, and flew up into the air. They flew really fast, out of the atmosphere. John held his breath as they traveled through space to the space station.....

(((I know it's rushed. )))

(How is it rushed???Ah well.Lol!)
John got up and Chance covered him so he could breathe and they flew over to him.John floated over to him hitting him with all he had and Dark flew off fighting John back.Chance gained enough strength and fought as well.
"You're going down for hurting all my friends....And killing Alyssa!"Chance blurted out swinging at him along with John.
"Agreed!"John yelled.He yanked out his saber and swung at Dark as he doged every swing.Chance flew behind him as John swung again,missing and Chance stabed him in the back.
"Ah....How dare you?"Dark asked.
"Like this!"John replied stabing him in the back while he was occupied.
"That's it....I'm NOT gonna bow down to people like you,ANYMORE!"Dark yelled out turning around and stabing John in the shoulder.John screamed and looked at Dark who suwng at John again.He dodged every attack.
"Dark...After what you did...I am NOT going to let you get passed this.You will not win."John said.
"Oh but I will...."Dark replied skimly.
"NO YOU WON'T!"Chance yelled out attacking with all his might.John joined in and finally Dark collapsed.Chance grabed John and Dark and flew back to Earth and set John down and droped Dark to the ground.
"You guys okay?"Chance asked dizzy.
"Yeah.And you two?"Devin asked.
"Good."John said.
"What was that thought all about before when we were calling you?"Alexis asked.
"You really wanna know?"Chance asked.
"Yes...."everybody agreed.
"Okay..."Chance said.He explained everything well and what he saw and heard.
10 minutes passed and John looked down at Alyssa.
"Wow...I never knew that could happen...And that's what she saw...That's why she's not that close to us...'Cause she thinks she'll lose us one day and never see us again..."John said.
"Wow...That's so sad..."Devin said.
"I DON'T WANT ALYSSA TO DIE!"Alexis screamed.
"We'll get her back one way or another."John said.
"Then let's go!"Chance said picking up Alyssa and standing up.
"Yeah!"everyone agreed standing as well.

(I'm too busy to make long posts so...)
Zack said "where did that one guy go?don't let them get away!"

(YAH!I wanna know what happens next!AHHH!><)

(where is N?)

I dunno where Chance is...Ah well

Dark stirred behind them. "I'm nopt finished yet. One of you....will die....along with me!!" shoutedf Dark. "what?!" screamed everyone. Dark flew towards Nin, grabbing him in a hold that prevented either of them from moving. "Die, mortal scum!!!" shouted Dark. A small packet of energy appeared in Dark's chest, expanding. "Guys, get away, NOW!!!!" screamed Chance. Chance sent a wave of energy strong enough to push everyone back, but not hurt them. "DIE!!!!!! DEATH EXPLOSION!!!!" shouted Dark. The packet of energy exploded, enveloping Dark and Chance in the explosion.

( Woah..... NOW CHANCE IS DEAD,TOO!!!!!!!WAHHHH!!!!!!*Pouts*)

John gasped and launched at Chance who collapased to the ground.Dark fell not to far from him in a deep huff.Everyone knelled down and looked over him to see if he was really dead.He was.
"Now what are we going to do?"Alexis asked holding tears back."We've lost two of our members....Two of our good members and now they're not even unconcious or anything...They're...They're dead..."She started crying.Devin hugged her and rubbed her head as she cried in his chest.John was in shock and Ryou was about close to crying as anyone else was.
"Well....We better get 'em to the hospital before it's too late."Devin said picking Chance up.
"Yeah.It'd be better off."John said picking Alyssa up.They ran down the street and out of the vaccent lot where they were at.They ran down Lost Nation and up 273 St. and finally turned into the hospital parking lot.They ran inside with the two and walked up to the inormation desk and John told them what happened.The lady saw what happened and told them to sign and fill out some papers.He walked over and sat down filling them out.About ten minutes later he was done with each and he turned them in.The nurse called for Doctor Kevin and he rushed down immediatley.Chance and Alyssa were pulled in on strecthers and pulled into two different rooms right next to each other.John,Devin,Alexis and Ryou waitind outside in the waiting room for the longest time.This was the second time that John and Ryou had to do this.To wait like this.Alexis and Devin were somewhere else when Alyssa was last here.Chance was waitting as well but now he was in Alyssa's postion with her.Ryou was pacing back and forth,John was taping his feet like crazy,Alexis was bitting her nails and Devin was trying to read and watch t.v. to keep himself occupied.They were all scared for thier lives.It had been seven hours since the attacks on the two and seven hours and 48 minutes since they had been in the hospital waitting for the doctors to come out with results.Finally an elegant type women suposebly a nurse came out with something.
"Yes?"they all asked as she walked over.They were nervous beyond compare.
"Okay.Here's the news.The boy,Chance is it?He might be okay.We arn't completley sure yet.His heart started beating again and he's in a deep coma.The girl might not make it at all.We got her heart to beat and she's in a coma as well but her heart keep's going out on us every once in a while so we arn't sure about her either."she replied to the yeses and nevousy.
"Oh...Okay.."John said a little sadly.
"If you guys come back tomarrow then you might be able to see the boy.But you'll probley have to wait up on the girl.She's in critical conditon."she said.
"Okay.Devin said sitting down.
"Thanks."Alexis said and the nurse nodded and walked away.
"You guys can go on if ya want.I'm just gonna stay here until they let me in."John said.
"Okay but...You need some rest.After the fighting and then having to go throuugh this is a lot.Please come with us.They arn't leaving anytime soon."Devin said putting a hand on his shoulder.
"Yeah.Tonight....Tonight we'll tey to do something fun and get your mind off of them and so you can have a good time."Alexis said wiping a tear away.
"Yeah.We're like...100 miles from home and close to an amusement park.We have to go home."Ryou said knelling down in front of him.The nurse came out again.
"I've been informed that we will be moving the girl and boy over to Lake West over by where you live."she said.They all nodded and she walked away.
"Ya see?They're moving them closer so will you please come on?"Devin asked.
"Fine..."John said getting up.They all got in the car and drove home.It was espcilly quite withought Chance and Alyssa.Chance was always singing to his music and Alyssa was singing to the radio and would randomly say things and get into arguments and converstaions.The John looked at the clock and it read 11:38 p.m.They finally got into town at 12:09 a.m. and they headed for thier apartments.He parked and they all piled out and walked up to thier rooms.They said goodnight and walked inside.John went to his balcony and watched the waves.Or what he could see of them.He sighed and looked down and thought of what Chance had told them about his thoughts.He shook his head trying to get it out of his head and he walked back inside and laid on his bed quickly falling asleep.

Chance was asleep on the hospital bed. The doctors would be coming to move him soon, but he didn't know that. He was deep inside his own thoughts.

"So, this is what Alyssa felt like last time, eh?" he said into the endless void that was his mind. "No matter how hard I try, I can't get out of this coma! I'm not gonna let a coma keep me incapacitated while Dark could be out there somewhere......" said Nin. "Why would....I be out there when I'm in here?" asked Dark, appearing out of the shadows (which was practically everywhere in his mind). "What are you doing here?" asked Nin. "Whenever I exploded, it caused you to die. With no soul to defend your heart, as for a split second your soul left the body, I entered it. You cannot purge me this time. I will be here forever!" laughed Dark. "Get. Out. Of. My. Body!" said Nin through clenched teeth. "No." Dark responded. "Well, die!! Kamehameha!!" shouted Nin, blasting the energy at Dark. Dark dodged, it hitting the wall behind him. "No.....I can't be destroyed!!" said Dark. His body began cracking like the wall. "So......Dark put me in this coma, so if I destroy the coma, I destroy Dark!! Kamehameha!!!" shouted Nin again. The blast slammed into the wall, cracking it, and eventually breaking it. It shattered into a million peices, and Dark did too. "I did it...." said Nin.

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"I did....it....I....huh?" he said weakly. He felt as if he'd woken up from a dream. "Where....ouch!!" he said, clutching his side. Stitches again. Joy.

The next day came and they were in thier own hospital nearer thier apartments.It was about 12:07 p.m. and John walked in and figured out from a doctor where Chance was at.He walked down a hallway and into an elevator.He went up to the fifth floor and walked out automaticly finding his room.He walked in silently and looked down at him.
"Chance?"John asked silently.
"Hey."Chance said in a quite voice.He weakly stirred and tried to get up but couldn't because of the stitches."H-How's Alyssa?"he managed to ask.
"I don't know.I haven't checked yet.Last night they said they wern't completly sure about her last night."John said to him.
"Oh.I hope she's okay.I was stuck in my mind like she was.It's not fun."Chance said looking up at him.
"So do I.I hope she's okay.I've never been there."John said.
"It's not fun."Chance said."he's probley there again now.But...Don't worry about me.Go check up on her."Chance said.
"But.."John started."I don't even know if I'm allowed.How her conditions are...."
"It's okay.If you can't see her...Then you can come back."Chance said."I'll tell the nurse to always let you in.Along with Devin,Alexis and Ryou."
"Okay.I'll be back in a few minutes.I doubt they'll let me see her in her condition."John said.
"Okay..."Chance said watching John walk out of the room and down the hallway.

how are you doing,chance?
Zack asked.
okay..where did those people get off to?

"Who the....?" said Chance, as zack walked in. Looking , Chance continued to stare. The others walked in, John, Alexis, Devin, Blade, and Ryou. "We brought you some Naruto DVD's!" said Alexis. "Put 'em in!! Put 'em in!! OUCH!!!" screamed Chance, clutching his side. "Ow, stitches aren't fun...." he grumbled.

Alexis tried reaching up to the t.v. but was too short and couldn't reach them.So John took them and out them in for her and they started watching them until just about everybody fell asleep.It was a long day.For everyone.Chance looked around at everyone sleeping and started to get sleepy himself until a nurse came in.
"Knock knock!"she said with a cheerful dispostion."Time for your blood test!"John woke up noticing what was going on.
"Do you need us to leave?"John asked.
"Yes.But only for a few minutes.Then you can stay until 7:00.It was already 6:00.(P.M.)They all nodded and walked out for a split second.

Alyssa started dying and the doctors rushed in and ran past Chances room.
"Oh no..It's Alyssa.Go!"Chance said.John got up and ran after her.
"What's wrong?"John asked.
"She's dying."the doctor said running with John next to him.Alyssa moaned in pain and sttiered a little bit and lost conciousness.Not that she was out of it but her hand that was tightly squeezed on her blanket let loose and fell to her bedside and the meter started making the long beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep sound.
"WE GOTTA HURRY!"another doctor yelled as they ran.John stoped and watched them as they ran into the emergency room.He sighed and walked back to Chances room and told them what happened.He was pacing back and forth worried sick.
"This isn't the first time this has happened.What if she really did die?"Devin asked.
"Don't talk like that!"John whiped around.
"Sorry."he said.Alexis was almost in tears about what had happened.Ryou hugged her and Chance breathed in a deep breath.He looked at the doorway wanting to see Alyssa be rolled back in.Nothing happened yet.It's probley be another 10 20 minutes before they knew if she was okay completley.Time passed so slowly in those 10 minutes.No one passed except other patients and nurses and a few doctors.They were so nercous.Chance finally started rocking side to side.He was the most scared.He started to breath scarecely but gained it quickley back.

"Alyssa......" said Nin. Suddenly, he wavered, his head falling back against his pillow, eyes closed.

"Oh no, I'm here again....and I'm really alone this time!! Darn it..." said Alyssa, smashing her fist on the ground. Her hand started fading away. "Wha....? Oh no, I'm....it's just like last time when I was dying...." said Alyssa. Her arm started fading away. "Help!! I'm slipping away!! Someone, please!!" said Alyssa. A light started shining behind her in the eternal darkness. "Alyssa?" asked the light. "Who....who are you?" asked Alyssa. The light materialized in human form, Nin. All bandaged up, and bruised, Nin extended his hand. Alyssa extended her hand that hadn't disappeared, and was lifted on her feet. "I had a feeling you were trapped here, so I used the Soul Transfer Jutsu. But I only have a short time here, so I have to get you out of here now...." said Nin. Alyssa shook her head. "No, I wanna break out of this on my own. Let me do it....." she said. Nin stared a minute, then took a step back. Alyssa put her hands together. "Let's see, if you go......Ka.....Me....Ha....Me..." said Alyssa. "Ha....?" she said, extending her hands. Nothing happened. "Your doing it wrong. Put your hands more like this.....feel the flow of energy as it concentrates into your hands....try it now..." said Nin. Alyssa took a deep breath. She put her hands the right way. "Ka....Me....Ha......Me....." she said. A blue orb of energy appeared in her hands. She lingered there for a moment, then extended her hands. "HA!!!!" she shouted. The blue blast obliterated the dark wall seperating Alyssa from her friends....


"We've got her.....she's back..." Alyssa heard someone say. Alyssa opened her eyes weakly. She was burning up with a fever, and she felt it. "Where...?" was all she got out, before a nurse placed her hand gently on her forehead. "It's alright, sweetheart. You just rest now. Everything's gonna be...." but Alyssa was already asleep, calmed by the soothing voice of the nurse.

Zack waited in the waiting room and said "I hate waiting rooms>_<"
so he went to see how Alyssa was doing.
"what just happened?"he asked.

(((Um....they can't see Alyssa. She's in ICU. She's in critical condition, so she's not in a room....)))